作业分析四步走:
#口语粉碎机# L1-Day20 打卡时间:12.26 周一(6:00-17:00)
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我的答案:燃烧的房子
解析答案:燃烧着的房子
【对比分析】
正在燃烧,现在分词
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我的答案:老龄化人口
解析答案:老龄化的人口
【对比分析】
正在趋于老龄化,现在分词
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Age V-ERG (使)变老;(使)显老
When someone ages, or when something ages them, they seem much older and less strong or less alert.
He had always looked so young, but he seemed to have aged in the last few months…
他原来一直看起来很年轻,但最近几个月他显得老了。
我的答案:现行法律
解析答案:现有法律
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Exist VERB 存在;实际上有
If something exists, it is present in the world as a real thing.
He thought that if he couldn’t see something, it didn’t exist…
他认为自己看不见的东西就不存在。
我的答案:一个迅速发展的城市
解析答案:繁荣的城市
【对比分析】
Boom v. 繁荣,迅速发展; 发出低沉的声音,隆隆作响; 以低沉有力的声音说; 用张帆杆张(帆); 用吊杆操纵;用水栅围住
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我的答案:变化中的世界
解析答案:变化中的世界
【对比分析】
一致
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我的答案:发展中国家
解析答案:发展中国家
【对比分析】
一致
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我的答案:冉冉升起的太阳
解析答案:正在升起的太阳
【对比分析】
意思关不多
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Rise 升起 when the sun, moon, etc. rises, it appears above the horizon
The sun rises in the east.
太阳从东方升起。
我的答案:沸水
解析答案:正在开的水/沸水
【对比分析】
一致
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我的答案:一个奔跑的男孩
解析答案:一名奔跑中的男孩
【对比分析】
差不多
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我的答案:Walking along the street, She suddenly saw the five-star hotel in the distance.
解析答案:Walking along the street, She suddenly saw a five-star hotel in the distance.
【解析答案分析】
内部关系:动作
句子成分:状(现在分词,时间),主+状+谓+宾(in the distance 是 hotel 的定义)
【对比分析】
是她沿着大街走,表主动,用现在分词,作时间状语时相当于 when 引导的从句这类状语通常放在句子前半部分,若两个动作同时发生,可在分词前用 when 或 while 表示强调
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(国贸三期 不会说没有关系)
我的答案:Standing on the China World Trade Tower 3, you can see the whole Beijing city.
解析答案:Standing on the China World Trade Center Tower III, you can see the whole of Beijing.
【解析答案分析】
内部关系:动作
句子成分:状(现在分词,时间),主+谓+宾
【对比分析】
是你站在国贸三期,表主动,所以用现在分词。
The whole of Beijing = the whole Beijing
whole 有名词,形容词词性
Whole
noun [单数名词] the ~ of sth 全部;全体;所有 all that there is of sth
The effects will last for the whole of his life. 这些将会持续影响他的一生
adj. [only before noun] 全部的;整体的;完全的;所有的 full; complete
He spent the whole day writing. 他整整写了一天。
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我的答案:Seeing a car coming, they stood on the side of the road
解析答案:Seeing a car coming, they stepped aside.
【解析答案分析】
内部关系:动作
句子成分:状(现在分词,时间),主+谓+状
【对比分析】
See sb doing 看到 sb 正在干。Seeing a car coming, coming 做补语,补充说明 car
stand 表示 在…站着,stand 英文释义是 to be in a vertical position 直立,表示位于某个位置, 而“站到了路边“指从原来的位置移动到了路边,step 指迈步,step aside 移到一边,站到路边,英文释义是 to step sideways to make a space 为了腾出地方站到一边, 这题因为看到车来了,所以站到了路边,要用 step aside 表示位置的移动。
Step aside 靠边站
Step VERB 踩;踏;跨步;迈步
If you step on something or step in a particular direction, you put your foot on the thing or move your foot in that direction.
This was the moment when Neil Armstrong became the first man to step on the Moon…
就在此刻,内尔·阿姆斯特朗成了首位登上月球的人
Aside adv. 到旁边;在旁边 to one side; out of the way
She pulled the curtain aside. 她把窗帘拉向一边。
Stand aside and let these people pass. 闪开,让这些人过去。
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我的答案:Working hard, you can afford a two-roomed apartment.
解析答案:Working hard, you will afford a two-bedroom(ed) apartment.
【解析答案分析】
内部关系:动作
句子成分:状(条件),主+谓+宾
【对比分析】
Working hard 作条件状语相当于 if, unless 等引导的从句
常见引导条件状语的分词有:given, supposing, considering, provided, granted, compared with 等
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我的答案:looking at these pictures, I remembered my childhood.
解析答案:Looking at these pictures, I remembered my childhood.
【解析答案分析】
内部关系:动作
句子成分:状(时间),主+谓+宾
【对比分析】
为什么用一般过去时,能不能用其它时态?
结合说话时的情景,如果是上午看照片,下午说的就用一般现在时,
如果是现在看照片,也可以用一般现在时。
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picture 和 photo 都可以表示图片,照片;词典上有说到,
英式英语常说 take photos,美式英语常说 take pictures
我的答案:Seeing from the window, we saw a barking dog.
解析答案:Looking out through the window, we saw a barking dog.
【解析答案分析】
内部关系:动作
句子成分:状(时间),主+谓+宾
【对比分析】
a barking dog 动名词做定语 a barking doe never bites 吠犬不咬人
Looking out through the window = Seeing from the window
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我的答案:Hearing the news, they set out/off immediately
解析答案:Hearing the news, They immediately set off.
