不一定每篇作文内容都是完整的,有的只有主体段。
未完待续
利弊分析类与双边讨论类(矛盾双方),都有正反面。
开头段:
引出话题、摆明矛盾问题、明确立场。
主体段(正面):
主旨句+理由1+解释理由1+举例子+(局部总结)+理由2+适当简单解释理由2。
主体段(反面):
主旨句+理由1+解释理由1+(举例子)+(局部总结)+理由2+适当简单解释理由2。
结尾段:
综述上文,重申观点,可能展望未来。
同意与否/观点
开头段:
(引出话题)Currently,no one dares to deny that the issue of … has become a focus of public attention over the past years.
(明确立场,有正有反)My perspective is that(正面观点) …though(反面观点,[批判思维/让步]开始)…
(过渡下文)The following essay will elaborate more about the relevant details.
例文:
Currently,no one dares to deny that the issue of
whether the non-academic art or athletics subjects are less useful than academic ones has become a focus of public attention over the past years
.My perspective is that
student’s all-round development is the only correct direction of education though
there is the reality of passing examinations and graduation.
主体段1:
(主旨句,不可否认,确实有好处,不能包括极端词)It is undeniable that …(理由/论据用来支持自己的观点) could deliver positive consequences.(准备分析解释)To start with,(理由1)…Another benefit is that(理由2),(举例子)For example/instance …
主体段2:
(让步段,转折,主旨句,但并不是[最好的/最重要的/最合理的],反驳极端词,有[比这个更好/更重要的/不足/例外])Nevertheless, there is no justification for regarding it as the most effective way,partly because(理由1)…Furthermore,(理由2)…
结尾段:
未完待续
(老师修改过)
Currently, no one dares to deny that the issue of whether the development of global companies is more advantageous for everyone has become a focus of public attention over the past years.My perspective is that only some relevant people are benefited by the international corporations though there are lots of advantages about it.The following essay will elaborate more about the relevant details.
It is undeniable that the increasing numbers of multinational companies make plenty of benefits to someone could deliver positive consequences.To start with, according to the global economical system, it is beneficial for business men to develop their global companies, which means they can make more and more money because the cost is pretty low in some areas all over the world.Another benefit is that those firms can produce so many work opportunities for natives.For example,Apple which is the largest and most successful electronic device company spread their branches in China, then there were a large number of Chinese workers are hired by Apple factories in China.
Nevertheless, there is no justification for regarding it as the most effective way, partly because local companies are suffocated by foreign companies because the global companies have more power and ability to control the market easily. Furthermore, not everyone really concern about how bad the business environment is, some individuals who are not in charge of the commercial things or irrelevant employees just do not care about what happens.
Based on the argumentation above,I would like to once again make my point clear that some bosses or commercial leaders or relevant employees should put their concentration on those multinational companies, others should have the awareness of what is the most effective way to improve their life quality to be a better place.
正面论据理由:
A.当地环境好,当地人受益最大。The local people can benefit the most from it.所以会有很大的热情enthusiasm和积极性去做环境的保护。This local area and neighborhood is/are my home.
B.因为是自己努力创造的良好环境,当地人会用心维护这良好的环境状态endeavor to [maintain/keep it tidy]。
C.环境问题很可能是当地人在生产和发展和追求利益的过程中破坏的ruin the environment while going after benefits/profits.For example,制造业manufacturing会有废水废物的排放discharge the waste,which has poisoned the water source in some local areas。
让步论据和理由:
政府也不能完全不管,不能完全推给当地。Of course,政府有义务指导和帮助当地人保护环境,因为the government generally has more resources and funds to help and regulate.再反驳,Nevertheless,政府不必过多干预当地的环境治理,还是要让当地人自己主动保护和治理环境,政府可以适当给予一些资金和指导就可以。
教育
In China,a great number of advanced professional personnel are needed.
Therefore,cooperative education that combines classroom studies with practical work experience is more necessary.
Schools should teach children academic subjects,which will be useful in their future careers.Subjects such as music and sports are not useful.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Agree:
Disagree:
开头段:
Currently,no one dares to deny that the issue of social media is bringing us advantages or disadvantages has been the public focus over the past years.I,personally,hold the firm belief that the pros outnumber their counterparts.The former are shown in making global friends easily and the sending of messages instantly,while the latter include being cheated and waste of precious time.(I willl show you the relevant details in the following part of the essay.)
主体段:
Music and sports help to produce better students because it is useful to allow teenagers to develop teenagers to develop a variety of ways which prevent them from becoming a nerd if teachers only teach them academic subjects which will be useful in their future careers and that could be boring all the time,those individuals are not machine.For instance,students may gain a great deal of knowledge in school and then students can consider by themselves which way is the most appropriate for them in the near future,whose process makes them think by their independent minds.
Of course,learning useful academic subjects could be helpful and useful in the career which makes people more competitive.However,teenagers could not have the enough judgement to choose the right thing,and they still need help from parents and teachers.If students acquire diversity information when they are still children or teenagers,it could be better choice to make them more and more excellent.
Agree:
to avoid such phenomenon of falling in love at an early age,with more concentration on their study.
more conveninet to make the curriculum according to a certain gender group’s needs.
Disagree:
It will be easier to administrate the class and even the whole campus if there is mixed gender at school,especially at boys’ school.
More chances for students to communicate with the opposite gender group.
It will be more fun in extracurricular activities.
Having opposite sex aside,some will be more hardworking in their study.
Single-sex high schools help to produce better students becuase there are fewer distractions in these kinds of schools than in co-educational schools.
Nowadays,students are learning more than ever before,and while they are trying to understand all this new knowledge,they do not need distractions.
If boys and girls are studying together,they may become more focused on each other and not concentrate on the lesson.
For example,a male student might be more interested in impressing a female peer than listening to the teacher;similarly,female students might get into arguments over popular boys,or spend their time discussing the boys in their class instead of listening to the teacher.
If high schools are single sex,these kinds of distractions can be reduced.
Some people believe that some internet websites should be restricted to prevent people from accessing sex or violent sites.To what extent do you agree with this opinion?
