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双重否定表肯定，被动表达：

This picture reveals a not-uncommon phenomenon of how elders are treated by their grownn-up children in some of the families in china.

 

 

This picture reveals a not-uncommon phenomenon

/of how elders are treated by their grownn-up children

/in some of the families in china.

 

现象首句：

not-uncommon &commmon

老年人：the old;the eldersm,senior,

其他亮点:

主系表结构。

2.三大从句。

3形式主语

4.形式宾语

5.强调句子

6.被动

7.否定。

 

总体描述：

//首句

As is illustrated/depicted/conveyed/revealed/show in the picture.

//表述内容：

//描述性

//主语，多动作，空间位置，名称或位置 联系统一到另一个对象

Hoding a gun and hiding in the bush,a brid is starting at the sky where humanbeings are flying.

//对比性：

//字数句:

Simple as it is,the drawing renders us pondering awefully.

//提出总结观点：

Accordingly,What this far-reaching picture depicts  reflects a

common phenomenon in today’s society:

xxxx,ought to be weighed/conscientiously.

 

//第二段：

  why  do we lay emphasic on this server points?

 

//连接词：

for one thing ,… for another …

on the one hand,on the other hand;

 

For on thing,//万能原因句子：

No better illustrtionn of this  idea touched on above can be

maintained/taken/weighed than the case as listed below.

 

xxxx

consequently,According/on balance/therefore/it follows that,

no issue in china is as basic to build.