托福写作让步段Which one of the following values is the most important to share with a young child (aged ...

Which one of the following values is the most important to share with a young child (aged 5 to 10)?

▪️Being helpful to others

▪️Being honest

▪️Being well-organized

---本文，小编觉得well-organized是最重要的，所以我会先写一个让步段。

「让步段」

There is no denying that being helpful and honest are essential qualities for children, both of which can facilitate children's success in building and maintaining good relationships with others.【给出主题，说明helpful以及honest的重要性】

For one thing, if a child can be taught the significance of offering assistance to others from early childhood, he will be more willing to help his peers. Thus, his classmates or young friends will make friends with them after considering him to be trustworthy and reliable.【拓展第一个部分，helpful（助人）的重要性】

For another, being honest is widely acknowledged as what teachers and parents attach great importance to. Therefore, if a child never tells lies and always be honest to adults, they will love and respect him more, thus allowing him more freedom in doing whatever he likes. 【拓展第二个部分，honest（诚实）的重要性】

There is no denying that + 完整的句子「不可否认的是……」

essential qualities 「必备品质」

facilitate one's success in doing sth. 「有助于某人在某事上的成功」

build and maintain good relationships with others「建立与维持和他人的友好关系」

for one thing....for another...「一方面……另一方面……」

the significance of offering assistance to others 「助人的重要性」

consider sb. to be trustworthy and reliable「认为某人值得信赖」

be widely acknowledged as「被普遍认为是……」

what teachers and parents attach great importance to「老师和父母所重视的东西」

allow sb. more freedom in doing whatever sb. likes「给某人选择自己所爱的自由」‍

文末福利：

为啥well-organized更重要呢？

1.时间管理

2.金钱管理

---有利于当下（学习+生活） & 着眼于未来（工作所需）