主体段1
`there is no denying that` violence can be dangerous to the audiences,especially the children,because it is easier for them to be influenced and to imitate what they see without much thinking.So it is necessary for the government to pass some regulations to prevent the violent contents online.`Of course`(让步转折开始),we also need to say that letting children know the existence of violence can work as the precaution to protect them.`However`(让步之后再反驳,说明依然坚定自己开头的想法),unlimited access to such things will lead to horrible consequence out of control,There must be safer and wiser ways of knowing their existence,such as by proper education from either parents or school teachers.
自己的想法+让步+反驳,回到自己开始的想法。
主体段2
In the second place,it is also apparent that these contents of violence online will lead to the psychological issues among the under-aged groups,most of whom tend to be timid generally,and these will cast a shadow on their psychology.They,then in chain reaction ,may become scared of communicating with others around,which may cause even more problems in circulation.For instance(2个论据中至少有1个论据是带例子),some children(非特指第三人称),after watching some online films or news reports of violence cases happening at school, will refuse to go to their primary school where it is perfectly safe actually.In fact,these psychological burdens accompany them for an extended period of time,even the whole life, which requires our awareness.
双边讨论
As a valid argument held by me,firstly,it is indisputable that… + 一个初步的理由+1-2句进一步分析论证,可以使用if,because,so,which,that,although,while等等方法。For example(第一论据),… in addition,第二论据,这样就是略写。
(讨论类可以有让步:Of course,we also need to say that … + 从反面多元化地论证一句就可以,再加上一个反驳回来的句子:However,…这里的句子,让你又回到开头正面论证)
For the statement on the opposite side of the dispute,I deem it rational since …(这里分析另一个说法的合理性),后面再加解释延展论证,
还是可以用到because,if,so,as a result,when,which,that等等方法来分析解释。 For instance,…moreover此段第二个论据的开始,前面论据详写,后面略写。
开头段:
Nowadays,more and more teenagers are using cell phones,and cell phone sales to young people have greatly increased.(引出话题)There is some debate about whether(宾语从句) cellphones are dangerous for teenagers.Some people believe they add to teenagers’ social problems while others feel they make their lives safer and more conveninet.摆明矛盾问题(开头没有明确观点,所以没有第三层次,后面过度给省略了,因为前面的文字很多了已经)
主体段1:
(主题句)Mobile phones can have some serious social risks.Some teenagers have become the target for cell phone bullying,and this can be very unpleasant and even lead to suicide in extreme cases.In addition,cell phone photos can be a problem.If teenagers use their phones to take inappropriate photos,these could be posted onto the internet and could cause serious problems.(两个论据,基本没有分出主次)
主体段2:
However,cell phones can also make teenagers’s lives safer because they allow them to be in contact with their parents or the police in an emergency.Parents can also check on their teenagers and find out where they are and what they are doing.For example,if a teenager has been drinking alcohol at a party,he or she can use his/her cell phone to call his/her parents or a taxi and get home safely.Similarly,teenagers can call for help if they feel threatened while they are away from home.In addition,mobile phones can help teenagers to get directions if they get lost while traveling to their destination.(此段落两个论据明显区分了主次,而且论证方法更为多样)
结尾段:
In conclusion,cell phones can be a risk for teenagers,but they also increase safety.这里明确了观点.Teenagers need to be …
开头段:
(引出话题)The necessity of focusing on history-learning or other courses more related to the daily life has been what the public concentrate on for the past years.(摆明矛盾)Some as supporters of gaining lessons from history would stress its importance,while others claim those which could be more practical in smoothing life are more crucial to take.
(I will present the detailed discussion over both views in the following part of the essay.)
开头段:
Currently,no one dares to deny that the issue of …
has been the public focus over the past years.
I,personally,hold the firm belief that [the pros outnumber their counterparts(利大于弊)./the cons outnumber their counterparts(弊大于利)]
.The former(前者) are shown in … while the latter(后者) include …(利弊各主论据浓缩一下写在后面,用短语就可以,不要用句子。)
I will show you the relevant details in the following part of the essay.
Currently,no one dares to deny that the issue of social media is bringing us advantages or disadvantages has been the public focus over the past years.I,personally,hold the firm belief that the pros outnumber their counterparts.The former are shown in making global friends easily and the sending of messages instantly,while the latter include being cheated and waste of precious time.(I willl show you the relevant details in the following part of the essay.)
主体段1(“利”)
on the one hand,many benefits can be found regarding(总体句开始)…firstly,(论据1开始,详写)…and it is because(论据1解释开始)…for instance,(论据1例子开始)…in addition,(论据2开始,略写)…
主题段2(“弊”)
however,the draybacks brought by it should never be forgot,either .(总体句开始)…in the first place,(论据1开始,详写)…if(论据1解释开始)…for example,(论据1例子开始)… besides,(论据2开始,略写)…
Benefits(一般2-3个左右,这些是论据):
Benefits:
Drawbacks:
主体段1(“利”):
(总体句开始)On the one hand,many benefits can be found regarding surfing the internet with no limit of time and place
.Firstly
,(论据1开始,详写)(论据1初步分析开始)it brings much convenience to the users.Because of
(论据1解释开始)the small size of mobile devices,it is protable and easy to be operated while surfing online.For example
,(论据1例子开始)everyone with a smart phone having the fuction of browsing web pages can access any online information almost anywhere,such as on the bus,in the metro or a walking street,anytime,which
is hard to be realized by a traditional laptop or desktop computer.In addition
, (论据2开始,略写)it could help keep users updated with what is happening in the city,in the country or even around the globe.If
(论据2解释开始) they want to check some data or information,they can do it without starting the computer.This is easier and will save them much time.
主体段2(“弊”):
(总体句开始)However,the drawbacks brought by it should never be forgot,either.To begin with
,(论据1开始,详写)(论据1初步分析开始)users’ privacy may be leaked due to the spy program or hacker skills.If
(论据1解释开始)one can go online anywhere anytime,it means the information in his/her phone is exposed to other users with electronic techniques who can use the professional knowledge to hack the phone or pad to steal the information secretly.For example
,(论据1例子开始)while shopping,some can link up to the wifi in the shopping mall,which may be dangerous to them because the free internet service there can be a trap.So
,(论据1局部总结句开始)it could be dangerous for such users to be linked to the internet in any place.`Besides,(论据2开始,略写)…
开头段:
(题目的改写)Nowadays,hardly could anyone(倒装) say that … has never been heard of.
