甘比英文拓展写作-描述机械-鯨鯨菰

凯迪拉克

From the picture we can see a cool car whose brand is Cadillac. It is a division of the U.S.-based General Motors (GM) that markets luxury vehicles worldwide. Generally the price of Cadillac is 500 thousands yuan at least. In the picture, the only one stays on the highway. Beyond it nothing exists except broad mountains. The solitude sets the car a sense of understated luxury.

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When we observe the car closely, we`ll find that its shape is not so modern. What we are familiar with in today`s car markets is racing body---so called ‘streamline’. However, this one has an outline seemed to be connected in straight lines. And the height of the cockpit is a little low---people in it have limited activity space. Indeed in 1970s-80s, this design is the main style of Cadillac. The paint job in this car choose black as the main color and silver in those attached parts such as rear-view mirror and door handle. It`s a classic color collocation.

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总结：这次作文写的时候很轻松就到了160多词，然而通篇看下来写的内容并不多，说白了，也就是把整体造型好好地写了写。对比群里讨论着轮胎，挡泥板，车灯等等的同学，感觉自己的这篇作文收的有点快。然而如果再让我写，我也写不出来了，难道还要再写啥”轮胎在车的下方”这种句子吗~先打卡，然后好好研究群里的信息。