2018年9月行动复盘

写作提升之方法指导

英语写作提升过程:大量阅读和背诵 -> 细心体会,琢磨用法 -> 一定量的写作+反馈。

注解:1)背诵:要求一字不差的背出,回忆不起来的地方可能是潜在的知识盲点,应认真对待;2)反馈:对照批改版本,明确自己的语法和用法盲点 -> 分析错误背后反映的问题,形成问题清单 -> 反复朗读背诵 -> 写作前后查看清单

Less is more,认真对待每日一词和每周一段。

写作提升之素材积累

Justin文章经典句子赏析

A new coffee chain is making waves

这是文章的标题,简洁有力。chain和waves在这里都有双关之意,根据牛津解释,chain:  a group of hotels, restaurants, or shops owned by the same company。 所以a coffee chain是a group of coffee shops,而make waves在牛津的解释:create a significant impression。同时chain也是锁链,wave有波浪之意,这二者之间也可以产生生动形象的联系。

This nascent coffee brand has gone completely viral and is said to rival Starbucks.

nascent:新兴的。go viral:在互联网上快速传播的。viral与rival属于回文构词法。

If you asked coffee drinkers in cities a few months ago where they bought coffee, you would most likely have heard "Starbucks", the uncontested go-to spot for the caffeine-dependent. 

首先,这是条件语气(conditional mood),关于条件语气与虚拟语气(subjunctive mood),请见我的另一篇随笔。uncontested go-to spot:没有争议的老地方。caffeine-dependent:与coffee drinker同义替换,文采盎然。

Today, however, a less familiar name may come up more often as it is barging into the coffee retail market in China: Luckin. 

这个句子的特点便是头尾简洁,突出了重点,however作为插入语而不是放在开头,这在The elements of style中被强调:


The elements of style

而Luckin作为本文的焦点,在结尾才被点出,属于periodic sentence,制造了悬念。关于periodic sentence和loose sentence,见这里。barge into:闯入,十分形象。

Unlike Starbucks, the Seattle-born global juggernaut, Luckin is a homegrown novice, despite its English name and sleek design. Barely five months old, this toddler is punching far above its weight.

Starbucks与Seattle构成头韵,juggernaut比喻巨头,novice和toddler用来比喻新兴的Luckin,barely替代only,punch above its weight表示与高级别选手的较量。

It boasts three major highlights

这个boast用法一定要记住,可以认为boast就是“有”的同义词,而且其中暗含着骄傲的意思。在《经济学人》中也用到类似到:Their tech giants have collected the most data, attracted the best talent and boast the biggest computing clouds.

剩下的经典内容还很多,由于时间原因就不一一写在这里,之后我还会继续慢慢总结。

英语三大词典汇总

生词或单词解释词典:

Onelook:搜集了众多词典解释的综合网页词典,是我查单词的入口。

Merriam-Webster, Oxford living dictionaries, Macmillan dictionary:这三大词典是我查看单词释义的主要途径。

Etymology dictionary:词源词典,生词记忆的好帮手。

单词搭配词典:ozdic (牛津搭配词典)

同义词词典:Roget's Thesaurus

除了这些之外,Frazeit 能查看短语组合的例句,可以帮助我们快速判断是否能用这种组合,以及查找例句。

然而,就像Justin所说的,高级写作不能仅仅依赖词典,而是要靠大量的阅读和实战练习。

高阶技巧

1)句式工整对称

Three misfortunes — job loss, hospitalized mother, and divorce from his wife — have crippled him.

2)段落开头或者结尾用短句表强调

Luckin comes prepared.

It boasts three major highlights: ...

* 一句话也可以运用这种方法,比如上面介绍的:

Today, however, a less familiar name may come up more often as it is barging into the coffee retail market in China: Luckin. 

3)并列词的头韵或者尾韵

Unlike Starbucks, the Seattle-born global juggernaut, luckin is a homegrown novice.

Why don't you treat yourself a free and fresh coffee?

4)回文构词法 (anagram)

This coffee brand has gone viral and is said to rival Starbucks.

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