(引出下文)The related causes and how to cope with it/the effects it has brought could be found in the following paragraphs of the essay.
开头段第一句次可以跟下面这句话替换。
Currently,no one dares to deny that the issue of … has been the public focus over the past years.
主体段1(2个原因):
For the reasons that have caused this,the first one is … +解释分析论证,
The second reason to explain it is due to … + 解释分析论证。
省略号之后,要延展解释2-3句,比如:if,because,although,compared with,so,这些方法,还有举例子For example在原因段。
主体段2(2个解决方案/影响):
The related solutions/effects are as follows.In order to deal with it,people,first of all,should/假如问道了影响。
The effect brought by it include firstly … + 适当的解释分析论证。
The next measure is about …/There is one more effect which is … + 适当解释分析论证。
解决方案段字数肯定比原因段字数少,并且解决方案段里不需要例子。
结尾段:
总之,这个问题在短时间内不太可能被解决,随着这些措施被采取,未来还是在很大程度上能解决的。
We are no longer free to depend on a single occupation,fewer people wish to work the same job day in and day out.Young workers are generally attracted by high salary and self-improvement in new job opportunities.Further,many enterprises have been experienced economic downturn,thus carrer-changing is sometimes inevitable.
Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed.
However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments.
Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
changing their jobs or career every few years
.What do you think are the reason
?Do you think the advantages
outweigh the disadvantages
?主体段2:
On the one hand,many benefits can be found regarding replacing occupation regularly by the young .
Firstly,it allows the young to try errors as soon as possible.Because a large number of individuals have totally no ideas about whether the current job is suitable perfectly.
For example,Someone had graduated from the university and he/she really wanted to find a job relate to their own majors,some students of Computer Science really want to have a job in international companies such as Apple、Facebook、Google.
They worked on that way and gained a job luckily ,but a few days later they found that they do not enjoy the job,then they choose to quit the job,so they have a change to find their appropriate job.
In addition, it could keep young people brave and independent with what is happening in the office or deal with their colleages.
If they get angry when they think they are being treated disrespectfully or unfair,then they may not tolerate that and fire the boss.
It is beneficial to acquire a better place where people can work harmoniously.
主体段3:
However,the drawbacks brought by it should never be forgot,either.
In the first place,People who change the job or career frequently cannot find their next job easily.
If someone did that, it means reduceing their loyalty in the, then they will have some troubles possibly.
For example someone quits the job immediately because she/he cannot tolerate the unfair stuff or something like that, so his/her resume will be rejected by the next interviewer by the faithfulness,it seems like their work experience is unstable.
So the hireling should keep staying in a same company as long as they can.Besides,there is an important harmful behavior in the office which is heart of glass.
It means people who cannot endure the disadvantageous things in the work area is weak and do not have the ability to survive alone,especially for those who live in the mega city ,and it is harmful to self-growth.
Study/Work
考官会先问你是在上学还是在工作,从而选择不同的方向去向下延展。
Do you work or are you a student?
-I’m graduate and I’d like to further my education life overseas.
What do you do?
Why did you choose to do that type of work?
Do you like your job?
Is it very interesting?
(Possibly) Do you miss being a student?
What subjects are you studying?/What’s your major?
-A majority of my peers may think that science subjects like maths,physics,chemistry/ mathematical concepts like geometry,algebra,probability theory aren’t pratical and have no real use in life.Yet I insist that Maths helps us have better problem-solving skills,apart from that …(7分)
Why did you choose to study those subjects?
Do you like your subjects?
Is it very interesting?
(Possibly) Are you looking forward to working?
Do you prefer to study in the mornings or in the afternoons?/When is the best time to study?
Do you prefer to study alone or study with friends?
Hometown
思路+语料+句型 = 答案
1.城市风貌
句型 It’s a … city.
busy/traditional/modern/ancient/fast-developing.
2.地理位置
句型 it’s near … / it’s located in …
Beijing is located in the north of my country.
east/west/south/north
3.建筑物
句型:it’s get …
Building
4.特色
句型 it is famous for
4.1 吃:delicious = tasty = yummy = mouth-watering(6分)
local food /snacks (such as Beijing roast duck)
I’m from a fast-developing city called Shenyang which is located in the north-east of China,the natives are friendy and hospitable to visitors.
You'll be impressed by citizen's enthusiasm if you come to this place.
Furthermore,Shenyang's Imperial Palace is the World Cultural Heritage that impresses tourists.
The public transport system is developed.
I mean you can get to anywhere you want either by underground or bus which are punctual,environmentally-friendly and economical.
-I couldn’t stand the traffic jam especially at rush hour.It drives me crazy when I’m stuck.
-It’s horrible when people are jammed into a teeny compartment and they are packed like sardines.
How long have you been living there?
Is that a big city or a small place?
Do you think you will continue living here for a long time?
What’s the most popular means of transportation in your hometown?
I think private car is the most popular means of transportation in my hometown.
Cus we don’t have so many subways or sharing bicycles in the street and we don’t have lots of population either.
So we really enjoy driving a car to go where ever you want .
Accommodation
别墅关键词:
quiet,bigger room,relax in the garden。
公寓关键词:
easier to get help,make new friends。
I’m currently living in a two-bedroom flat/300-square-metre house which/that/where is located/situated in the downtown Shenyang/suburbs of my city/outskirts of my city,and it's on the 23th floor of a 34-storey building.
It's quite close to a park,so the view is wonderful there.
My room is decorated in a Chinese style with _____ and _____.
`Do you prefer living in a house or a flat/an apartment?
What do you think are the advantages of living in a house rather than a flat/an apartment?
Will you move home in the near future?/Would you like to move to a different home in the future?/Do you plan to live there for a long time?
What do you dislike about living there?
What are the advantages and disadvantages of living there?
Well the biggest disadvantage I put it first is traffic,because as you konw Beijing is a busy trafic metroplis,trafic can be pretty bad,after wait a hour after hour to take a taxi If i wanna get to somewhere.the biggest advantage I can have is pretty convenient for me to go to other parts of the city bacause of the metro、the subway,very convenient link everywhere you wanna go.
Yeah,I like my home so much,beause if I stay at home,I get these so fun where you belong to and you have relaxing ,the feeling make me feel I like it.
Who do you live with?
