第12次打卡（11月24日）

1)The greenhouse effects when gas ......here......I'd like to talk the greenhouse ......so high......

2)Over the next few weeks,we are going to focus on carbon and......the greenhouse effects.Everyone knows that's right.

3)So ......today on the differences on the good,bad and well not so bad.The potentially OK, carbon burning.OK,good carbon burning well,we will have personal ......because carbon burning is the basis of life.

4)......sugar......And the energy produced by the reation is then used to power themselves.So just by breathing,you could see ......and contribute ......carbon atmosphere.

5)You want to see......gets some feedbacks on your group proposal.......geography society......competition.I had looked three proposals.I think really it's  a good choice.

6)In fact, I only have few things to say about it but even ......dovcument like this.You really have to be careful to avoid ......of proposal and even constant......So read through carefully before......

7)And I made few notes on the proposal about things which could have been a better consequence.As is the writing itself,I ......as well as I thought it could be proved.

8)Generally speaking,I feel you often use complex structure of long sentences......And as a consequence,although your paragraph......It's quite hard to follow your trains of thought.So cut down......

9)My father was a great......cow boy......So I was suggested to see the......As a consequence,it feels very familiar to me......so it was so more ......I visited.

10)Yet,another thing is about atmosphere  carbon.It keeps us from freezeing.Because without the carbon and greenhouse gases,our planet will be the same temperature as out of the space around for 4 degrees absolutely 0.There's nothing going on that temperature.So without atmosphere carbon,life could't exist on earth.