高考英语书信常见模板
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记叙文高分秘诀
⑴过渡词语(文章或段落常用的过渡词语)
[if !supportLists]① [endif]时间
Early in the morning(清晨),In the beginning(一开始), Then(然后), After that(在那之后), Two hours later(两个小时后), After doing something(在做某事), Late in the afternoon(傍晚时分), The next day(第二天), Immediately(立即)
[if !supportLists]② [endif]地点
At school gate(在学校门口), In the playground(在操场上), Back home(回家), In the dinner hall(在宴会大厅)
[if !supportLists]③ [endif]适用于两点的情况
on the one hand, on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……); for one thing, for another(一方面……另一方面……)
[if !supportLists]④ [endif]适用于三点或以上的情况
to begin with(首先), then(然后), furthermore(此外), finally(最后), to start with(首先), next(然后), in addition(另外), last but not least(最后但并不是最不重要的), most important of all(最重要的是), moreover(此外)
[if !supportLists]⑤ [endif]逻辑
[if !supportLists]a. [endif]起始:To begin with(首先,第一), first of all(首先), in the first place(首先), as you know(如你所知), As is known to all(众所周知), As is shown in(正如……展示的那样)
[if !supportLists]b. [endif]中间:Fortunately(幸运的是), Unfortunately(不幸运的是), Besides(除此之外), What's more(并且,还有), However(但是), Instead(作为替换)
[if !supportLists]c. [endif]结尾:therefore/thus(因此), in conclusion(总之,最后), in brief(简而言之), to sum up(总而言之), in a word(总之), generally speaking(总体上讲), on the whole(总的说来)
[if !supportLists]d. [endif]先后次序:first(第一),second(第二),next(其次,然后),last but not least(最后但并不是最不重要的),after that (之后),eventually (最后,最终),since then(从那以后),afterwards(以后,后来),meanwhile(同时),immediately(立刻),finally(最后,最终)
[if !supportLists]e. [endif]因果关系:accordingly/consequently(因此,所以),for this reason(由于这个原因),as a result of(作为结果),in this way(这样),due to/thanks to(由于),therefore/thus(因此),because of(由于)
[if !supportLists]f. [endif]比较和对比:in contrast with (与……相比),similarly (同样),on the contrary(相反),different from(与……不同),on the other hand(另一方面)
[if !supportLists]g. [endif]表举例:a case in point(恰当的例子),that is to say(也就是说),for instance/example(例如)
[if !supportLists]h. [endif]表强调:furthermore/moreover(而且),besides(此外),in fact(实际上),also(而且,也),indeed(的确),in particular(尤其,特别),naturally(当然)
[if !supportLists]i. [endif]表目的:until(直到……为止), as soon as(一……就), later(后来),afterward(后来),soon(很快),lately(近来),recently(最近),for this reason(为此),for this purpose(为此),so that(以便),in order that(为了),so as to(以便),in order to(为了)
[if !supportLists](2) [endif]问候词语
[if !supportLists]1.[endif]How are you doing?你好吗?
[if !supportLists]2.[endif]How is everything going?一切都好吗?
[if !supportLists]3.[endif]How is life treating you?你过得怎么样?
[if !supportLists]4.[endif]How time flies!时间过得真快!
[if !supportLists]5.[endif]Long time no see!好久没见!
[if !supportLists](3) [endif]自我介绍
[if !supportLists]1.[endif]I am Li Hua, a 17-year-old boy/girl/teenager currently studying in XXX high school, who is crazy about... 我是李华,一个17岁的男孩/女孩/青少年,目前就读于XXX高中,他着迷于……
[if !supportLists]2.[endif]As the vice monitor of our class... 作为我们班的副班长……
[if !supportLists]3.[endif]I am Li Hua, who... 我是李华……
[if !supportLists](4) [endif]写信背景
[if !supportLists]1.[endif]Recently, I hear/learned that... 最近,我听到/得知……
[if !supportLists]2.[endif]My teacher told us... 老师告诉我们……
[if !supportLists]3.[endif]I am informed that... 我获悉……
[if !supportLists]4.[endif]You say in your last letter that... 你在上一封信中说……
[if !supportLists]5.[endif]Recently I have learned in your micro-blog/in your last letter/in your Facebook that... 最近我在您的微博/上一封信/脸书中了解到……
[if !supportLists](5) [endif]写信目的
[if !supportLists]1.[endif]Now, I am writing to do sth. 1. 现在,我写信来做某事。
[if !supportLists]2.[endif]Now, I am writing this letter to do sth. 2. 现在我写这封信是为了做某事。
[if !supportLists]3.[endif]Now, I am writing these few lines to do sth. 3. 现在,我写这几行字来做某事。
[if !supportLists]① [endif]申请信
Now, I am writing to apply for the job/position/wonderful chance.