How long have you lived there?
(If you answered you hadn’t lived there for long) What’s the difference between where you live now and where you have lived in the past?
Which room does your family spend most of the time in?
What do you usually do in your house/flat/room?
Are the transport facilities to your home very good?
What part of your home do you like the most?
In the future,what type of place would you like to live in?
Do you live in a good neighbourhood(小区/社区)?
-Definitely,and I think living in a good neighbourhood is very important since there’s an old saying that goes like this,"a nearby neighbour is better than a distant cousin",I’m living in a harmonious neighbourhood which gives me a real sense of belonging.
-Not really,coz my neighbours are a bit nosy and gossipy,which makes me feel disturbed indeed.
Well,I would say,someone who has high moral standard as me is likely to be my friend.I suppose,I think of a friend who is trustworthy,honest and loyal, is the right guy.A true friend should be the person who can help you deal with the ups and downs of life and encourage you to pursue your dream and achieve your goals.
Hell no,I never cook because I don't know how,my parents always cook for me.
I really like Chinese Hot Pot,because it has a history of more than 1,000 years and it's a popular communal dish in many cuisines,it typically features a simmering kettle of borth placed in the center of the dining table with a variety of raw,cook-it-yourself ingredients.
What’s your main meal of the day?
Do you like to try different kinds of food?
Sure,I really like to try some kinds of food,because Beijing is a metropolis and it has all kinds of food all around the world actually,so we can have the food from south of Asia,and we can have the Italian food , market food ,European style ,so there're all kinds of food.that's variety we can select.
Well,I almost don’t like snacks.
Im not a foodie at all. Iam just not type of person.
Because I don’t have any feelings about food.
I prefer to put my concentrate on something else such as reading or playing video games or something like that.
Everyday,and I'm into different kinds of vegetables,such as/especially spinach and eggplants.
Hobbies/Interests
例如:sport/reading/TV/movie(5.5)/music&art(6.0)/photography(6.5-7.0)/…
sport(英)/sports(美)
两个都可以说,一个英式,一个美式,注意主谓一致即可。
like/love/hate/don’t like + doing
Yes,I do,I'm a big fan of snoboarding though my skill is pretty basic.
Skiing offers a golden opportunity to eliminate pressure.
Besides,it's a good chance to recognise new friends which means improve social life.
We have a skiing group so we usually have fun together in the ski-resort located in Hebei province at weekends or on the holidays.
-I love reading English books.I think they are entertaining.And reading them helps me to improve language skills.
-I `prefer` reading popular science books `to` reading other types of books.They can help me to widen horizons.Besides/In addition,I can get a lot of knowledge.
-In fact,I don't like reading very much,especially textbooks.I think they are quite boring.
I'm used to reading some books everyday,especially before I go to bed and I need to do something to let me fall to sleep as soon as possible.So reading is good enough for me.well...the romance fiction is fabulous, because I can barely use my brain.
Do you enjoy listening to music?
Yeah,I really enjoy listening to different kinds of music.
Such as pop music,rock music,classical music and so on .
The main reason is that music can offer me lot of things such as passion and energy or it can really let me lose pressure.
Do you like watching films/dancing/…?
-I (don’t) like watching films/dancing/doing sport…because…
Do you like watching TV?
Do you like watching TV programs?
What kinds of TV programs do you like to watch?
-Frankly speaking,I don’t have a habit of watching TV, since I think TV currently is filled with advertisements and boring shows.
If I have to say, that would be talent shows. The type of this kind of programme aims to discover adolescents who have a gift.
Shows called “China has hip-hop”, “Creativity 101” have got high ratings and positive reviews.
I’m into this kind of show chiefly because of having fun.
In addition, I’d like to keep pace with current prevailing trend.
I want to know what youngsters favour, even if I sometimes do not favour the value.
Well,I like watching different kinds of TV programs,such as/in particular,soap operas and variety shows.
-Well,I’m really into different kinds of programs,such as variety shows, reality shows and so on. The main reason is that watching TV enables me to let my hair down and know about the latest information.You know,I’m used to watching TV with my family in our living room after dinner ,which is entertaining and strengthens our family bonds.(6.0-6.5)
-I love watching documentaries because we can learn about new things.My favourite is a series about nature and animals.
-I watch a game show every weekend with my family.I think the presenter is very funny.I like it when the contestants win big prizes.
-I enjoy watching `soap operas` because they `are similar to` real life and I like the `characters`.I usually watch TV on my laptop in my room.
-I sometimes watch talk shows.The gests are really entertaining.You can learn about their lives and new films or new music.
-I'm a sports fan so I watch a lot of sport on TV.I enjoy listening to the experts talking about the result,too.
-I rarely watch news,because I think it is quite boring.
-I always watch variety shows.The guests are very entertaining.I think the presenter is funny too.
-I sometimes watch American dramas.I watch them to relax, and I think the plots are very entertaining.(5.0-5.5分)
Do you often go shopping?
How often do you go traveling?
Once a year,and I’m used to travelling with my colleagues or relatives to some coastal cities during our free time,which is fantastic.
How often do you buy others gifts?
Do you like to send expensive gifts?
I prefer to send practical gifts rather than expensive gifts.Previously,common gifts would be practical ones for eating and using.Now young people are just like Westerners in that they commonly give flowers and cards as gifts.
语料:
get the habit of …
I have cravings for …
chewy/crispy/mouth-watering
sweet and sugar stuffed
put on a lot of weight
Do you like eating cakes?
Have you ever made cakes?
Do you like dessert?
What desserts do Chinese people like?
Do you prepare tea or coffee for guests at home?
Do Chinese people/you like to drink tea or coffee?
When was the last/first time you drank tea or coffee?
Have you ever tried any kind of foreign food?
Do you like to try new food?
What kinds of new food have you tried recently?
语料:
a pencil broken in half becomes 2 pencils.
the more you sharpen a pencil,the shorter it gets.
sign a document
marks made with pens last longer(permanent)
pencil can be erased
fountain pens/ballpoint pens
Well,I think it depends on my use.I mean,when I'm doing my homework,I prefer the pen over the pencil,given the clear writing.
When it comes to art-related activities,I'd go for the pencil,because it is easy to erase what I've written.
When was the last time you bought a pen or pencil?
