2018-04-14

Topic:
A huge amount of money goes towards children's education. In some countries, the government pay some or all costs. Do the advantage overweigh the disadvantages???

In an era of knowledge-based economy,在知识经济时代, education for all is a valued concept. The impact of government funding on children's education have aroused widespread controversy.
From my perspective, the benefits of this moves overshadow its perceived drawbacks.

For one thing, ……incur an enormous financial burden for government. In other words, ……
For another, sb take advantages of this policy. To be specific, people who are not morally aware may take it for granted, thus failing to play their roles in parenting.
Nevertheless, government's engagement in children's education bring more profoundly positive impact. First and foremost, providing education regardless of their family background can effectively foster educational equality.
For instance, in many undeveloped areas, a large number of parents have to work overtime in order to pay mounting
bills. In this regard, if govern …… , this will be a blessing for families who are economically disadvantaged. Moreover, under no circumstance should authorities neglect children's education.

In conclusion, it should be borne in mind that educating next generation is a shared obligation for government as well as individuals.
应该牢记，教育下一代是政府和个人共同的义务。

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overshadow 遮阴，使失色
the foundation of all education and lifelong learning终身学习
Education For All 全民教育
perceive 理解; 意识到
take up 占用; 开始从事; 接受
I'm sorry I've already taken up so much of your valuable time.
I hope that they take up this challenge.

incur [ɪnˈkɜ:(r)] 遭受; 招致，引起 damages debts
in other words 换句话说;
in a word 总之, 简言之
accountable 有责任的
to be specific 具体说来; 具体地说; 具体来说

ethic [ˈeθɪk] 伦理,道德体系
race ethnic 种族

In this regard在这点上

Therefore要加逗号，后面跟句子（注意是句子）；
Thus不一定要加逗号，后面不一定跟句子。
Air carry the virus to everywhere,thus causing the explosion of the disease.
Air carry the virus to everywhere.Thus,it causes the explosion of the disease.

overall 全部的; 全体的;