现在,我写信来申请这个工作/职位/绝好的机会。
[if !supportLists]② [endif]感谢信
Now, I am writing to show/express/deliver my heartfelt/sincere gratitude to you.
现在,我写信来表达我对你衷心的感谢。
[if !supportLists]③ [endif]邀请信
Now, I am writing to invite you to join us(as our beloved guest/honored judge/instructor).
现在,我写信邀请你加入我们(作为我们敬爱的嘉宾/评委/讲师)。
[if !supportLists]④ [endif]建议信
Now, I am writing to give you a hand/give some sincere suggestions.
现在,我写信是想帮助你/给你一些真诚的建议。
[if !supportLists]⑤ [endif]求助信
Now, I am writing to ask you to give me a hand/ do me a favor/to turn to you for help.
现在,我写信是想请你帮我一个忙。
[if !supportLists]⑥ [endif]道歉信
Now, I am writing to show/express/deliver my heartfelt/sincere apology to you.
现在,我写信是为了向你表达我衷心的歉意。
[if !supportLists]⑦ [endif]告知信
Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.
现在,我写信告诉你一些相关的细节。
[if !supportLists]⑧ [endif]咨询信
Now, I am writing to ask you some relevant questions.
现在,我写信是想问你一些相关的问题。
[if !supportLists]⑨ [endif]祝贺信
Now, I am writing to express/deliver/show my heartfelt/sincere congratulations to you.
现在,我写信向你表达我最衷心的祝贺。
[if !supportLists]⑩ [endif]投诉信
Now, I am writing to express/deliver/show my complaint and give you some sincere suggestions.
现在,我写信来表达我的不满,并给你一些真诚的建议。
申请信
第一段:得知情况+写信目的(开头问候+自我介绍省略不写)
Recently, I hear/learned that in your micro-blog/in your last letter/in your Facebook thatyou need a某某岗位, which interests me a lot . I am crazy about this position. so, I am writing to apply for it.
最近,我听到/你上次在信中了解到你的微博/在你的脸书中,你需要一个某某岗位,令我十分感兴趣。我很喜欢这个职位。所以,我写信来申请它。
第二段:说明优势
写法一
From my perspective, there are four main reasons why I am fit/qualified for the position/job. To begin with, ... Moreover, ... What's more, ... Finally, ...
在我看来,有四个主要原因我适合/胜任这个职位/工作。首先,……此外,……更重要的是,……最后,……
写法二
From my perspective, I have three main advantages. First and foremost, ... Additionally, ... Last but not least, ... 在我看来,我有三个主要优势。首先,……此外,……最后但并非最不重要的是……
写法三
From my perspective, I have the confidence that I can handle the job. Firstly, ... Secondly, ... Thirdly, ...
我认为,我有信心能胜任这项工作。首先,……第二,……第三,……
[if !supportLists]1) [endif]优势一:英语好
(用First and foremost/To begin with等连接句子)
[if !supportLists]1.[endif]Having lived in New York for half a year, I can communicate with others fluently in English.
在纽约住了半年后,我能用英语流利地与人交流。
[if !supportLists]2.[endif]Having leaned English for nearly 10 years, I have a good command of English.
我学英语近10年了,英语很好。
[if !supportLists]2) [endif]优势二:懂得多
(用Additionally/Besides等连接句子)
[if !supportLists]1.[endif]I am keen on reading related books of many subjects, which will help me a lot during...
我喜欢阅读很多学科的相关书籍,这对我在……
[if !supportLists]2.[endif]Being a community volunteer offers me some experience.
做一名社区志愿者给了我一些经验。
[if !supportLists]3.[endif]I have some relevant experience , considering that I once worked in a similar company/for a similar activity.
我有一些相关的经验,因为我曾经在类似的公司工作过。
[if !supportLists]3) [endif]优势三:性格好
(用Additionally/Besides等连接句子)
Being an outgoing and confident girl, I can...
作为一个外向和自信的女孩,我可以……
[if !supportLists]4) [endif]优势四:人际关系能力强
(用Additionally/Besides等连接句子)
[if !supportLists]1.[endif]The experience of being the monitor of my class enables me to develop better.
