如何写好读后续写的开头

1. 使用adv.（副词/短语）

1)Carefully, he stepped over all the broken glass.
2)Joyfully he skipped up the street.
3)But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest.

2. 使用adj.(形容词/短语)

4)Curious to know what was inside, he tiptoed into the dark cave.
5)Unable to say a word, he was rooted to the spot.
6)But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Desperate and hopeless, Jane knelt down, tears streaming down her face.
7)It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance. （as的倒装）
8)Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.

3.非谓语尤其是分词形式 (-ing/–ed )

But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Feeling disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for another night.
4.连词（时间线索明显的时候常用）
5.介词短语（时间线索、地点线索）
6.对话 “Hold on tight!” My father yelled.
7.动作/神态/心理活动等
8.声音 BOOM, CRASH! The wind was howling outside of my house.
9.提问 eg: Have you ever been on a self-driving trip? Let me tell you an exciting trip my family took this summer.

如何推动故事情节发展

方法1. 使用环境描写增加不确定性

充分利用环境描写可以起到烘托故事高潮的作用。当人物在碰到困难时候，我们往往要加大笔墨来描写故事环境的险恶，恐怖和不安，衬托角色的内心，从而推动故事情节到高潮。

例1：Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest(黑暗). Even worse, the temperature suddenly dropped dramatically. (寒冷）
例2：It didn’t take long for the forest to be enveloped in darkness（黑暗）. Her rasping breath steamed（寒冷） in the moonlight and her throat was parched from thirst.

方法2. 放大内心冲突

放大内心冲突（角色的内心斗争）有助于建立紧张和不确定的时刻。

2016年10月浙江高考： All the fantastic memory crowded in and she couldn't help crying, "Hadn't I quarrelled with Tom, walked away and climbed to the high place, I wouldn't be trapped in this awful place, confronted with the danger of dying.” She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes.

夫妇争吵---独自行走---荒野走散---夜色渐黑---独处森林---阴森恐怖---后悔莫及（内心冲突的刻画）内心独白

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读后续写开头与情节推动高分技巧