2017.11.15简爱

原文

I was so frightened.
Suddenly in the darkness I saw a light moving on the ceiling. I felt sure it must be a ghost, a visitor from another world.My head was hot , my heart beat fast.

翻译

我是如此的害怕
突然，我看到黑暗中的天花板上有一束光在移动。我确定那一定是鬼魂，另外一个世界的来访者。我头很烫，我心跳加速。

摘串：

I was so…

I was so calm

I saw …moving …

I saw a shooting star moving fast across the night sky.

I felt sure

I felt sure it must be a meteor.

My head was hot.

改写

I was so calm in the countryside.
Suddenly in the darkness I saw a light moving fast across the night sky .I felt sue it must be a meteor. A shooting star from another space. I was so excited. My heart beat fast.