开头段:改写原题
主体段:总结介绍,具体数据
结尾段:总数结论
1. 动态语言表达
趋势上升
v | pt | n |
---|---|---|
increase | -d | increase |
rise | rose | rise |
grow | grew | growth |
go up | went up | -- |
趋势下降
v | pt | n |
---|---|---|
decrease | -d | decrease |
decline | -d | decline |
drop | dropped | drop |
fall | fell | fall |
go down | went down | -- |
趋势上升/下降
了
v + by
到
v + to
趋势波动
v | n |
---|---|
fluctuate | fluctuation |
rise and fall | rise and fall |
go up and down | -- |
趋势稳定
remain + constant, stable, steady, unchanged
stand at this level
程度幅度大
adj | adv |
---|---|
rapid | rapidly |
sharp | sharply |
dramatic | dramatically |
significant | significantly |
remarkable change
幅度中等
adj | adv |
---|---|
gradual | gradually |
steady | steadily |
moderate | moderately |
幅度小幅
adj | adv |
---|---|
slow | slowly |
slight | slightly |
marginal | marginally |
时间
2000-2010
from 2000 to 2010
during the period from 2000 to 2010
between 2000 and 2010
over/during the ten years
in three different/separate years
in the rest of the period
大约
about, around, nearly, approximately
动态图句型
- 被描述对象 + 趋势动词 + 程度副词 + 时间
在2016年,北京房价剧烈上升。
House prices in Beijing increased dramatically in 2016.
- There be a + 程度形容词 + 趋势名词 + in + 被描述对象 + 时间
- There was a dramatic increase in house prices of Beijing in 2016
- 被描述对象 + experience a + 程度形容词 + 趋势名词 + 时间
- 从2010年到2015年,移民美国的人数稳步上升。
- The number of migrants to America experienced a gradual rise from 2010 to 2015.
- 时间 + see/witness a +程度形容词 + 趋势名词 + in + 被描述对象。
- 过去的8年见证了诺基亚用户的大幅下降。
- The past of eight years witnessed a rapid decrease in the number of Nokia users.
被描述对象 + see/witness a +程度形容词 + 趋势名词 + in + 时间。
The figure for 被描述对象 + 趋势动词 + 程度副词 + 时间。
最高点
- reach the peak/summit/highest point at
- peak at
最低点
- reach the bottom/lowest point at
- bottom out at
2. 线图
单线图
主体段一段
- 趋势
- 点
- 如图所示,在这段期间鸟类数量在下降
- we can see from the graph that the population decreased over time.
- 具体而言,birds population在1977年的数量为120 million,在接下来的3年逐渐上升,并且在1980年达到了最高值:大约126 million。
- to be more specific/exact/precise, the birds population begun with 120 million in 1977, and then increased gradually over next 3 year, reaching the peak at about 126 million in 1980.
- more specifically/exactly/precisely,
从1980年到1986年,birds population剧烈下降。1986年以后,birds population开始波动,一直维持到1995年。
It then experienced a sharp drop between 1980 and 1986, with a slight fluctuation until 1995.
在接下来的6年,birds population 轻微下降,在2001年达到了最低值90 million。
The following 6 years witnessed a marginal decrease in the birds population which bottomed out at 90 million in 2001.
多线图
overtake 交点
The consumption of chicken overtook that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989.
3. 饼柱表格
有动有静,
动态写变化(模仿线图),
静态写比较,方法为罗列数据。
罗列数据1
A is the largest ...
B is followed by C
D comes next
E ranks fifth
F takes with sixth position
G lies last
罗列数据2
数据1+while/whereas/whilst+数据2
饼图
百分比
5%
5 percent / five percent
占5%
make up / account for / provide / represent / comprise / constitute
the proportion/percentage of students
5% of men
eg. People over 85 make up 5% of the population.
例子
In general, teenagers prefer hamburgers, pizza and French fries. hamburgers are the popular food of all, because they account for the largest proportion of the pie chart, at 33 percent. Pizza is the second most popular, and this makes up 26 percent of the total survey. Teenagers also like French fries, which represent 22 percent of the chart. Only 9 and 7 percent of teenagers choose fried chicken and tacos respectively so they are less popular than the first three. The least popular fast food in this survey is sushi. Only 3 percent of teenagers prefer this kind of food
双饼
To be more specific, nuclear energy increased dramatically during these 10 years from only 1 percent in 1970 to 11 percent in 1980.
from 1% to 11% between 1970 and 1980.
Among the three reducing sources , oil decreased at least from 12 percent in 1970 to 11 percent in 1980, and a slight decline by 1 percent only.
柱图
如果所示,从1950年到2002年印度人口的比例呈现上升趋势,从15%到18%,预计在2050年会增长到21%。
It is manifest from the chart that the percentage of India's population showed an upward trend from 15% to 18% between 1950 and 2002, being expected to rise to about 21% in 2050.
On the other hand, the other three countries witness a decline in the population percentages.
To be more specific, with the largest proportion of the four countries, China experienced a gradual fall 26% in 1950 to 24% in 2002, and is projected to (预计) plunge to (骤降) 19% in 2050.
The population ratio in the USA in 1950 was 10%, going down to around 7% in 2002 and 2050.
In comparison, the year between 1950 and 2002 saw a marginal decrease in Japan, which is forecasted to drop to 2.5% in 2050.
表格
就经济学而言,学生满意度最高的是teaching,有95%的人对teaching表示满意;紧接着是对tutor的满意度,为90%。
Concerning economics, teaching ranks first in terms of the student satisfaction rate, with 95% student showing satisfaction, which is followed by that of tutors, at 90%.
词汇扩展--关于
regarding
with regard to
respecting
with respect to
in respect of
81%的学生对resources予以好评,而other resources和pre-course information好评度相似,分别为60%和59%。
81% of the students rate resources as "very good" while other resources and pre-course information share similar percentages, which is 60% and 59%, respectively.
就法学而言,学生满意度最高的是other resources, 为80%。紧随其后的是tutor, pre-course information和resources。
Regarding law, other resources top the satisfaction list, which is 80%, following which are the rating of tutor, pre-course information and resources.
Teaching满意度排名最后,为62%
Teaching lies last in this category at 62%.
就商科而言,pre-course information和teaching享有一样的满意度,都为95%,紧随其后的tutor。
With respect to commerce, pre-course and teaching boast the same popularity rating with 95%, closely followed tutor.
相比较而言,分别有86%和81%的新生对resources和other resources满意。
By contrast, 86% and 81% freshmen are content with resources and other resources, separately.
开头
from 1980 to 2020, as well as projected consumption to 2030.
结尾
Overall, almost every ... saw an upward trend in ... with ... as the only exception. ... more ... than any other ...
Overall, almost every means of transport in the UK saw an upward trend in the goods delivered with rail as the only exception. Road transportation delivered more goods than any other means of transport.