2021-09-23翻译练习-2021政府工作报告（中-英）

年初剩余的551万农村贫困人口全部脱贫、52个贫困县全部摘帽。

我：All 5.51 billion rural residents and 52 countrys got rid of poverty.

正：All remaining poor rural residents, totaling 5.51 billion in early 2020, were lifted from poverty, as well all of China's remaining 52 poor countries. 

Notes:

年初  in early 2020

剩余的  remaining

脱贫 be lifted from poverty

全部 all/all of

习得：最后一句使用......as well......, ...... 也一样。避免重复。

继续打好蓝天、碧水、净土保卫战，完成污染防治攻坚战阶段性目标任务。

我：We carry on fighting for fresh air, clean water, unpolluted soil and complete stage task of pollution prevention.

正：We continued working to keep our skies blue, our water clear, and our lands pollution-free, and accomplished the objectives for pollution prevention and control for the current stage. 

Notes:

继续 continue doing

打好蓝天、碧水、净土保卫战  work to keep our skies blue,our water clear,and our lands pollution-free.

完成 accomplish 

目标 objectives for

污染防治 pollution prevention and control

阶段性/现阶段 the current stage

长江、黄河、海岸带等重要生态系统保护和修复大工程深入实施。生态建设得到加强。

我：Eco system protection and restoration engineer for Yezhi river, Yellow rive and along beach areas come into operation. Eco constructions get strenghtened.

正：We carried out major projects for protecting and restoring key ecosystems in Yangtze River and Yellow River basin and along coastlines, and stepped up our ecological conservation endeavors.

Notes:

实施 carry out

大工程 major projects

重要的 生态系统  key ecosystems

流域（增译）basin

海岸带  along coatlines 

生态建设 ecological conservation 

加强......(努力) (在数量或者速度方面) step up......endeavour(努力)

习得：动词开头的句子，加主语 “我们”

稳妥化解地方政府债务风险，及时处置一批重大金融风险隐患。

我：We solve local financial crisis in a proper way and timely tackle finance in potential dangers. 

正：We took prudent steps to defuse local goverment debt risks and acted swiftly to defuse a number of major financial risks and potential danger.

稳妥地 take prudent steps to 

化解/缓和、平息  defuse

及时处置 act swiftly to

一批 a number of 

重大的 major

金融 风险  Financial risks

隐患 potential danger

习得：几乎都是一字一词对应翻译到位。