担任班长的经历让我有了更好的发展。
[if !supportLists]2.[endif]Interpersonal skills and a spirit of cooperation.
良好的人际关系和合作精神。
[if !supportLists]3.[endif]No one can deny I get along well with all my classmates, enjoy a harmonious interpersonal relationship and I am always ready to help others.
没有人能否认,我和所有的同学都相处得很好并且人际关系和谐,我总是乐于帮助别人。
[if !supportLists]5) [endif]优势五:熟悉本地情况
(用Last but not least/meanwhile等连接句子)
[if !supportLists]1.[endif]I am familiar with the city as a local resident.
作为当地居民,我对这个城市很熟悉。
[if !supportLists]2.[endif]Having lived here for 18 years, I am more familiar with the city than others.
在这里住了18年,我比别人更熟悉这个城市。
第三段:渴望机会+表达谢意
(用Finally/At the last等连接句子)
[if !supportLists]1.[endif]If I can take the position, I will treasure the opportunity and provide.
如果我能得到这个职位,我会珍惜这个机会。
[if !supportLists]2.[endif]Hopefully, the wonderful chance would be offered to me.
希望这个好机会能给我。
[if !supportLists]3.[endif]I have the confidence that I will do this job well.
我有信心把这项工作做好。
[if !supportLists]4.[endif]Thank you for considering my application, and I'm looking forward to your reply. Should you treat my application favorably, I would spare no effort to offer my best service.
感谢您考虑我的申请,期待您的回复。如果贵公司能优先考虑我的申请,我将尽我最大的努力为贵公司服务。
[if !supportLists]5.[endif]I am looking forward to your earliest reply.
我期待着你的尽早回复。
感谢信
第一段:表达感谢
(开头问候+自我介绍省略不写)
[if !supportLists]1.[endif]I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for...
我想借此机会对……表示衷心感谢。
[if !supportLists]2.[endif]I'm eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
我急切地写信来表达你对你的帮助的衷心感谢。
[if !supportLists]3.[endif]With deepest gratitude I write to you this letter for .
带着深深的感激我为……给你写这封信。
[if !supportLists]4.[endif]I would like to thank you from the bottom of my heart for.
我由衷地感谢你,因为……
[if !supportLists]5.[endif]If it hadn’t been for your help, I wouldn't have.
如果没有你的帮助,我就不会……
第二段:感恩原因+感恩事项
(用To begin with/Besides等连接句子)
Whenever I look at your photos, I just can't help thinking of you.
每当我看到你的照片,我就会情不自禁地想起你。
事项一:It was so kind of you to do something.
你如此的善良去做某事。
事项二:I still remember the days when you spared no effort to help sb do something.
我仍然记得你不遗余力地帮助某人做某事的日子。
事项三:You did something which really moved me.
你的东西真的打动了我。
事项四:You taught me how to do something. It is through your warm encouragement that I finally overcome the depression and regain confidence.
你教我如何做某事。正是在你们热情的鼓励下,我终于克服了沮丧,重获了信心。
第三段:再次感谢+真诚祝福
(用Finally/At the last等连接句子)
[if !supportLists]1.[endif]Nothing would be able to erase our wonderful memories and I will cherish them forever.
没有什么能够抹去我们美好的记忆,我会永远珍惜他们。
[if !supportLists]2.[endif]Words fail to convey my gratitude to you.
我对你的感激之情难以用语言表达。
[if !supportLists]3.[endif]Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.
请接受我真挚的感谢,我会永远铭记你的帮助。
[if !supportLists]4.[endif]Hopefully we would get together again soon. I am looking forward to this day.
希望我们很快能聚一聚,我很期待这一天的到来。
邀请信
第一段:发出邀请+说明原因
(开头问候+自我介绍省略不写)
[if !supportLists]1. [endif]I wonder if there is any chance for you to come with me for某某活动.
我想知道你是否有机会和我一起去参加某某活动。
[if !supportLists]2. [endif]Since you expressed/showed your great/strong interest in某某国家的 culture, I am writing to invite you to...
既然你表达了对某国文化的兴趣,我写信来邀请你……
[if !supportLists]3. [endif]I'm very pleased/ more than delighted/ delighted to invite you to join in... to be held from... to... in...
很高兴邀请你参加从……到……在……(地点)举行(活动)。
[if !supportLists]4. [endif]Now, I am writing to invite you to join us(as our beloved guest/honored judge/ instructor).
