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模板
第一段
现象解释类
第一句：
老版：with the rapid development of ——(主题词 ), it's of great necessity for —— to ——.
新版：In the contemporary world, ——(主题词) have / has become increasingly important.
It's of great necessity for —— to ——.
当今世界， 已经变得越来越重要。对于某类人来说，做某件事非常有必要。
sb. (students, freshman, citizens, parents, patients, senior people, residents, staff,)
第二句：
reasons and concerts evidence to support my point are follows.
The followings are reasons and concerts evidence to support my point.
谚语类
As an old saying goes, ——. For ——(us college students / all of us), it has an increasingly important significance: ——(解释含义).
The following reasons can account for this issue.
观点选择类
ln the contemporary world, ——(主题词) have/has become increasingly important.
When faced with decision of (A) or (B) , quite a few would deem that —— , but others, in contrast, believe that A/B is the premier choice and that is also my point.
Among countless reasons which support my view, there are three conspicuous aspects as follow.
当面对A或B的决定时，相当多的人会认为，但另一些人，相反，认为 A/B是首要的选择，这也是我的观点。在无数支持我观点的理由中，有三个显著的方面如下。
图表类
As is starkly mirrored (reflected) in the image / chart(表格) that —— (一句话，描述图片)
It is revealed that ——(图片内涵)
The following reasons can account for this issue. (过渡句)
第二段
论点1
In the first place, there is no doubt that——
we can' t divorce from reality that ——.
论据1
Based on big data, most of —— (successful social elites) admitted that —— (they are spent 2/3 of time in doing sth.)
论点2
Moreover, no one can deny that ——. (—— makes us weaker / stronger)
论据2
Where there is / are ——, there is ——.
where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者，事竟成。
where there is Internet, there are accesses to online courses. 哪里有互联网，哪里就可以访问在线课程。
论点3
Last but not least, I firmly believe that ——(观点3)
if we don't ——, we will / will not ——.
If we don't respect others, we will not get respect from others.
论据3
加分版：
The + 比较级 + 动词，the + 比较级 + 动词
eg：the more friends you have, the happier you are.
简单版：
Although······
第三段
In conclusion, ——. If we spare no effort to ——, the future of —— will be both hopeful and rosy.
promising adj.有希望的，有前途的
rosy adj. 玫瑰色的，愉快的，欣欣向荣的
Why students should be encouraged to develop the ability to meet challenges.
ln the contemporary world, the ability to meet challenges has become increasingly important. lt's of great necessity for students to improve the ability to solve problems when facing difficulty. The following are reasons and concrete evidence to support my view point. In the first place,there is no doubt that we can' t divorce from reality that challenge is everywhere(we can ' t avoid challenges). Based on big data，most successful social elites admitted that they've spent 2/3 of their time in facing challenges. Moreover,no one can deny that challenges make us stronger. Where there are difficulties, there are opportunities. Last but not least, l firmly believe that without the ability to meet challenges, we can't make any achievements. ( lf we don't have the ability to meet challenges, we can’t do anything.) The more problems you solve, the smarter and capable you are.
In conclusion, the ability to meet challenges and solve problems is essential for everyone. If we spare no effort to cultivate this ability, the future of our study and career will be both hopeful and rosy.
What is worth doing is worth doing well
As an old saying goes: What is worth doing, worth doing well. For us college students, it has an increasingly important significance: If you want to achieve something, you need a serious attitude. The following reasons can account for this issue. ln the first place,there is no doubt that we can’t divorce from the reality that attitude plays an important role in one's success. Based on big data, most successful social elites admitted that they have a serious mindset towards everything. Moreover, no one can deny that a serious attitude makes us stronger. Where there is serious spirit, there are opportunities. Last but not least, l firmly believe that without a serious attitude, we can't make any achievements.(If we don't have the serious mindset, we can't do anything.) The more serious you are, the more possibility you will succeed . ln conclusion, the serious attitude towards everything is essential for everyone. If we spare no effort to(不遗余力）cultivate this mindset, the future of our study and career will be both hopeful and rosy.
China's achievement in the poverty alleviation
As is starkly mirrored in the chart（表格) that Chinese rural population has been all lifted out of poverty. lt is revealed that China's achievements in poverty alleviation are extraordinary.（图片内涵)The following reasons can account for this issue.(过渡句)
ln the first place,there is no doubt that officials in the governments have played an important role in this process . Based on big data, most of the governors involved have admitted that they've spent2/3 of their time in the rural area. Moreover; no one can deny that the poverty alleviation policy is indeed beneficial. Where there are good policies, there are incentives. Last but not least, I firmly believe that the personal efforts of the rural residents can' t be ignored. The harder they work，the wealthier they are.
In conclusion, the accomplishment of poverty alleviation in China is outstanding. lf we spare no efforts to implement the policy and maintain the work, the future of our country will be both hopeful and rosy.