10月晨读笔记1

join与join with区别

join with:与…一同做某事;  join:参加，加入

Five score years ago, a great American, in whose symbolic shadow we stand today, signed the Emancipation Proclamation.农奴解放宣言

1.注意韵律：头韵

2. 表达要有层次，不要把所有信息变成主要信息，否则就没有所谓的主要信息。

3. 插入语可以减缓一个句子的节奏，显得更凝重

This momentous decree came as a great beacon light of hope to millions of Negro slaves who had been seared in the flames of withering injustice.

momentous: 比important 语义强

had been seared: 1.注意时态呼应 2. 注意sear语义比suffer更强，水深火热中

It came as a joyous daybreak to end the long night of thier captivity.

注意与前句的照应：

joyous对应had been seared

long night对应a great beacon light of hope

captivity对应withering injustice