现在,我写信邀请你加入我们(作为我们敬爱的嘉宾/评委/讲师)。
第二段:介绍细节+内容意义
(用To begin with/Besides等连接句子)
(Here are some relevant details about this activity. 给你一个关于这个活动的相关建议。)
[if !supportLists]1. [endif]The exhibition is to be held on Sunday morning at the National Museum.
这个展览将于星期天上午在国家博物馆举行。
[if !supportLists]2. [endif]It will be in某某地点 from 几点几分to几点几分 in the morning/afternoon/ evening on 几月几号。
[if !supportLists]3. [endif]You can also appreciate lots of fantastic works, which will show all kinds of styles beyond imagination.
你还可以欣赏到很多精彩的作品,这些作品将展现出超乎想象的各种风格。
[if !supportLists]4. [endif]They are really fascinating masterpieces, which will absolutely not let you down/leave a good impression on...
他们真的是迷人的杰作,绝对不会让你失望/给……留下好印象……
[if !supportLists]5. [endif]It would be an experience of great value to exchange ideas with Chinese learners which you will never forget...
这将是一次宝贵的经验,与中国学习者交流思想,你将永远不会忘记……
第三段:希望你来+期待来信
(用Finally/At the last等连接句子)
[if !supportLists]1.[endif]If you have any further questions, please feel free to call me at 456787.
如果您还有任何问题,请尽管打电话456787。
[if !supportLists]2.[endif]Would feel very honored if you could come.
如果你能来,我将感到非常荣幸。
[if !supportLists]3.[endif]Looking forward to your early reply. /An early reply is appreciated.
期待你的早日回复。/对你的早日回复表示感激。
[if !supportLists]4.[endif]Hopefully you will make it to our activity. /I have the confidence that you will have a good time.
希望你能参加我们的活动。/我有信心你会玩得很开心。
[if !supportLists]5.[endif]Please give me a call or drop me a line to let me know your decision soon, I am looking forward to your reply and your presence.
请给我一个电话或写信让我尽快知道你的决定,我期待您的答复和您的存在。
建议信
第一段:了解事情+给予帮助
(开头问候+自我介绍省略不写)
[if !supportLists]1. [endif]Recently, I have learned in your micro-blog/in your last letter/in your Twitter/in your Facebook that...
最近,我听到你上次在信中了解到你的微博/在你的脸书……
[if !supportLists]2. [endif]Now, I am writing to give you a hand/give some sincere suggestions.
现在,我写信是想帮助你/给你一些真诚的建议。
第二段:分析遇到的问题+给出建议
(用To begin with/Besides等连接句子)
分析问题:For my perspective/In my opinion/As far as I am concerned, there are two reasons for this,for one thing... for another... /on the one hand... , on the other hand... 依我来看,这里有两个原因,一方面……另一方面……
建议一:You are supposed to do sth. 1. 你应该做某事。
建议二:If I were you, I would do sth. 2. 如果我是你,我会做某事。
建议三:It is high time that you did sth. 3. 是你做某事的时候了。
建议四:I think it would be more beneficial if you could... 我认为,如果你能…这将会更有益。
第三段:结尾客套+期待回复
(用Finally/At the last等连接句子)
[if !supportLists]1.[endif]Hopefully, your problems would be solved soon/I am looking forward to your good news.
希望你的问题能很快得到解决/我期待你的好消息。
[if !supportLists]2.[endif]I hope you will take my advice into serious consideration .
我希望你会认真考虑我的建议。
[if !supportLists]3.[endif]I sincerely hope the tips will be of use to you.
我真诚希望这些建议将对你有用。
求助信
第一段:写信目的
(开头问候+自我介绍省略不写)
[if !supportLists]1.[endif]Now, I am writing to ask you to give me a hand/ do me a favor/to turn to you for help.
现在,我写信是想请你帮我一个忙。
[if !supportLists]2.[endif]I wonder if you could do me a favor. This is the first time that... , so I hope you can...
不知你能否帮我一个忙。这是第一次……,所以我希望你能…
[if !supportLists]3.[endif]I have some difficulties in choosing which... It bothers me a lot so I am writing to ask whether you could dome a favor.
我很难选择哪一个……这让我很困扰,所以我写信是想问你能否帮个忙。
第二段:说明问题
(用To begin with/Besides等连接句子)
问题一:Doing sth. 1 has always been a big headache for me, which makes me feel upset sometimes.