What do you think if someone gives you a pen or pencil as a present?
How often do you use dictionaries?
What kinds of dictionaries have you used before?
Which do you prefer, paper dictionaries or online/electronic dictionaries?
How do you think dictionaries would change in the future?
In my opinion,most people love to keep cats and dogs as their pets.
Coz both of the animals can bring a lot of benefits to us,
When people walk their dogs,they can socialize with other dog owners.
Which is a good way to make new friends.
For cats,however,although they don’t need to be taken outside for walk or something.
According to some scientific reports,when people stroke the fur,
they’ll feel peaceful and comfortable.
I speak English for sure,but I also speak a little bit Japanese because English is my first major in university and we have to study a sencondary language. since we start,we pick up English as first language.I speak a little bit Japanese because I travel a lot to Japan
Language is quite important in terms of commucation and people from different culture understand you easily ,so it provides all extra
the ???,for example it goes different culture and if you've been able to speak the local language so everything you wanna do is much easier,because you can communicate ,that's the most important thing.
I think the most effiective way to learn new language is to put yourself in a culture first,you have to understand the way people think and try to imitate the xx as justers ,try to be local ideas,I think it's important
有一些话题卡的素材可以共用,融会贯通一下,
PART 2有些地方与写作考试中的大作文有相似之处。
PART 2中的结尾段一般均为总结性的一句话,可以横向复用,套路如下:
【Summary 总结】
In a word/To summarize,__ (1) __ not only because (of)
__ (2) __ but also because (of)
__ (3) __ .
一般将话题的核心思想/点题句放到第1处,例如:
I would like to meet her …
I felt happy about this …
I’d like to buy it …
It impresses me …
之后将主体段中提到过的若干方面中的任意2个方面,
作为总结性的词汇&短语放到第2、3处即可。
because of 接名词性短语,because 接句子。
人物题的出题概率较低,人物类的口语素材可以互相平移,
如果讲世界名人的话要小心,因为考官也许知道这个人,
会很敏感的知道你说的内容是否准确,
如果不是世界名人,那就可以胡编乱造,只要用词准确即可。
如果是名人,不要说宗教类或类似于川普这样的人物,
因为你不知道考官的立场,可能会得罪考官,不要聊敏感话题。
答题结构:
1.引入
开头句,简单一句话,不用花很多心思,告诉考官who,这个人是谁。
Speaking of this topic,I want to talk about _____ (人物) who is _____ (职业).
2.外部
appearance外貌,使用"总-分"结构。
"总"表示这个人整体上的模样,是否好看,多高多重,身材怎么样啊等等,
"分"表示这个人的五官特征。
“总”(相貌+身高+身材)
As for appearance,Liu Wen is a gorgeous woman who’s almost 178cm high with a hot and slender body/figure.
“分”(脸型+发型+其他特征+主观感受)
客观描述之后再加上一些主观判断,给考官的感觉是有感情的语言、是由变换梯度的,
有层次感,否则只是流水账,考官是听不下去的。
To be specific/specifically,he/she has a __ (1) __ face with __ (2) __ hair. What attracts/impresses me about him/her is that __ (3) __.
face与hair可以换成其他想说的语料,例如nose之类的。
第3处表语从句可以替换成:
she always has a pair of deep dimples when she wears a big smile
,showing her kindness to others.
although she’s got some lines on her forehead,she still looks attractive.
3.内部
3.1性格&品性-personality,使用"总-分"结构
Through reading that news,(总)he/she is a/an __ (1) __ person(分)who can always __ (2) __.
第2处定语从句可以替换成:
catch the eye of the public through his/her works rather than the media hype.
catch the eye of the public
抓人眼球
work
作品
media hype
媒体的帮衬、操作
3.2成就-achievements(名人)
She’s the first Asian model to walk in a Victoria’s Secret Fashion Show.
She/He always appeared on the front cover of the most talked-about magazines.
talked-about只能用于口语,不能用于写作。
She/He was listed among Time’s 100 Most Influential People in the world in 2009.
He/She has been nominated and awarded numerous honors over the past few years.
nominated
提名
还可以使用examples事例证明&成就&成绩+feelings感受。
3.3影响-influences(名人)
使用一些名人名言更有影响力,但尽量找考官不知道的那种不是特别有名的人。
__ (1) __ can always send positive messages to her audience/fans.the most impressive sentence he/she said in this news was that __ (2) __ and I have to say it inspires me a lot.
第1处名词,可以是一个人,也可以是一本书、一部电影,可以用于其他主题。
第2处名言警句可以替换成:
“The moment you’re ready to quit is usually the moment right before a miracle happens.”
lines
台词
Describe a family member you spend most time with
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Describe a person who often travels by plane
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Describe an old person who is interesting
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Describe a foreign celebrity you want to meet in person
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Describe an intelligent person you know
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Describe an old person you admire.
You should say:
who he/she is
what he/she looks like
what his/her best qualities are
And explain why you admire this person.
-I'm going to talk about an aged person who is XXX.
My grandmother is seventy years old.but she looks very young.Her eyes are big and lively.She is tall and thin.I respect her very much because,firstly,she's very clever.She understands new things quickly.Secondly,she's very calm.Even though she meets troubles and difficulties,she's never angry or worried.(5分)
-My professor is of medium height.His hair is thin.He has wrinkles and age spots on his face.He usually wears a blue shirt.I respect him very much because,firstly,he's wise.It seems that he knows everything.Secondly,I think he's a caring person.He cares about students.`Last but not the least`,he is friendly and enjoys meeting students.(5分)
- My little sister is ten years old this year,but she is very tall.She has an oval face.She always wears a bun.I really like my sister because,firstly,she is a polite girl.Secondly,she's very warm-hearted and often helps neighbours.(5分)
- My little brother is outgoing and original.He likes wearing yellow T-shirt and shorts.He's very confident because he believes in his ability.For example,he's good at mathematic,engineering and computer science.(5分)
Describe a famous person from your country.
You should say:
who this person is
what this person looks like
what type of person he/she is
and explain how you feel about this person.
Describe a well-known person you like or admire.
You should say:
who this person is
what this person has done
why this person is well known
and explain why you admire this person.
Describe a famous person in the news that you would like to meet.
You should say:
who this person is
what this person does
what the news was about
and explain why you would like to meet this person.
