famous 英语作文，总觉得语法有问题，但又看不出来，请简友们看看。

In my opinion, to be famous is not only good for our economic life, but also benefit our social life. On the one hand, if you have fame, you will succeed. You can do anything you want, including making a lot of money. On the other hand, you can make friends with quantities of people who come from different countries.In this way, you can get more opportunities which will make you better. What's more, when you be famous, you will be admired by others.

Fame is like a double-edged sword, there are good and bad. When you become famous, you must lose something. You may not have your own life. Public would bother you all the time. If you make any tiny mistakes, others will laugh you. In addition, it brings you glut of stress in your everyday life.

In short, don't forget your original heart when you succeed.