【解析答案分析】
内部关系:动作
句子成分:状(时间),主+谓+状
【对比分析】
立即 immediately = at once = right away.
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set off PHRASAL VERB 动身;出发;启程
When you set off, you start a journey.
Nichols set off for his remote farmhouse in Connecticut… 尼科尔斯动身去他在康涅狄格州的偏僻农舍了。
set out PHRASAL VERB 动身;出发;启程
When you set out, you start a journey.
When setting out on a long walk, always wear suitable boots. 每次出发远行,都要穿合适的鞋子。
我的答案:Walking on the street, I saw him.
解析答案:Walking in the street, I saw him.
【解析答案分析】
内部关系:动作
句子成分:状(时间),主+谓+宾
【对比分析】
一般是用 in,英国地区比较常见,北美地区有些也会有用 on
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我的答案:Standing on the cliff, I felt so nervous
解析答案:Standing on the cliff, I felt very nervous.
【解析答案分析】
内部关系:描述
句子成分:状,主+系+表
【对比分析】
一致
So = very
So adv 很;极 very; extremely
I’m so glad to see you. 见到你真高兴
Very adv (置于形容词、副词和限定词前)很,非常,十分,极 used before adjectives, adverbs and determiners to mean ‘in a high degree’ or ‘extremely’
very small 很小
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我的答案:He felled off his bicycle, cutting his legs
解析答案:He fell off his bike, cutting his leg.
【解析答案分析】
内部关系:动作
句子成分:主+谓+状,状(结果)
【对比分析】
1)我的 felled off 是被砍倒,fall off 才是摔跤
Fell (动词+名词短语) 摔倒;砍伐(树木);击倒,打倒(某人) fells, felling, felled, felled
Fell is the past tense of fall .
VERB 砍伐,砍倒(树木)
If trees are felled, they are cut down.
Badly infected trees should be felled and burned. 感染严重的树应该砍倒焚烧。
VERB 击倒;打倒 If you fell someone, you knock them down, for example in a fight.
…a blow on the forehead which felled him to the ground. 打在额头上、将他击倒在地的一拳
fall
VERB 落下;坠落;掉落
If someone or something falls, they move quickly downwards onto or towards the ground, by accident or because of a natural force.
Her father fell into the sea after a massive heart attack… 她父亲在一次严重的心脏病发作后坠入海中。
VERB 摔倒;跌倒;倒塌
If a person or structure that is standing somewhere falls, they move from their upright position, so that they are then lying on the ground.
The woman gripped the shoulders of her man to stop herself from falling… 这个女人抓住丈夫的肩膀,以免摔倒。
2)bicycle VS bike 两者可以通用,但是 bike 更口语化
Bike noun (informal) 自行车;脚踏车 a bicycle
She got on her bike and rode off. 她骑上自行车走了。
Bicycle noun also informal bike 自行车;脚踏车
a road vehicle with two wheels that you ride by pushing the pedals with your feet
He got on his bicycle and rode off. 他骑上自行车走了。
3)leg 是可数名词,所以可以用 legs
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whole有两种词性,你查到了吗?
whole 作名词时,词典里有 the whole of sth这个用法,表示 all that there is of sth 全部;全体;所有。比如:the whole of Asia, the whole of August.
the whole Beijing 的说法也没有问题,此时 whole 是形容词。
从表达习惯上来说,the whole of Beijing 比 the whole Beijing更常用。whole 作形容词修饰地点,往往是 the whole town, the whole city, the whole world,比较少接像 Beijing 这样的专有名词。但是语法上没错,也有这么用的。
答案是用现在分词作结果状语:他摔车了,(结果)划破了腿。可以再看几个现在分词作结果状语的句子,体会一下:
-He turned off the lamp, seeing nothing.
-He’s always worrying about trifles, losing sight of his main objectives.
-The old man died all of a sudden, leaving the project unfinished.
看到有辆车过来了,他们就站到了路边。
Seeing a car coming, they stepped aside.
能否用 a car’s coming? 为什么用coming?
1)不能用 a car’s coming,因为首先要了解单词的用法,see 的用法是 see sb/sth do/doing/done, 没有 see sb’s doing 这种形式;
2)这是“动词+宾语+宾补”结构,宾补的形式是由宾语和宾补的关系决定的,
如果是主动关系,用 do/doing,如果是被动,用 done;
do 表示全过程,doing 表示正在做,done 表示被…
例句:
I see a car coming. 看到一辆车开过来了。
I saw you put the key in your pocket. 看到你把钥匙放兜里了。
His parents saw him awarded the winner’s medal.他父母观看了他被授予获胜者奖牌。
这题表示看到车正在开过来,car 和 come 是主动关系,正在进行,所以用现在分词作宾补,see a car coming。
有一首小诗,李白的《静夜思》。有没有兴趣翻译一下? 可以用到分词
静夜思
床前明月光,疑是地上霜。
举头望明月,低头思故乡。
Missing in the silent night(my)
The bright moonlight besides the bed seems the frost on the ground
Raising your head, you look at the moon,
bowing your head, you miss your hometown
A Tranquil Night(版本一)
Abed, I see a silver light,
I wonder if it’s frost aground.
Looking up, I find the moon bright;
Bowing, in homesickness I’m drowned.
Thoughts on a Silent Night(版本二)
Before my bed a pool of light –
O can it be frost on the ground.
Eyes raised, I see the moon so bright;
Head bent, in homesickness I’m drowned.
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