XXX is tall and thin.She is stunning and graceful.She has watery eyes and thick hair.She has a tattoo on her left hand.I like her very much because firstly,she is very original.I think staying different is cool.Secondly,she's gifted.I think she was born to be an actress.She and her classic movies left a deep impression in our minds.Thirdly,she's versatile.Apart from being good at acting,she also does well in singing.(5分)
Speaking of this topic,I want to talk about Taylor Swift who is a famous country & pop music singer all around the world.
As for appearance,Taylor Swift is a gorgeous woman who’s almost 180cm high with a hot and slender figure.
外貌:
To be specific ,she has a prominent nose with bright eyes. What attracts me about him/her is that ___.
性格:
Through reading that news,she is an diligent person(分) who can always catch the eye of the public through her works rather than the media hype..
She always wrote a song about her ex after she broke up.
Through reading that news,(总)she is a/an funny girl who can always convey cheerfulness and happiness whenever I watch her TV programe.
成就:
Her song was listed among billboard’s top 100 best pop music in 2009.
Taylor can always send positive messages to her fans.the most impressive sentence he/she said in this news was that and I have to say it inspires me a lot.
I like Faye Wong. She’s my fashion icon as well as my role model. Faye is a Chinese sing-songwriter and actress. She’s been a diva for ages in mainland China,Hong Kong and Taiwan and has gained a large following even the whole Asia. She’s tall and boney. She’s got a sharp-featured face, which is quite different from aesthetic perspectives for Chinese traditions. She’s famous for being original. Despite of the fact that she’s been involved in entertainment biz for ages, she has been keeping away from gossip. She’s tolerant as well. There has been verbal abuse and physical attack because of her last musical performance in Shanghai. However she’s never fought back. She did nothing but enclose her social accounts. I look up to= admire her.
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I remember a teacher I had at primary school who was woderful.From the first day she was friendly and kind towards the students who were 8 years old.But she was also strict.
I mean on the first day she took out this old fashioned strap and banged it on the desk and we all got such a fright,but she was just rying to show us she was in control.She wasn't really that scary although she was quite short and she spoke in a loud voice.
Everybody called her Mrs.T.She taught us for every subject,so she taught us English,maths,writing,and actually I can't remember what else!
I guess what I used to enjoy most about her classes was her personality and the fact that she cared about all of her students,even the naughty ones.I remeber her dughter lived in America and she used to send over American sweets and chewing gum for Mrs.T to give to the good students.All the students tried to be really good to get that reward!
I particularly remember my teacher,Mrs.T,because she was so kind,helpful and patient.I was very young and she was like a mother to me,gentle but strict at the same time.
答题结构:
1.引入
Speaking of this topic,I want to talk about __ (1) __ (地点) which __ (2) __(地理位置).
第1处地点可以替换成:
A hot-pot restaurant called Haidilao.
hot-pot
火锅
第2处地理位置可以替换成:
1.1方位
is
located/situated in the city centre/downtown Beijing/suburbs/outskirts of the city.
1.2距离
It takes me roughly 1 hour to get there by car.
I spend roughly 1 hour getting there by car.
It’s within walking distance to…
It’s just a stone’s throw away from…
近在咫尺(7分习语表达)
1.3频率
So I normally go there on a daily/weekly/monthly basis.
regular
常客
So I’m a regular there,about once a week.
So I rarely/hardly/seldom go there,maybe roughly once a month.
2.外部(重点)
The exterior of the building
建筑外观
exterior [ɪkˈstɪəriə]
adj,外部的、外面的
n,外部、表面
interior的反义词
In terms of the exterior,the restaurant is on the top floor of a high rise building which is square-shaped and wrapped in glass on all sides.
in terms of
就…而言,固定引导词
2.1高度Height
… is a 20-storey building.
… is a high-rise/low-rise(flat/office) building.
… is a/an unique/creative skyscraper.
2.2形状Shape&材料Material
rectangular-shaped building
The building is wrapped in glass on all sides.
It’s a glass-wrapped building.
pyramidal-shaped building
a square-shaped wooden house.
a square-shaped log cabin.
2.3Surroundings
类似于周围是否有停车场等
In front of/behind/next to it,there’s a parking lot which is a convenience for those who drive there.
-beautifies the environment and attracts more people coming there.
parking lot
停车场
fountain
喷泉
flower bed
花坛
3.内部
"总-分"结构
总:
描述刚进入这个建筑的第一印象是什么。
When I step into the __ (1) __ (建筑),it’s _____.
well-lit/dim
亮堂的/昏暗的
spacious/tiny
大的/小的
airy/stuffy
空气流通的/很闷的
分:
描述在这个建筑中感觉到的一些细节。
decoration
装修
It’s decorated/furnished in a/an _____ style with _____ and _____.
可以装修成什么风格
Lovely paintings on the (plain) walls.
wall paper
墙纸
gorgeous wall papers
revolving door
旋转门
French windows which enable lots of natural light to come into the room.
食物food(如果是餐厅)
不要说中餐厅,因为很多菜的名字你不会说,会给自己挖坑。
"总-分-总"结构:
总:It offers a great selection of dishes,
分:such as _____ , _____ and _____.
总:And _____ is the restaurant’s specialty which is also my favourite.
specialty
特色菜、特产
service
服务
considerate
体贴的
enthusiastic
热情的
The (waiters/waitresses) are considerate and enthusiastic,which makes me feel like eating at home.
The service is efficient,I mean you never need to wait long for your food.
What makes me excited is that _____.
表达开心的心情
If you’ve got a student card/credit card,you’ll get a 20% off discount.
Describe a crowded place you went to
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Describe an ideal house or apartment where you want to live
You should say:
where the place is
what it is like
why you want to live there
And explain why it is ideal to you.
语料:
bed room/living room
neighbourhood
Describe a new public place you would like to visit
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Describe a park or garden you like visiting
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Describe a school you went to in your childhood
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Describe a place where you read and write(not your home)
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Describe an area of your country you know and like.
You should say:
where it is
what its special features are
what you and other people do in this area
And explain why you like it.
国家的下一级单位是城市,所以只能说城市,不要说圆明园之类的地方。
I'm going to talk about XXXX, my hometown.
