中考
Dear Henry
I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game. It's not easy being in your situation， and it's normal to have these feelings. Anyway， don't be too hard on yourself.
You know， basketball is about team effort. It's never just one person's fault. What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. Besides， you need to think about how you can do better next time.
As a whole， teammates should support and believe in each other. Why don't you sit down and communicate with them？ And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills. If all of you pull together， you're sure to win the next one.
Best wishes！
Yours，
Li Hua
高考
假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1．写信目的：
2．个人优势：
3．能做的事情。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．结束语已为你写好。
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply for the position.
The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.
All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作解析】
这篇书面表达属于应用文中的申请信类型，可以按照申请信的思路来写，同时要注意电子邮件的写作需要体现交际性。
首先要进行自我介绍，简要交代写作背景，阐明写信目的。
第二段是文章的主题，要把题干给到的提示完整地体现出来，文章用First of all，What’s more, The most important factor is that 等过渡性结构自然地串联三个要点。同时要注意句式的多样化与高级词汇的应用。
最后需要使用求职信的常用套话及书信的常用套话结尾。
考研英语二
Directions: Write an essay based on the following chart. In your essay, you should interpret the chart, and give your comments.You should write about 150 word s neatly on the ANSWER SHEET (15 points)
某高校2013-2018年毕业生去向
【范文】
What is illustrated in the chart demonstrates the changes in the percentage of the undergraduates’ choices in universities from 2013 to 2018. According to the chart, the percentage of further studying rose from 26.3% in 2013 to 34.0% in 2018, while there was a decline in the percentage of hunting for a job from 68.1% to 60.7%.
What is reflected in the chart is most thought-provoking and worth discussing among the general public for the time being. It is no difficulty for us to come up with several possible reasons to account for this phenomenon. First of all, it must be stressed that the present situation, to a certain degree, stems from government policies. The regulations and rules have been made and carried out by government and departments concerned so as to encourage students to further studying. In the second place, we may notice that social stress also plays an important role in leading to this phenomenon. The present society is filled with fierce competition, so most college students are under great pressure .Last but not least, personal development is another significant factor that cannot be ignored. The increasing number of students want to further their studying for self-realization. There may be other factors contributing to this phenomenon, but I think what has been mentioned above is generally reasonable.
Taking into account what has been argued, we can come to the conclusion that the present situation is positive. It is certain that this trend will continue in the years to come. Only in this way, can we promote the overall development of the society.
专八2019
题目给出了两篇有关“消费”的材料，第一篇说到BBC的两个有关消费的纪录片，指出虽然人们的财富和消费水平增加，但这不一定给人们带来满足感、反而会带来压力，因为人们有越来越重的攀比心理。第二篇是一位德国学者关于消费的观点：消费能促进人与物（人）之间的互动，从而使人类培养了自我的同时，成为更积极参与社交的社会成员。
结构安排：本文应该分为四段。
第一段：套话+引材料观点+提出个人观点
第二段：结合材料和个人解释消费的积极作用。
第三段：指出过度注重消费带来的问题。
第四段：做总结
第一段：World consumption has gained momentum since the beginning of the 20th century. Satisfaction, however, does not necessarily result from increased consumption. A BBC documentary suggests that consumption can trigger some negative effects such as increasing pressure. George Simmel, from another perspective, stresses the important role consumption plays as a path to cultivation. As for me, I incline to the view that consumption is a curate’s egg; while we admit that consumption is beneficial to us, we should not ignore its drawbacks. (81 words)
1. gain momentum 获得动能，引申为：迅速发展
2. however 灵活处理成插入语
3. A result from B B导致了A；A是结果，B是原因
4. A trigger B A导致B
5. from another perspective 灵活处理成插入语
6. As for me, I incline to the view that =I think that 在我看来
7. a curate’s egg 有利有弊
第二段：Consumption, according to George Simmel, cultivates the human capacity of self-reflection and underlies the formation of subjectivity, thus helping people to realize their uniqueness. By spending money on a wide range of products, we distinguish ourselves from other animal species and from other people as well, and therefore gain identity as unique individuals. Additionally, the profound effect of consumption relates to better life quality. Just think about how the stuff we purchased has facilitated our lives and we will see how significant consumption is to us. Moreover, when we make purchase, we usually feel a sense of content. This is supported by numerous researches on consumer psychology. (109 words)
注：本段写了consumption的三个优点；分别为下划线句子
1.according to George Simmel 处理为插入语，使得句子长短结合
2.additionally、moreover 是衔接词用法
3.relate to 与…相关，可以替换be
4. facilitate 使…便利
第三段：As we start to see the way consumption shows the most promise, we must be aware of where it might stumble. One of them is anxiety. Humans are by nature fond of comparisons, which is especially true when it comes to material goods. For example, we refer to those with more accumulation of material goods as a benchmark, and in order to "keep up with the Joneses" we have to amass as many possessions as possible. But since there are always "the Joneses" that we fail to keep up with, we feel inferior and agitated. That explains why we are not necessarily happier even when we get wealthier and more abundant in materials. In terms of material possessions, people's demand is always insatiable and consequently their stress is ever increasing because their income always falls behind their desires. Such anxiety, however, could be easily avoided if a rational attitude towards consumption is adopted. (153 words)
1. As we start to see the way consumption shows the most promise, we must be aware of where it might stumble. 高级转折句；当我们看到消费带来的好处时，我们应当意识到它所存在的弊端
2. amass 积累
3. agitated 恼怒的
4. not necessarily happy 不一定开心
5. in terms of 就…而言
第四段：In conclusion, while consumption in most cases raises our life quality, excessive and irrational consumption will cause us huge pressure and distress.（22 words）
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