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Welcome to American.Today we are go to the statue of liberty.first,you must understand the history of statue of liberty.October 28th 1886,the statue of liberty finish.on 1924 become national monument.on 1942,American think the statue of liberty become a national heritage.At last,on 1984 named as UNESCO world heritage site.now, the base is an American Immigration History Museum. Everyone,you know the statue of liberty how tall?yes,it is 46 meter.add substrate is 93 meter.it is very heave.the statue of liberty have 200 ton.the statue of liberty one of the most famous statue around the world.look she wear crown that symbol the seven continents in the world,right hand hold fire.12point 8 meter tall symbol free.left hand have book,book write on July 4th 1776 law dictionary symbol.the declaration of independence.under foot have break down key that symbol leave restrain and free.now,please follow me appreciate Statue of Liberty from different views.this is dedication.because the statue of liberty is sheet copper,so the statue of liberty be struck by lightning 600 second-rate.the statue of liberty not only symbol American,but also a symbol off friend ship between the people of U.S. And France.now let鈥檚go to the next views.
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Welcome to American.
Today we are go to visit the statue of liberty.
First,you must understand the history of statue of liberty.
October 28th 1886,the statue of liberty was finished.
1924 it became national monument.
1942,American tried to make the statue of liberty a national heritage.
At last,on 1984 the statue was named as UNESCO world heritage site.
Now,itsbase is an American Immigration History Museum.
Everyone,do you know the height of the statue of liberty?
yes,it is 46 meters.And it will be 93 meters with itssubstrate.
At the same time,it is very heavy.
the statue of libertyweights200 tons.
the statue of liberty one ofwe all know that this statue isthe most famous statue around the world.
Look,the crown she is wearing symbolizes the seven continents in the world.
Under her feet,There is a broken shackle that symbolizes getting rid of restrain and embracing freedom.
Now, Let’s appreciate the Statue of Liberty from different views.
Because the statue of liberty is sheer copper,and it is so high, it has been stricken by lightning for more than 600 times.
the statue of liberty is not only a symbol of American,but also a symbol of friendship between the people of U.S.and France.
注意象征的动词是symbolize;名词是symbol