The reason why I'd like to talk about it is my hometown is a modern city.It's near the sea.It's got many skyscrapers and shopping malls.It's famous for the busy markets.Tourists buy clothes or souvenirs.I really like my hometown because firstly,people are very friendly and polite.
Secondly,the traditional food,like Beijing roast duck,is tasty and popular.
Describe a place you remember well that is full of colors.
You should say:
where it is
what it is like
what it is used for
And explain why you remember it well.
Describe a place you remember which is full of color.
You should say:
where the place is
what you did there
why you went there
And explain why this place is full of color.
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物品类
物品题是考官比较喜欢考的题,考频较高,物品本身没有生命,比较难说,
如果没话可讲的时候,可以尝试去谈一些经历。
答题思路:
1.引入
开头句 = what it is?
Speaking of this topic,I want to talk about _____(物品) which is made by _____(品牌).
外部-Exterior,"总-分"结构:
先说第一感受(总),再说物品的(分)外观、大小、形状、功能等。
as for the exterior,it looks trendy(分) you know,it is a portable device which has a vintage black cover and square body.
Size大小:
bulky
笨重
portable
方便携带的
palm-sized
手掌大小的
Color颜色:
sleek/gloss black
(有光泽度的)亮黑
gloss
唇彩
vintage black
哑光黑
silverish pink
银粉色
Shape形状:
square-shaped device
方形
内部-Interior,"总-分"结构:
Function性能:
总-分:
To be honest,总:it offers good performance.
分:to be specific,it’s _____ ;what I mean is _____ .
durable
adj,耐用的、持久的
-The battery life,well,I can spend a whole day on it and still don’t need to recharge the battery.
-that it will still work very well,if I drop it down to the floor carelessly.
speedy
速度快
(分)
To be specific/speciafically,it’s _____ ;what I mean is _____ .
that it loads websites as fast as lightning.
快如闪电
user-friendy
用户体验好的
-that I can get the hang of
it within few minutes.
熟练掌握什么什么的技能
multifunctional
多功能的
-that it has an 8 million-pixel(像素) camera with an anti-shake(防抖) function.
-that it contains fingerprint recognition technology which better protects the customers’ privacy.
Experience经历:
经历每次都要说,不然说不够时间,可以仿照RED原则中的D。
思路:detail
when
who
where
what
how you feel about it
Well,probably I’m gonna buy it in a couple of days.If I get it,I’d use it when I finish my class,wait for buses or lie on the bed(when and where).By the way,I’d like to share it with my besties/buddies for fun(who),like taking selfies,or watching some entertaining video clips(what),which would be addicted I guess (how you feel).
事件类
答题思路:
【Introduction 引入】
开头句:
Speaking of this topic/Today I’m going to talk about the time when
I went to the _____(地点) with _____(跟谁去的).
不要跑题,一定要有the time when,
因为这是事件类话题,而不是只介绍地点,必须要有经历。
之后是介绍3个WH(Who,When,Where),人时地:
1.who 人物描述
Coz we have a lot in common,we have become the _____.
Best companions for hanging out.
Actually,my parents and I can always get along well with each other,so there’s no generation gap.
2.when 时间描述
It happened in the last summer holiday when I was a sophomore(大二) at my university.
I could still remember that it was
on a Saturday morning that I was sitting in front of the TV with some snacks in my hand.and suddenly,Andy called me up and asked me whether I’d like to hang out with her,and I said of course,why not.
3.where 地点描述
【外部 exterior】
(如果是公园这种可以去掉,如果是国家大剧院这种就需要说)
以前讲过地点类的话题,可以复用。
【内部 interior】
“五大感官”思路,看、听、闻、味、触,让考官接收到有逻辑的描述。
1.看 seeing
artificial lake
人工湖
water lily
睡莲、荷花
There’s an artificial lake with ducks and water lilies floating on the surface.
The water was crystal clear
,reflecting the blue sky and white clouds.
伴随状语,当一句话中出现大于等于2个动词时,并且这些动词共享同一个主语,
从2个动词开始,可以省略主语,直接用逗号+动词ing即可。
cherry blossom
樱花
The park had pink cherry blossoms which beautified the whole park.
人的活动
row
划
appreciate
欣赏
We rented a boat to row on the lake to appreciate the gorgeous scenery along the bank(河岸,湖边).
selfie
自拍
We took lot’s of photos and selfies to memorize this special moment.
We found a pitch of grassland by the lakeside and sat down to have a picnic.
Prepared food for the picnic:
salad
沙拉
homemade sandwiches
自制三明治
chicken drumstick
鸡腿、drumstick=鼓槌
chicken wing
鸡翅
chicken nugget
鸡块
crisps
薯片
2.味 tasting
plain
清淡的
tasty [ˈteɪsti]
好吃的
mouth-watering
流口水的
3.听 listening
someone can ever hear _____.
twitter
鸟叫
bark
狗叫
roar
老师、狮子叫
Some birds twittering on the trees.
鸟叫
Bees buzzing around.
虫子叫
Some elders playing musical instruments like the flute,violin etc.
大爷大妈
4.闻 smelling
fragrance
花香
Flowers gave off a sweet fragrance in the park.
散发出甜甜的味道
I can taste the freshness of the air.
5.触 touching/feeling
We had a great time.
It was a blast.
嗨翻了
hustle and bustle
喧闹
It’s a getaway from the hustle and bustle of the city centre.
It’s a great workout for both body and mind.
Describe a recent(别跑题) happy event that you had.
You should say:
What event it was
Where and when it happened
Whom it happened with
And explain why you felt happy about it.
Describe an advertisement you remember well.
You should say:
where you saw it or heard it
what kind of advertisement it was
what the contents of the advertisement were
And explain why you remember it well.
6.5分:
Well, the most impressive advertisement is absolutely the one released by Apple decades ago.
As a matter of fact, it was not targeting at a certain product but a key concept of Apple, the company and its culture.
I was firstly attracted to it years ago cuz it got millions of “thumb-up”s on Youtube, you know, the video website.
It was more like a documentary rather than a commercial, and when I clicked in, my world was rocked!
This one-minute ad featured black-and-white footage of 17 iconic 20th century personalities, including Albert Einstein, BobDylan, Martin Luther King, John Lenon, Pablo Picasso, etc.
