声明
因为英语不好而丢了脸（详情请看我2月15日的文章《关于英文写作刻意练习》）
所以本文是练习英语用的
故此文中含有许多错误
欢迎朋友们指正，不甚感谢…
上一篇文章A Good Boy存在的问题，感谢我的表弟崔成老师（英语专业八级）指出：
一、错误
原句：Li Ping got up at 6:00 a.m. in the morning
修正：Li Ping got up at 6:00
原因：a.m. in the morning 重复
原句：I didn't play football for a long time
修正：I haven’t played football for a long time
原因：用完成时态更好
原句：let have fun
修正：let's have fun
原因：笔误
原句：the more friends he play football with
修正：the more friends he plays football with
原因：第三人称单数+s
原句：that's amazing !
修正：that was amazing !
原因：过去时态
原句：Potter and his brother, Dan, Tom, Mark and Bill was all be there
修正：Potter and his brother, Dan, Tom, Mark and Bill were all be there
原因：复数
原句：they all went to home
修正：they all went home
原因：固定短语 go home，而不是 go to home
原句：it was 12:00o’clock
修正：it was twelve/12 o’clock 或者 it was 12:00
原因：:00=o'clock所以写成 twelve/12 o'clock 或者直接 12:00
原句：When she saw the foods and soups on the table
修正：When she saw the food and soup on the table
原因：food 和 soup 不可数
原句：Li Ping also cooked the lunch
修正：Li Ping also cooked lunch/Li Ping also cooked the meals
原因：cook lunch/ breakfast/ dinner 不加定冠词 the，可以说 cook the meals
二、建议
标点符号的使用要注意，一句话写完就句号，否则用连词连接两个句子，或者是套从句。
今日练习：看图作文（请原谅这诡异的画风，我选资料时没有注意。）
A Near Neighbor is Better Than a Distant Cousin
Last night, Jim was sleepy, so he went to bed early.He was reading for a while, very soon, he fell asleep and he was having a sweet dream.
Suddenly, the telephone rang, Jim was woken up by the call.It was Grandpa Wang, he told Jim that he was ill, he asked Jim for help.
Jim is a kind boy, although he was sleepy and it was cold outside, he promised to helpGrandpa Wangwithout hesitation.So Jim put on his clothes quickly and ran to the hospital as fast as he can.
On the way to the hospital, it was bloody cold, Jim almost caught cold.Ten minutes later, he arrived the hospital and he asked for the doctor.
Jim told the doctor thatGrandpa Wang's illness, thenthe doctorcame toGrandpa Wang's home at once.
First of all,the doctor tookGrandpa Wang's temperature.Secondly, he gaveGrandpa Wang a kind of medicine to eat.Finally, the doctor gaveGrandpa Wang a shot.
After the doctor's treatment,Grandpa Wang was a lot better.Jim andGrandpa Wang thanked the doctor very much for his help.
After the doctor left away, Jim stayed to take care ofGrandpa Wang.What a kind boy ! Just as the saying goes:"A near neighbor is better than a distant cousin."
中文：
远亲不如近邻
昨晚，Jim很困，所以他早早上床了。他读了一会儿书，没多久就闭上眼睛进入了梦乡。
突然，电话铃响了，Jim被闹醒。原来是王爷爷打来的电话，他说他病了，希望Jim能帮助他。
Jim是一个心地善良的男孩，尽管他很困，外面又很冷，他还是不假思索的答应了王爷爷的求助。所以Jim飞快地穿上衣服，并用最快的速度跑向医院。
在去医院的路上，简直冷爆了，Jim差点儿就着凉了。10分钟后，他来到医院并找到医生。
Jim告诉医生王爷爷的病情，然后医生就立刻来到了王爷爷的家中。
首先，医生量了王爷爷的体温。然后，他给王爷爷吃了一种药。最后，医生给王爷爷打了一针。
经过医生的治疗，王爷爷的病情得到了好转，Jim和王爷爷非常感谢医生的帮助。
医生离开后，Jim留了下来照顾王爷爷。多么善良的男孩啊！就像那句老话说的那样：“远亲不如近邻”。