20210116雅思大作文Sample+Analysis

20210116雅思大作文

In many countries students who leave high school have no understanding of how to manage their money. Why is this case? What can be done to improve students’ understanding of how to manage personal finance?

「Report类大作文」1.题干译文:很多国家的高中毕业生不知道如何管理金钱。原因是什么?可以如何帮助他们?

2.文章主体段的框架:一段写原因,一段写建议措施。

但凡涉及到学生话题的文章,之前小编就说过,一般都可以丛家庭、学校、社会三大方面着手。

Why?

「1」爸妈惯啊,要啥给啥

Sample: Nowadays parents, with better financial conditions, have a tendency to provide their kids with a large amount of pocket money with which kids can purchase whatever they want. In this case, high school students may grow dependent on parents, not being aware of the importance of money management. Once they leave their parents and live independently, they have no idea how to distribute their money in a reasonable way.

financial conditions 经济条件

pocket money 零花钱

purchase whatever sb. wants 买任何东西

in this case 在这种情况下

grow dependent on sb. 变得过分依赖某人

money management 理财/ 金钱管理

live independently 自己独居

have no idea 不知道

distribute one's money 分配资金

in a reasonable way = reasonably 合理地

「2」学校课程问题啊,不教这些

Sample: High schools normally prioritize academic courses where students learn more about facts, calculations and languages. Seldom do high school teachers devote time to instructing students in some practical skills, especially those concerning rational consumption. As a result, students, who have spent most of their time in memorizing facts and preparing for tests, fail to know how to excel in money management.

normally 通常

prioritize sth. 以……为重

rational consumption 合理消费

excel in 擅长

怎么解决?

「1」K 爸妈哈哈哈

---allow their kids more freedom to decide how to spend their pocket money

「给孩子自由」

---encourage kids to learn to rationally allocate their money in buying things‍

「鼓励孩子合理分配」

--set a good example for their kids in managing personal finance

「以身作则给孩子树立榜样」

「2」K 学校哈哈哈

---set up some courses related to finance management

「设置相关的理财课程」---help students get better prepared for the future

「帮助学生为未来作准备」

---invite some experts in related areas to deliver speeches‍

「请专家做讲座」

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