做某事对我来说一直是件很头疼的事,有时会让我感到心烦意乱。
问题二:I also have difficulty in doing sth. 2, consequently, it seems a little bit challenging for me to do sth. 3. 我也有困难在做某事,因此,这对我来说似乎有点挑战性去做某事。
问题三:I find it difficult to... , because...
我发现很难去做……因为……
问题四:I have some difficulties in doing... which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
我在做……时有困难,这让我感到很困扰,所以我别无选择只能向你求助。
第三段:希望解决+期待回复
(用Finally/At the last等连接句子)
[if !supportLists]1. [endif]Such is the difficulty I'm faced with. I sincerely hope that you can give me some practical advice.
这就是我面临的困难。我真诚希望你能给我提出一些实用的建议。
[if !supportLists]2. [endif]I'd appreciate it if/I was wondering if you could help me deal with these difficulties.
如果你能帮我处理这些问题,我将不胜感激。/不知你能否帮我处理这些问题。
[if !supportLists]3. [endif]Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.
谢谢您的考虑,我期待着尽早收到您的回复。
[if !supportLists]4. [endif]Hopefully, your kind and timely help solve my problems. I am sincerely looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
希望您的善良和及时的帮助解决我的问题。我真诚地期待您在最早方便的时候的答复。
道歉信
第一段:写信目的
(开头问候+自我介绍省略不写)
[if !supportLists]1. [endif]Now, I am writing to show/express/deliver my heartfelt/sincere apology to you.
现在,我写信是为了向你表达我衷心的歉意。
[if !supportLists]2. [endif]I am writing this letter to apologize to you for.
我写这封信是因……向你道歉。
[if !supportLists]3. [endif]I regret to inform you that I cannot/am unable to...
我遗憾地告知你我不能……
第二段:解释原因+希望理解+作保证
(用To begin with/Besides等连接句子)
[if !supportLists]1. [endif]解释原因一:How I wish that I had done sth. 1/How I wish that I would do sth. 1. However I am chosen to do sth. 2 which you know is really significant to me.
我多希望我之前做了某事/我多么希望我能去做某事。但是,我选择做一件你知道对我很重要的事情。
2. 解释原因二:I hope you will understand me and excuse me for...
我希望你能理解我并且原谅我……
3. 希望理解一:As a result, I have no choice but to break my promise with you. I believe that if you were me you would make the same choice.
因此,我别无选择,只能和你打破我的诺言。我相信如果你是我,你也会做出同样的选择。
4. 希望理解二:I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.
我真诚地希望你能理解我的处境并接受我的歉意。
5. 作保证:We assure you that such a matter will never happen again.
我们向您保证,此类事件不会再发生。
第三段:再约+期待回复
(用Finally/At the last等连接句子)
[if !supportLists]1. [endif]再约:I shall be glad if you will kindly write and tell me when and where we may meet again.
如果你能告诉我,我们在什么时候什么地点可以再次见面,我会十分高兴。
[if !supportLists]2. [endif]期待回复:I am looking forward to your reply.
期待你的回复。
咨询信
第一段:写信目的
(开头问候+自我介绍省略不写)
[if !supportLists]1. [endif]Recently, I have learned in your micro-blog/in your last letter/in your Facebook that... So, I am writing to ask you some relevant questions.
最近我在您的微博/上一封信/脸书中了解到……所以,我写信是想问您一些相关的问题。
[if !supportLists]2. [endif]Sorry to disturb you, I am writing to ask you about... for further information.
很抱歉打扰您,我写信是想咨询您关于……的进一步信息。
第二段:咨询问题
(用To begin with/Besides等连接句子)
[if !supportLists]1. [endif]I'm writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding/concerning...
我写信想知道您是否能给我提供有关……的信息。
[if !supportLists]2. [endif]I wonder/ am wondering whether you could/ would provide some specific information about...
不知道你是否能够告知有关……的一些具体信息。
3. I'd appreciate it if you could tell me about... 如果您能告诉我关于……我将不胜感激。
第三段:表示感谢+期待回复
(用Finally/At the last等连接句子)
1. 表示感激一:I'd appreciate it if you could provide me with some specific information at your convenience. 如果您能在方便的时候给我提供一些具体信息,我将不胜感激。
2. 表示感激二:Thank you for your kindness, and your early reply to the letter will be highly appreciated.
