GRE习作-People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making

People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making


Many genious individuals contend that people's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making. Admittedly, forces are powerful enough to regulate many behaviors varying from children to adults. However, I don't agree this conclusion. Totally, I conclude that the behaviors of ours are largely determined by our own making rather than external forces.
I admit that forces have powerful functions regarding to the regulation of people's behavior. In our daily lifes, we need to obey any kind of rules. If we disobeyed those rules, others or the society would punish us for the inbehavior. The punishment is often very hard and the receptors of it do not definitely want  it again. So in fact, people in this society should obey all the rules issued by our government or any insititutions relevant to one individual. For instance, the law is there and anybody who wants to break the law for their own benefits will finally pay back what they got by their inappropriate behaviors.
Moreover, the internal incentives of our behaviors are from inside of our minds which reflect a personal preference to the external environments. The real power to drive people keep a behavior is actually the wish to live a peace and healthy life of their own. It is unbelivable to carry all the book of rules in our purse  anywhere we go which means that people know the rules by their heart. Any concious elites have a good judgement of good and evil. The law is only an external form of those judgements already roots in each normal person's minds.So  actually, in most conditions, people keep their good behaviors due to their own making to achieve a good opportunity to live better.
In addition, own making is an efficient way to keep each elites more durable in the shaping of behaviors which demonstrates a more probability that own making is the final decider. The efficiency of forces such as rules and laws are trancident which indicates that the power of them diasappear as soon as the supervisions disappear. It does not influence its receptor's mind by a good guidence. Nevertheless, it employs the power of fear and hate. As a consequence, people become more fierce after the long-time constrain of forces.
In summary, people's behavior is determined by their own making to a larger degree rather than the forces of others or society. Although I have well understanding about the power of external forces in regulating people's external behavior, it is more like an sub factor in the determination of an genious individual's long-term behavior.