Eventually, it ended with an image of a young girl opening her closed eyes, as if making a wish.
As the video was aired, you can also hear the lines going, honestly I can’t remember every single word of it, but, it was like : “Here's to the crazy ones, the misfits, the rebels, the troublemakers, the round pegs in the square holes... the ones who see things differently --they're not fond of rules...
You can quote them, disagree with them, glorify or vilify them, but the only thing you can't do is ignore them because they changethings... they push the human race forward, and while some may see them as the crazy ones, we see genius, because the ones who are crazy enough to think thatthey can change the world, are the ones who do.”
see? you know what I mean, a real thought-provoking ad!
I can still remember that I thought it should be “differently” instead of “different”, so I googled it, it turn out that Steve Jobs has got his own explanation.
This is exactly “think different” !
I really like this advertisement, it is a masterpiece, for its design, it creativity, also, for the ones who “think different”!
Describe a time when you could not use your mobile phone
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Describe a time when weather prevented your activity
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Describe a change that can improve your local area
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Describe a time when you were excited
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Describe a leisure activity that you do with your family
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Describe a plan you suddenly changed
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Describe a rule in your secondary school that you agree or disagree.
You should say:
what is the rule
why this rule has to be established
what will happen if we break down this rule
what is the positive and negative effects of this rule
Describe an activity you like doing.
You should say:
what activity is it
where and when you do it
who you like doing it with
And explain why you enjoy doing it.
Today I'm gonna talking about my favorite sport which is kind of exciting
、challenging and dangerous.Skiing is truly a brave guy's game because players get hurts easily.
We have a skiing group so we usually have fun together in the ski-resort located in Hebei province at the weekends or on the holidays.
I enjoy going skiing for various reasons.Normally I'm occupied with daily issues.Then skiing offers a golden opportunity to eliminate pressure.
Besides,it's a good chance to recognise new friends which means improve my social life.
What's more,one of the main benefits of skiing is that we can jump or do some kinds of moving actions if we like,it was like break the rules,that's the amazing part,pretty cool,right?
Another thing I learn from skiing is that it enhances my tolerance for cold.
So basically skiing enriches my life,so that's the reason why I love this sport so badly.
-I usually watch a sport programme.
It's presented by a famous person.
The presenter is very funny and the guests are really entertaining.
I like watching this show very much because firstly,I'm a sport fan.Secondly,I enjoy listening to the experts talking about the results,too.
-I like watching a documentary called Nature and Animals.I watch it with my family at 7 p.m every Saturday.I enjoy watching it because firstly,I learn a lot from it.Secondly,I think it's necessary for human beings to learn about nature and animals.
-Today I’m gonna talk about my favourite film which is based on true story.
The Pursuit of Happyness is one of the best films I’ve ever seen in my entire life.
I’ll watch this moive in my laptop as a pick-me-up When I feel depressed and it never fails to lift my spirits.
The reason why I recommend it to all my friends is I think it’s a film that everyone should see at least once in their lives.
In this movie,the protagonist and his family had fallen on hard times.
He finds himself in a difficult situation when his wife leaves him and he’s stuck raising their young child on his own.
He almost gives up when he loses his apartment、money and job.
But through study and hard work,he’s able to change himself and the fate of his family.
The main character continued to
persevere even when it seemed like the whole world was against him.
We can see how he fight against his own destiny.
His struggling spirit just moved me,giving me a deep impression that I’ll remember for the rest of my life.
At present,I feel like I have the enough courage and strength to overcome all the difficulties in my life.This moive gives us positive energy and let's know what's the meaning of "never give it up".
1.what subject you are studying?
-I’m studying …/I’m doing a … course /I’m learning about …
My major is…(5.5分)
I major in … = I specialize in …(6分)
2.what the subject is about?
It’s about…
It’s about helping people.
It’s about the different parts of a business.
It’s about the legal system in different countries.
3.how you feel about it?
entertaining/difficult/it’s hard work/lots of lectures/have a great time/lots of deadlines/
即使,让步状语从句,即使有很多课,但我过的很开心。
Even through = even if = although.
这几个连词不能跟but连用
Although there are lots of lectures.I have a great time.
Even though there are courseworks,I think it’s entertaining.
4.explain why you are interested in it?
enjoy helping people/ I’d like to be … (虚拟语气,对未来做出假设、想象)
-I'm doing a business studies course.It's about the different parts of a business(公司),like finance,people,or marketing.It's really entertaining.I'd like to be a company director.
-I'm studying law.It's about the legal system in different countries.I think it's a very difficult course and there are lots of deadlines.I'd like to be a lawyer.
-I'm studying linguistics.It's about the languages in different countries.I think it's a very entertaining course.I'd like to be an English teacher.
-I'm doing an art course.It's about music、paintings and moives.
It's a very entertaining course,but there are lots of lectures.
I'd like to be an artist.
-I'm doing mathematics.It's about the numbers.It's hard work and there are lots of deadlines.But I have extra tuition and I think it is very useful.I hope I get good results this semester.
I'm going to talk about the time when I went to the second highest restaurant in Beijing with my dream girl.
She was my co-worker and I used to sit next to her,coz we have a lot in common,so we have become the best companions for hanging out.
It happened in the last winter I could still remember that it was on a Saturday evening,After the skiing I just asked her whether she would like to have dinner with me, then she said of course, why not.
The restaurant is on the top floor of a 80-storey building which is square-shaped and wrapped in glass on all sides.
When we step into the restaurant, it’s kind of dim.It's decorated in a western style with gorgeous wall papers and French windows.
It offers a great selection of dishes such as Chinese food、Western Food and Japanese Food and Western Food is the restaurant's specialty which is also my favourite. I can't really remember what we else ate,but the seafood was tasty,oh by the way,we ordered a bottle of France wine also.
The waiters are considerate and enthusiastic, which makes us feel like eating at home.
I can hear the classic background music and there's a faint fragrance lingering in the restaurant.
We spent hours at the restaurant,talking,eating and laughing,we all shared our stories together and wished us good luck for the future.
We really had a great time,it was like a getaway from the hustle and bustle of the city centre.
In a word,I felt unforgettable about this special meal not only because of my dream girl, but also because of the high price.
追问:
I don't think so.I prefer eating in restaurants to eating at home,because you don't have to do the dishes afterwards.