Assignment写作内容语言要如何进行修改润色

　　留学生留学的时候，Assignment写作、paper写作等都是短板，很多学生在写完Assignment后，就不管了，也没有对Assignment进行检查或修改过，这样有可能会由于细节上的不注意失掉不必要减的分。所以建议同学们在写完Assignment后，要对论文进行检查修改，提高Assignment的质量。下面小编就来跟大家说一下关于Assignment写作的内容和语言上要如何进行修改润色。

 

　　When international students study abroad,assignment writing,paper writing,etc.are all short boards.Many students ignore assignment after writing it,and have not checked or modified the assignment,which may result in unnecessary points being lost due to carelessness in details.Therefore,it is suggested that students should check and modify their papers after completing the assignment to improve the quality of the assignment.The following editor will tell you how to modify and polish the content and language of assignment writing.

　　首先从内容方面进行修改检查：

　　First,check the content:

　　1.Assignment题目有什么要求？Assignment内容是否回应了所有的题目要求？

　　1.What are the requirements for the assignment topic?Does the assignment content respond to all the questions?

　　2.Assignment内容是否有与主题无关，应该删去的内容？比如：

　　2.Is there any assignment content irrelevant to the subject that should be deleted?For example:

　　Nuclear power is the best solution to our ever-increasing energy needs.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　上面这个题目是问核能是否是解决能源需求的最好方案，那么Assignment写作内容应该围绕这一点展开，而不能谈为什么要节约能源，怎样节约能源，节约能源有什么好处，这样就会显得文不对题。

　　The question above is whether nuclear energy is the best solution to energy demand.The Assignment should be written around this point,instead of talking about why and how to save energy,and what are the benefits of saving energy.

　　3.论述是否合乎逻辑？是否缺少某些环节？

　　3.Is the discussion logical?Are there any links missing?

　　经常有同学说自己写完论文后看不出自己的论述是否存在逻辑问题。造成这种情况的原因一般是读者对英文还不够敏感。这里有个很简单的解决办法：将自己写的东西翻译成中文，然后检查中文的逻辑。在中文语境下如果文章存在逻辑问题我们一般能很容易发现。除此之外，我们还可以学习一些逻辑学的知识。

　　There are often students who say that they can't see whether there are logical problems in their discussions after they finish writing papers.The reason for this is that the readers are not sensitive enough to English.Here is a very simple solution:translate your own writing into Chinese,and then check the Chinese logic.In Chinese context,if there are logic problems in the article,we can easily find them.In addition,we can also learn some knowledge of logic.

　　其次从语言方面进行修改检查：

　　Secondly,check the language:

　　1.有无选用与Assignment文体风格不相适应的词（比如在学术写作中使用lots of/sort of/kind of这样的非正式用词）？

　　1.Are there any words that are incompatible with the stylistic style of Assignment(such as the informal words like lots of/sort of/kind of used in academic writing)?

　　2.有没有出现中式表达，比如“学习知识”写成learn knowledge（正确说法应该是gain/acquire knowledge）？

　　2.Are there any Chinese expressions,such as"learning knowledge"written as"gain/acquire knowledge"?

　　3.有没有遵循词组的固定搭配（比如“机会均等”应该是equality of opportunity，而不是equality of opportunities）？

　　3.Do you follow the fixed collocation of phrases(for example,"equal opportunities"should be equal of opportunities,not equal of opportunities)?

　　4.单复数、时态和冠词等语法知识点有没有出现错误？

　　4.Are there any mistakes in grammar knowledge points such as singular and plural,tenses and articles?

　　5.拼写和标点有没有问题？

　　5.Are there any problems with spelling and punctuation?

　　每次Assignment写作完成后按照这几点原则去检查，这样能够得到比较客观的修改结果。

　　After each Assignment is written,check according to these principles,so as to obtain more objective modification results.

　　标准润色主要是从英文论文写作的角度出发，修改字词、语法和句式结构等在论文中出现的常见问题；而深度润色在此基础上还将对论文的内容、结构、逻辑、文风等方面提出建议和指导，做出重要的修改和详尽注释，同时我们的互动式修改模式可以让您的科学论文更加的精致和专业。

　　The standard embellishment is mainly from the perspective of English thesis writing to modify common problems in the thesis,such as words,grammar and sentence structure;On this basis,the in-depth embellishment will also provide suggestions and guidance on the content,structure,logic,style and other aspects of the paper,and make important modifications and detailed notes.At the same time,our interactive modification mode can make your scientific paper more refined and professional.

　　同学们在写完Assignment后记得要对论文进行相关检查和修改，有些问题在写作的过程中可能会被忽略，通过阅读全篇才能发现其中的不合理。

　　After completing the assignment,students should remember to check and revise the thesis.Some problems may be ignored in the process of writing.Only by reading the whole article can we find out the irrationality.