靓靓英文演讲稿修改

Dear teachers,

Good morning, everyone!

Every good family needs a good family style. In every happy（ and：两个形容词之间要用and连接 ）big family, it will be warm because of the company of mom and dad, but（but it will） also （be）（ But连接两个句子，前后都要求是完整的结构）accompanied by the harmonious atmosphere of （a）family style.（style用的是单数形式，前面要加a）

A good family style can make a child grow up well, and I live in such a good family style. At home, parents will inevitably quarrel because of some bumps and bruits, but they never accuse each other, scold, more show in front of me is their rational sides. At ordinary times at home my mother will often nagging in the school should be how to respect the teachers and students, （表达太过于复杂繁琐，演讲者自己念起来很绕口，听者听起来更加难理解，建议换成： My mother always  talks me about how to respect my teachers and students at school ）more will talk about the truth of a step back, for a long time in my mind will also appear from time to time these words, not so much she was born to me and raise my mother, as she is the first mentor in my life.（建议换成更简单的表达方式：and  I always  remember  my mother's words and she is my friend  as well as  my teacher . ）

I always feel that this time of the day is the summary of the day. Of course, the etiquette at the dinner table must be followed. My mother always warned （warms）me about the following points:

1, eat don't Wolf down, mouth can't make a squawking sound.（ Don't eat too quickly ）

2. It is strictly prohibited to speak loudly while eating.

3. Don't raise your legs.

Although there are many rules, but it is because of these shackles let me grow up better.

（  Although 和but 不能同时使用在一个句子中，像shackles 这类词汇太复杂，尽量不要用。 Although there  are  many rules, they make me grow up better  ）Therefore, we should construct a harmonious family style. Parents should learn （how）to set a good example at home and（they  should） also（ learn how to ） maintain a close relationship with their children. In front of the children, they should learn （how）to restrain their bad feelings. Children should also learn（how）to put themselves in their parents' shoes to understand,（ 建议换成简单的表达：Children should understand their parents from their place）， And they should try to do their best, show in front of their parents.

（ and they should：两个并列句中的主语不能省略

（ That's all ，一般结束时都会运用上这样一句话，用中文来表达就是以上就是我想跟大家分享的内容）Thank you!