#21天写作第十天# #修炼专八作文的悲欢#

【学号】I15煎鸡蛋

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【文章】

   Family with kids confronting a controversial issue: whether their children should be paid to do chores? Advocates claim that parents can not only teach their children to hold accountable for work ethic, but also instill a sense of self reliance. Anyway, young and inexperienced they are to earn money, it is far better for them to buy their desired items through cleaning up their house, rather than to directly ask for money from hard-working parents. While opponents strongly disagree with the above statement, they assume this misconduct might attribute to declined family values that children were raised in this environment will eventually treat family obligation as commercial transaction. Moreover, since workers officially get paid through decent job, Reasonable yet invalid work as chores are not persuasive enough to relocate money to kids.

It is too early for a small child to form his systematic values towards outside world. Paying for chores is obviously not an inappropriate manner for kids in such young ages when building up his values. If not treated correctly, previously harmony atmosphere will evolve to anxious environment where everyone chase after private interest. Some parents probably consider it as a brilliant choice to give away pocket money instead of simply give directly to children. But sometimes too much money they earned does not signify good results. What if kids do enormous work load in the attempt to spoil themselves? It is never easy for adults save up money, and we shouldn't permit our next generation foster lavishing habit that fail to cherish fruits with hardship and sufference.

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【写作感想】

★写作的进程快要一半了。而在这过去的十多天里面，我的写作水平究竟是有什么样的变化呢?我想了一下，我写字的速度比之前要快上了不少,而且好像我比之前更加的熟悉题型了。可是这样说的话，我感觉没有得到太大的用处啊，因为我真的每次写完作业之后都没有认真的反思和总结，我觉得这是一个致命伤，也是一个长期以来困扰着我的一个致命伤。哎，我要不要发到淘宝上面要出钱，要别人给我去改一下作文￣﹁￣。

★啊，我急需要写英语作文的干货了！

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