8 – 6：WRITING ABOUT YOUR LIFESTYLE

题目

Write a paragraph describing your lifestyle. How much  stress do you experience? How is your social life? Do you like your life? Use  different sentence lengths and different kinds of sentences to make your  writing more interesting. Write 150-200 words.

老师留言

Your writing is well structured and easy to read.  e.g.,"...Many of my friends and I have chosen the hard life since June  1989, crying for democracy and freedom in our motherland and fighting for  human rights in China.." Your choice and use of vocabulary was very  appropriate for this topic. e.g.,"....Our parents get old or have passed  away, leaving us no opportunity to pay them back for their loves..."

Without divine knowledge, we know that our God awards us  only one life apiece. Jesus Christ tells us he is the road, truth and life.  To a well-fed intellect, one must make the difficult decision during his  prime lifetime: whether to pick an easy way to enjoy worldly happiness or to  choose a hard way to pursue the truth in Jesus Christ. Many of my friends and  I have chosen the hard life since June 1989, crying for democracy and freedom  in our motherland and fighting for human rights in China. We are mentally  strong, prepared for various kinds of adversities such as pressed and  depressed daily life, incarceration, accusation, imprisonment and even  tortures. Now, many of us are experiencing mid-life crisis. Our parents get  old or have passed away, leaving us no opportunity to pay them back for their  loves. Kids have grown up in broken families without fatherly caring. We are  jobless, but we have endless job to do. Always working overtime, we don’t  have enough income for our shaking family. Do we have a failure life? Many  people, including our family members think so. Do we regret? Nobody! Many of  us now have baptized into Christian. We do believe in God, who are watching  us and will reward us a splendid spiritual life and never-ending happiness.

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