1711浙江续写

续写评分标准

第五档

（21-25分）

与所给短文融合度高，与所提供的各段落开头语衔接合理。

内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。

所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意思表达。

有效地使用了词语间的连接成分，所续写短文结构紧凑。

第四档

（16-20分）

与所给短文融合度较高，与所提供的各段落开头语衔接较为合理。

内容比较丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。

所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但不影响意思表达。

比较有效地使用了词语间的连接成分，所续写短文结构紧凑。

第三档

（11-15分）

与所给短文关系较为密切，与所提供的各段落开头语有一定程度衔接。

写出了若干有关内容，应用了4个以上短文中标出的关键词语。

应用语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求，虽有一些错误，但不影响意思表达。

应用简单的句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。

第二档

（6-10分）

与所给短文关系有一定关系，与所提供的各段落开头语有一定程度衔接。

写出了一些有关内容，应用了3个以上短文中标出的关键词语。

语法结构单调，词汇项目有限，有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响了意思的表达。

较少使用句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性。

第一档

（1-5分）

与所给短文和开头语衔接较差。

产出内容太少，很少使用短文中标出的关键词语。

语法结构单调，词汇项目很有限，有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误，严重影响了意思的表达。

缺乏句间的连接成分，全文内容不连贯。

0分 白卷，内容太少无法评判或所写内容与所提供内容无关。

读后续写题目（2017、11、3）

第二节  读后续写（满分25分）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

A vacation with my mother

  I had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.

  My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.

  David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept:” You stand outside the door and play lookout while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh… I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any chances.

On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections.If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world as as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Para1:  The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.

Para2:  We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.

absent-minded，forgetful，trip，Dad，trouble