上大学前要不要工作或旅游一年

Taking a gap year before going to college by finding a job or travelling around the world is a wise choice for students.

主题句：Firstly, spending a year outside school can help students find out where their interests really are.

因果链：

背景：In their time before going to collge, most students spend most of their time and effort studying all kinds of subjects, as a result, they don’t really know what their real interests are.

解决：luckily, this problem can be solved by taking a gap year before going to college. one year or even more time of travelling or working can be enough for most students to find where their interests lie. for example, if they find themselves have a strong strength in communicating with others, they can pay more attention to strengthen their advantages about this.

主题句:  taking a gap year can give students more motivation of study.

背景：most students study hard simply because their parents told them to do so, which means they don’t have the inner desire to study hard.

解决：️however, during the work they do in the gap year, they will realize how hard life is and as a result, they could get the motivation of studying hard in college to get a better paid job after graduation. ️or else, if they choose to travel duing the gap year, they would find something they really like, which they can not afford at present. with the buring desire to get it, they would work harder in college.

总结：no matter they choose to travel or work during the gap year, they could get a strong motivation by finding out what life really is.

让步段：

让步：of course, taking a gap year would delay the time they come into uiniversity.

转折：however, the benefits students get form it is much more than the cost.

总结： hopefully, all the students as well as their parents could seriously consider this plan, so that the students can get more by doing so.