Thomas, a 27-years-old young man ,was suffering from the torture of diabetes.but surprisingly , he decided to fight with disease and managed to create a website in order to help those people who were also diagnosed with diabetes.
I admired thomas very much after reading his story,for he really grasps the meaning of helping others .In the society ,one can’t do and complete all the things by himself,therefore the coopration and help from others are needed. Frist ,helping others means helping ourselves.if we helped others who were in trouble,they would do us a favor in return in the future.second, helping others is not only a good quality, but also a good thing .we can gain a sense of happiness by helping others.Don’t grudge your lover or help ,for helping others is just helping yourselves eventually.
Luck, a teenage boy from a single-parent family,took no notice of his mother’s difficulty in raising him .he gave himself over to video games rather than study hard and learn to be an independent man.
Luck,however,is not alone.he is only one of those who take it for granted that their parents are responsible for them in all aspects of their life. They enjoy a life with everything ready for them,some even remain dependent on their parents after graduation from college.
This,I think,is indeed their parents’ fault, over-protective parents tend to neglect to teach their children how to live on their own ,I hope such parents could realize their mistake and stop spoiling their children so that they can grow up healthily.
一：衔接前后的词语
表示“首先”：first ,firstly, first of all, to begin with
表示“第二”：second，secondly,besides,furthermore
表示“最后”：finally ,last,lastly
二：表示总结的词语
表示“总之”：in a word, in short , to sum up ,in conclusion ,in summary
表示“综上所述”：from what has been discussed above,from the above analysis,from what has been mentioned above.
三：表示“最重要的是”的词语
Most important of all ,Last but not least
“引出例证”
Therefore，from the above example
四：评价过程中，需要前后衔接的常用句式
Admittedly,……but it won’t be the case that……
They may be right in saying that……but they fail to notice that……
It is natural to believe that……since……however,we canot ignore
partB写作技巧（120词）
先认真熟悉一遍短文，抓住主要思想，在脑海中构建出一个框架，确定要写的主题，然后开始给予适当的评价，并发表自己的见解。评价要有条理，采用衔接手法，层次清晰，行文流程，注意尽量不要使用短文中出现的词语。
注重语法（时态、主谓一致、单复数、主被动）、词汇（关联词、固定搭配、习惯用语）以及拼写和标点的正确运用。
PartA
邀请信
Dear_____,(称呼)
The New Year is coming soon,we will /I am going to _______________.
Would it be possible for you to meet us at/in__________(时间和地点)
We would be very happy to have you with us.
We____________________________(期待对方接受）
Yours,
**
求职信
Dear_____,(称呼)
I read in the newspaper the other day that__________(职位内容）
Now I am writing to apply for the position and I think I am quite qualified for it. I am______(应聘人的简单情况介绍）.I addition, I have taken many course_______(与职位相关的课程）.For further particulars, I shall be pleased to give you.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
**
道歉信
Dear_____,(称呼)
I am truly sorry that_____________(道歉原因）
The reason is that _______________(介绍原因）.Once again,
I am soory for any inconvenience caused.Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
**
祝贺信
Dear_____,(称呼)
I hear that __________(要祝贺的事情）.You must be very happy with it.
I am very happy for you and wish to extend to you my utmost congratulations. I believe_______(积极的评价）
Congratulations again!
Yours sincerely,
**
投诉信
Dear_____,(称呼)
I am __________(写信人的情况）.I am here writing to tell you that___________(投诉或者抱怨的事情）.____________(事情具体描述）.I hope____________(希望得到解决的结果和途径）.
I look forward to your qucik reply.
Yours sincerely,
**
感谢信
Dear_____,(称呼)
I am writing this letter to thank you for___________(要感谢的事情）.I would also like to thank you for___________(要感谢的另外一件事）._______________(对要感谢的事情进行描述）.
I would like to express my warm thanks to you!
Yours sincerely,
**
便条写作
Sep.20th
Peter，
I’d like to discuss with you about the concert to be held by the famous young Chinese pianist
Lang Lang on our campus.Well ,I succeeded in buying two cheapest tickets for both of us, that is, 20 Yuan each.Could we meet each other at 6:30 p.m. on the campus?Please call me if you find the time and the place are possible to you.
See you at the concern.
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申请类
Dear Professor Dickson,
I am writing to explore the possibility of going to your university to further my studies.I am now an undergraduate in Peking University and I am going to graduate in July this years. My major is biochemistry which is in accordance with your field of research .I got A for almost all my courses up so far.
You are certainly the top expert in this field.That’s why I want to study and do some research under your guidance very much .on the one hand,I can have access to all up-to-date information.on the other hand,I can get to know some famous scientists and the most recent development in this field.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
**
通知类
Notice
There is going to be a lecture of_____(题目）in the meeting room of the English Department
From___to____on(时间）.The lecture will be given by_____,who is from the Department of English Literature,Peking University.He will present________(内容），which you surely will enjoy very much.All the teacher and students are welcomed to attend this lecture.
English Department