小试翻译：I craved the years would quickly pass （辜鸿铭）

原文

I craved the years would quickly pass

That you might lose

The brightness of your eyes, the peach-bloom of your skin,

And all the cruel splendour of your youth.

Then I alone would love you

And you at last would care.

The envious years have passed full soon

And you have lost

The brightness of your eyes, the peach-bloom of your skin,

And all the charming splendour of your youth.

Alas, I do not love you

And I care not if you care.

翻译：

我曾乞求岁月匆匆

带走你明亮的双眼

你如桃花般娇嫩的皮肤

和你迷人的青春朝气

那样我就可以独自爱你

你也会在乎我的爱

岁月真的匆匆过了

带走了你明亮的眼睛

你如桃花般娇嫩的皮肤

和你迷人的青春朝气

可是我却不再爱你

也不再在乎你的爱

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