【每日英语】改善choppy sentence

改善choppy sentence（太多短句）

例子：

原文：
My family left our homeland. Then we lived in a refugee camp. Then we got our documents. Then we traveled to Canada. And we live there now.
可以看出，原文有很多短句，很零碎，不适合作为书面用语。

改善后：
After my family left our homeland, we lived in a refugee camp for several months. As soon as we got our documents, we traveled to Canada, where we live now.

改善步骤

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练习：

We must find new sources of energy. Natural sources of energy are decreasing. Solar energy is a promising new source of energy. Solar energy is energy from the sun.

答案：
We must find new sources of energy because natural sources of energy are dwindling. Solar energy, which is energy from the sun, is a promising new source.

参考资料：

1. Alice Oshima, Ann Hogue. Writing Academic English (4th ed.). 2006.