甘比英文拓展写作-描述风景-A15003

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          The picture demonstrates the scenery of a(valley忘记加冠词)valley in autumn. We can see branches（trunks树干不是树枝）of the old trees in the distance. They are darkolivegreen and some

of them fall on the ground. Most of them are huge and weighted.（weighty单词用错，表示沉重的）If we takea(takea closer look at短语写错) closer look at the picture, the sienna body of the branch（trunk此处为树干）runs across the stream impresses un with the forestgreen moss .Green

grass cover the valley and darkred leaves can be seen everywhere.

       The stream flows quietly and the branches（boles此处为树干）can be clearly reflected. The dimgray dry branches(trunks)and a big stone with green moss stay in the water. The trunk, in front of thebig stone, falls in the water and slows down the flow of water. The leaves, bolesand stream are integral and they create an atmosphere of esthetic peace andquiet.

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The picture demonstrates the scenery of a valley in autumn. We can see trunks of the old trees in the distance. They are darkolivegreen and some of them fall on the ground. Most of them are huge and weighty. If we take a closer look at the picture, the sienna body of thetrunk runs across the stream impresses un with the forestgreen moss .Green grass cover the valley and darkred leaves can be seen everywhere.

The stream flows quietly and the boles can be clearly reflected. The dimgray dry trunks and a big stone with green moss stay in the water. The trunk, in front of the big stone, falls in the water and slows down the flow of water. The leaves, boles and stream are integral and they create an atmosphere of esthetic peace and quiet.