「翻译专题|比赛」-试译卢前《本事》

本事

卢前

记得当时年纪小，

我爱谈天你爱笑。

有一回并肩坐在桃树下，

风在林梢鸟在叫。

我们不知怎样困觉了，

梦里花儿知多少。

quondam things

Remember the days when we were young

I talk stuff you enjoy fun

Once under a peach we stayed along

Wind blowing over trees,birds singing song

We have no aware of the sleepiness becomes strong

Then dreaming of flowers float and drift down

还是希望指正,后面就没用过去式，破坏气氛不说，重要的是用不好，就这样。