大学英语四级写作解析【第二套】

【第二套】感谢信：对于进入大学，感谢学校老师。

Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutesto write a letter to express your thanks to one of your school teachers uponentering college. You should write at least120words but no more than180words.

【真题解析】

这套写作题目相对而言比较简单，因为进入大学感谢老师的帮助。几乎没有陌生词汇。同时强调一下这些帮助的影响。当然了，这一篇比较接近感谢父母的那篇真题，考上大学或者进入大学毕竟也是一件重大的事情。

这封感谢信的写作思路如下：

称谓：Dear,

礼貌语：Yours sincerely ,

主体内容：

开头段：因为是私人信函，不用自我介绍。写信目的基本表达: I am writing this letter to do sth.不要忘记了感谢的几个单词：thanks, appreciation , gratitude.

中间段：主要写因为别人的帮助才进入了大学，老师是如何帮助你的（帮助的内容），这些帮助的影响（没有这些帮助，可能你就无法完成或者克服某些困难）。

结尾段：再次感谢。既然是感谢信，再多的感谢也不为过。

【参考范文】

Dear Professor XX,

I amwriting this letter to extend my heartfelt appreciation to you for your helpwith my preparation for entering college.

The mainreasons for this are as follows. To begin with, everything you did in schoolinspire me for a really long time. Because of your encouragement andachievement, I never give up after several failure. In addition, all the booksand suggestions you gave me during my preparation help me a lot. Without yourhelp, how could it be possible for me to crack down all the difficulty in mystudy? Last but not least, everything you taught me encourages me to be apersistent student.I would like totake this great opportunity to express my heartfelt gratitude to the help yourender me.

Yours sincerely,

XXXX