临摹:提炼句型+造句
临摹句子1:In Italy fingers are already being pointed: at the operator of the bridge, at the bridge’s designer, at politicians at home and abroad.
提炼出句型:In X fingers are already being pointed: at Y, at Z, at W.(不一定非得是三项,可以灵活使用。)
造句示范:
a) In China fingers are already being pointed: at parents, at schools, at students.(场景:学生的素质教育一直没有改善。)
b) In the US fingers are already being pointed: at the unreliable government and at greedy companies.(场景:Facebook 等技术公司频频泄露用户隐私。)
c) In downtown Shanghai fingers are already being pointed: at the hit-and-run driver and at the indifferent onlookers.(场景:肇事逃逸案。)
In China fingers are already being pointed: at directors, at producers and at actors. (影视作品粗制滥造)
In China fingers are already being pointed: at vaccine manufacturers, at the supervisory department and the government. (假疫苗事件)
临摹句子2:Concrete, on which the Morandi bridge relied, has become the world’s most widely used building material.
提炼出句型:X has become the world’s most widely used Y.(提炼句型的时候可以有一定的灵活性。)
造句示范:
a) Facebook has become the world’s most widely used social media app.
b) Twitter has become the world’s most widely used micro-blogging app.
c) Aircrafts have become the world’s most widely used mode of transportation.(注意:由于主语变成了复数“aircrafts”,动词也要从“has”变为“have”。)
English has become the world's most widely used language.(英语是世界上使用最广的语言)
IPhone has become the world's most widely used smartphone. (爱疯是世界上使用最多的智能手机)
In Italy fingers are already being pointed: at the operator of the bridge, at the bridge’s designer, at politicians at home and abroad. But the Genoa disaster also carries a warning that stretches well beyond the country’s borders. Concrete, on which the Morandi bridge relied, has become the world’s most widely used building material. The sort reinforced with steel is found in all manner of construction.
译文:
在意大利,桥梁的操作者、设计者和国内外的政治家都受到了指责。但是热那亚灾难带来的警告不仅仅是给意大利的(远远超越了国界)。莫兰迪大桥所依赖的混凝土已经成为世界上使用最广泛的建筑材料。在各种建筑中都能找到钢筋加固的那种混凝土。
二、段落解读
这段话选自的文章讲的是由于意大利基础设施陈旧造成的重大事故。
全段共 4 句,为“个性--›共性”的写作提供了一个实用的段落模板:第 1 句写事故的责任人(个性);第 2 句写事故并非个案(共性);第 3、4 句具体写共性。
The Shandong province fingers are already been pointing out: at vaccine manufacturers, at the supervisory department and the government. But the fake vaccine event doesn't occur in Shandong province only, but also in other several provinces. And this is not the first time that the same thing emerges. Vaccine has became the world's most wildly use prevention of diseases. It has greatly increased the human's survival rate.