转发:考研小作文

小作文!满分!套路!速取!

原创: 韦林英语教研组  朱伟老师  今天

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昨天晚上,周兆鑫老师本着分分必争,小作文分数虽低、但是羊毛也要薅的精神,为我们精析了小作文应该如何写出高分。让同学们在考研写作的路上,尽量避开作文丢分的陷阱。

下面,让一起回顾韦林名师团——周兆鑫老师的优质、限时、免费精品课《2019考研写作套路终极总结-小作文套路》精讲部分。

【OpenDay】写作终极套路点题班 Lesson2

103分钟,上过课的同学们都清楚地明白如何使用写作套路。

首先,周兆鑫老师希望同学明确一点:

小作文的题材一般都是如投诉信、道歉信、邀请信、感谢信、求职信、推荐信之类的应用文。

而应用文本身具有一定的目的性,那就是准确传达信息。

同时强调:应试写作的关键在于三个重要的原则。

第一原则是不犯错。

这里的错是指低级错误,如词汇拼写错误、明显的语法错误等。

第二就是要包含所有内容要点,并准确传达。

这就要求我们必须通过作文所给信息,提炼出写作提纲和写作步骤。

第三条重要的原则,也就是我们老生常谈的书写问题。

在写作过程当中,字迹必要达到清晰整齐。

原因很简单:同学们认真完成一篇考研英语作文的字数,其实并不算少。

当阅卷老师在看作文的时候,第一件需要做的事情就是检查“颜值”(卷面是否美观)是否过关,紧接着就是看“阴影面积”(字数)是否达到了要求。

因此,同学们对于英语写作的最低要求,就是必须把字迹写得整洁干净,以满足第一点的要求。

而也只有这样阅卷老师们才有充分的理由,给你一个写作高分。

下面,周兆鑫老师就以书信为例,独家教授4+8小作文写作套路。

同学们也许不知道,每一篇小作文题目,都隐藏着得分点。

所以,我们要学会一种能力,就是将题目要求,转化为得分的内容大纲。这其中包括了四个审题步骤:

1.  明确收信人

2.  找到写信目的

3.  确定提纲要求

4.  根据作文形式,并确定结尾内容(例如感谢、回复等)。

掌握这个四个步骤,不仅可以确保你在考场上,不漏写重要的信息,还能让你拥有更多的拿到作文高分的机会。

在完成以上四个步骤之后,接下来的拿分关键,就是为各个框架,填充上自己的写作语言。

古有曹子建七步成诗

今有周兆鑫八句成文

这个时候,就需要使用周老师在本节课上所总结的小作文八句作文法。

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目的段2句加提纲段4-5句,再加上结尾段的1-2句,就可以完美的组成一篇高分作文。

写作目的段

本段分为两句,一是自我介绍,常用句式有:

1. This is Li Ming, one ordinary student in our university.

2. As one ordinary student in our beloved university.

3. As one sophomore in this beloved university.

当然,同学们还可以总结积累一些自己喜欢的句子,但前提一定是不能错!不能错!不能错!

二是表明写信目的,常用句式有:

1.  I am writing this letter, with my full heart, for the purpose of conveying that sv.

其中 with my full heart (全心全意地)还可替换为

2.  with my distinct honor 满怀敬意地

3.  for the purpose of doing sth (目的是为了做某事)该表达可直接体现写信目的,也可用to do sth 来表达。

在此,周老师着重强调,应试写作就是严禁创作。低分作文甚至零分作文都是所谓的创作导致的错误+不切题导致的。

到这里,相信你已经可以写出目的段的内容了。

This is Li Ming, one of your students. I am writing this letter for the purpose of asking for your help. Could you please do me a favour to write a recommendation letter for me?

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完成提纲段

此篇作文的提纲段包括四部分。

1.背景

写作背景怎么找?很简单,题目中write a letter 之前的内容就是背景。背景句有两种写法:引用或者改写题干。

常用句式有:

As we both know / It is well known that / It has been generally accepted that sv.

接着表达观点 have an effect on sth

As you know, I am striving to secure one position in ABC company. It is well known that you are one of the most prestigious experts in the area related.

2.衔接

该部分因前面已经进行说明,可直接写提纲部分。

提纲一:提出建议和要求

If you were able to attest my qualification for the position and the skills I have attained.

During the last four years in university, it would be much better.

常用句式有:

be able to do sth 能够做某事

attest my qualification 证明我的资质

the skills (that) I have attained 我所习得的技能

It would be much better. 这将是极好的

提纲二:进一步阐述推荐的重要性

Your recommendation would enhance my prospects of achieving my career goals.

提纲三:提供联系方式

Please let me know if there is any further information I can provide to assist you in giving me the recommendation letter. I can be reached at [email protected]. Alternatively, you can phone me through the number attached.

常用句式有:

please let me know 请让我知晓

let sb. do sth. 让某人做某事

any further information 任何进一步的信息

information (that) I can provide 我能够提供的信息

敲黑板,千万不要把自己的个人信息写入作文中!!!除非你真的叫李明。

感谢结尾段

终于到结尾了,最后主要是就是表达一下感谢,盼复之类的意思就OK啦。

Thanks a lot for your precious time. I am looking forward to your favourable reply at your earliest convenience.

常用句式有:

Thanks a lot for your precious time 感谢您宝贵的时间

Thanks a lot for your attention to this letter. 感谢您对此信的关注(万能结尾感谢句)

Thanks a lot for what you have done for me. 感谢你为我所做的一切。

好了,那么现在一篇漂亮的高分小作文已经完成:

Dear Professor Brown,

This is Li Ming, one of your students. I am writing this letter for the purpose of asking for your help. Could you please do me a favor to write a recommendation letter for me?

As you know, I am striving to secure one position in ABC Company. It is well known that you are one of the most prestigious experts in the area related. If you were able to attest my qualification for the position and the skills I have attained during the last four years in university, it would be much better. Your recommendation would enhance my prospects of achieving my career goals. Please let me know if there is any further information I can provide to assist you in giving me the recommendation letter. I can be reached at [email protected]. Alternatively, you can phone me through the number attached.

Thanks a lot for your precious time. I am looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.

Yours sincerely,

                                                                  Li Ming

书,分割线

看完周兆鑫老师的写作过程,同学们是否对于英语写作有了一个重新的认识:原来写出一篇高分小作文,竟然是如此简单。相信同学们在最后冲刺阶段,紧紧跟着周老师的写作思路,你也一定可以做到。

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