How to make a difference to the last jedi story（spoiler alert）

I have some ideas to make a difference to the last jedi story by only re-editing the clips and some easy reshoots.

1.The chased rebellion crew evacuated in batches and some of them even gave in to the chaser First Order Army. To deceive the enemy, Holdo hid the plan from Poe and let Rose absent from her post, stopping deserters, so that there was a convincing story how some people could flee. Poe did not know this until Leia about to evacuate in the last few batches, bigger size compared to the prior batches and the First Order finally realized this, finding out that Rose Fin infirration plan only disattraction.

2. Luke hacked the connection created by Snoke between Rey and Kylo and utilized it to deceive both Snoke and Kylo by creating, Luke and Rey, two force hologram phantom. The confrontations, Kylo vs Luke and Snoke vs Rey happened at about the same time. Kylo realized Luke was hologram when Snoke started to use force to torture Rey, coz Luke could not use force to battle two at the same time. Kylo thought the real Luke maybe fighting Snoke, so he hurried back and utilized the opportunity to hit Snoke. That was why Snoke could not realize the light saber moving. He was trapped in the illusion incepted by Luke. Then Rey sensed Kylo in danger fighting red Guardians and hurried back to fight with him.

3. After defeating the red Guardian, Rey thought she could change Kylo but Kylo turned to the dark side. When they were using the force to reach out for the same blue light saber, the ship exploded and seriously injured Kylo’s face. His damaged face turned out to be similar to the Snoke’s and he became the new dark lord or maybe he put on some mask again. A scene to show respect to the Vader Transformation. LOL

Comment on the solution

1. This tries to provide a good reason why Holdo kept the evacuation plan from Poe (coz evacuation in small units throughout the chase) and makes the evacuation plan more convincing (smaller units makes the main fleet the primary chasing target and creates a better chance for successful evacuation). Though I really do not like the Finn and Rose storyline, keeping it can misdirect the audience and make the evacuation plan more strategic when it is finally uncovered by the villain and audience. BTW, I do not think the original movie evacuation would work and I do not like the idea suicide attack. Rose and Finn line tries to be SJW and suicide attack in the movie contradicts the prior SJW. What good ppl should is to battle like batman using brain, intelligence and tactics rather than the last resort of a desperate outlaw, especially for the rebellions who have been label themselves hope.

2. This tries to tackle two issues 1. how Snoke could have been hit when he was reading Kylo’s mind; 2. how Kylo failed to recognize the light saber of the hologram Luke was the exact one he and Rey just torn apart. This movie tries to introduce something new about force, the telecommunications and creating remote hologram, though I do not like these. Then why not utilize these concepts more than one time in the movie ? You see Luke can create a hologram to trick an army, why not he also tricks Snoke’s mind and we know he knows Rey and Kylo are connected. This would have made Snoke a villain defeated by his over confidence in his trick rather than a joke.

3. This tries to establish a more powerful villain in the next sequel. I really don’t like Kylo remains a mentally unstable young adult in the movie and there should have been some trancendence in an unmature villain to a super villain. I mean he should not just make himself fearful by physically choking others and simply lying Rey killed Snoke, which tells his future subordinate she is more powerful than him. Instead, he should commit he killed Snoke and wiped out the red guardians, a piece of cake and he let Rey go coz he had the confidence to control or defeat her. Also, the scary twisted face would make him even more shocking mentally. That was how a lengendary villain should have been and why he could be so powerful to rule so many First Order troops and build a new empire.