感谢您的好意,如蒙立即复信,我将不胜感激。
[if !supportLists]3. [endif]期待回复:I am sincerely looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
我真诚地期待您在最早方便的时候的答复。
祝贺信
第一段:写信目的
(开头问候+自我介绍省略不写)
[if !supportLists]1. [endif]目的一:Recently I have learned in your micro-blog/in your last letter/in your Facebook that... So, I am writing to express/deliver/show my heartfelt/sincere congratulations to you.
最近我在您的微博/上一封信/脸书中了解到……所以我想表示我真诚的祝贺。
[if !supportLists]2. [endif]目的二:I am more than overjoyed on hearing that you, which drives me to write this letter to extend my utmost congratulations.
听到你的消息,我非常高兴,这促使我写这封信来表达我最衷心的祝贺。
第二段:取得成就的原因
(用To begin with/Besides等连接句子)
[if !supportLists]1. [endif]原因一:During the past years, you have kept working hard and devoted yourself into your major study. 在过去的几年里,你一直在努力学习,全身心地投入到专业学习中。
[if !supportLists]2. [endif]原因二:It is a reward you richly deserve for your diligence as well as your intelligence.
这是一个奖励,你值得的,因为你的勤奋和智慧。
[if !supportLists]3. [endif]原因三:I understand for sure that it is your long-term accumulated experience that leads you to the current success.
我明白了,这是你的长期积累的经验,带来你当前的成功。
[if !supportLists]4. [endif]原因四:What deserves being emphasized is that it is your consistent effort that push you to this level.
值得强调的是,是你不断的努力推动你达到这个水平。
第三段:美好祝福
(用Finally/At the last等连接句子)
[if !supportLists]1. [endif]I hope that you will make greater achievements in your future life.
我希望你在未来的生活中取得更大的成就。
[if !supportLists]2. [endif]Please accept my sincere congratulations and best wishes for your future success.
请接受我对你未来成功的衷心祝贺和良好祝愿。
投诉信
第一段:写信目的
(开头问候+自我介绍省略不写)
[if !supportLists]1. [endif]Recently I have learned in your micro-blog/in your last letter/in your Facebook that... So, I am writing to express/deliver/show my complaint/ dissatisfaction/ disappointment/ concern regarding/and give you some sincere suggestions.
最近我在您的微博/上一封信/脸书中了解到……所以我写信是想表达我的失望/对……的不满/失望/关心并提出真诚的建议。
[if !supportLists]2. [endif]I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I must make a complaint about it.
我感觉很糟糕,去打扰你,但是我恐怕我必须关于这件事做一个抱怨。
[if !supportLists]3. [endif]I am writing to inform you that I find... unsatisfactory...
我写信是想告诉你我发现……不能令人满意……
第二段:原本期待+糟糕体验
(用To begin with/Besides等连接句子)
[if !supportLists]1. [endif]原本期待:How I wish that I would have enjoyed a 100% satisfaction!
我多么希望我本来会享受一个100%满意。
[if !supportLists]2. [endif]糟糕体验一:However, much to my disappointment, ...
但是,令我大大失望的是……
[if !supportLists]3. [endif]糟糕体验二:To make matters worse, it will puzzles me that...
令事情更糟糕的是,这件事依然困扰着我……
[if !supportLists]4. [endif]槽糕体验三:I strongly request that a satisfactory explanation should be given.
我强烈要求给予一个令人满意的解释。
第三段:改进建议+期待回复
(用Finally/At the last等连接句子)
[if !supportLists]1. [endif]改进建议一:Hopefully, for the sake of your reputation , you would look into the matter and make some appropriate improvements.
希望为了你们的名誉,你会调查这个问题,然后做出一些合适的改进。
[if !supportLists]2. [endif]改进建议二:I shall be grateful if you could consider my situation and improve it as soon as possible.
如果您能考虑我的情况并尽快加以改善,我将不胜感激。
[if !supportLists]3. [endif]期待回复一:I trust you will take my complaints seriously and look forward to hearing from you soon.
我相信你会认真对待我的投诉,并期待很快收到你的回复。
[if !supportLists]4. [endif]期待回复二:I understand you will give immediate attention to this matter and reply at your earliest convenience.
我知道你方会立即处理此事,并在方便的时候尽早答复。
[if !supportLists]5. [endif]期待回复三:Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
感谢你关注思考这件事,然后我会期待你的回复。
[if !supportLists]6. [endif]期待回复四:I must have you fully understand that without a satisfying solution, I will reserve my right to take legal action.
我必须让你充分理解,如果没有令人满意的解决方案,我将保留采取法律行动的权利。