1️⃣As the society is developing at a fast pace, people are under pressure and suffering from physical affection in their busy life. 2️⃣As a consequence, many citizens stand up against to the crazy pace of life and appeal to people to live in a relaxed manner, which is good for people's physical and mental health. 3️⃣However, those against slowing down the pace of life believe that the fast rhythm of life can improve work efficiency, prolong leisure time and expand social circle.
4️⃣Personally speaking, I hold the view that people can make decisions by themselves according to their own conditions since either fast or relaxed lifestyle has both merits and demerits. 5️⃣For one thing, for those who are trying hard to climbing to the top of the social ladder, they need to keep improving their competitiveness and every minute is too valuable for them to be wasted. 6️⃣For another, the dream-job seekers who are exhausted by the frenetic pace of life may want to retreat to a quieter and slower corner of the world. 7️⃣Then they can have time to enjoy nature, food and communication with people around them. 8️⃣So choose your lifestyle wisely and you can certain find happiness in your choice.
【解析】
第一段从现象层面分析了两种不同的生活态度，第二段从个人层面说明不同人有不同的选择。
【炼句】
1️⃣As the society is developing at a fast pace,people are under pressure and suffering from physical affection in their busy life.
这一句比较万能，可用到很多社会问题的开头。
2️⃣As a consequence, many citizens stand up against to the crazy pace of life and appeal to people to live in a relaxed manner, which is good for people's physical and mental health.
承接上一句，问题出现了，结果是什么呢？As a consequence。。。
另外，上一句用的是people，这里改用了citizens作为同义替换。
表示“反对”怎么表达呢，stand up against。
“过闲适的生活”--live in a relaxed manner
3️⃣However, those against slowing down the pace of life believe that the fast rhythm of life can improve work efficiency, prolong leisure time and expand social circle.
放缓生活节奏--slow down the pace of life
快节奏的生活--fast rhythm of life;frenetic pace of life
4️⃣Personally speaking, I hold the view that people can make decisions by themselves according to their own conditions since either fast or relaxed lifestyle has both merits and demerits.
“我认为”的万能表达--Personally speaking, I hold the view that。。（这句也挺万能的~）
“既有优点，也有缺点”--has both merits and demerits。
5️⃣For one thing, for those who are trying hard to climbing to the top of the social ladder, they need to keep improving their competitiveness and every minute is too valuable for them to be wasted.
“走向人生巅峰”--climb to the top of the social ladder
走上人生巅峰的条件是啥呢？--improve their competitiveness and value time(every minute is too valuable for them to be wasted)
6️⃣For another, the dream-job seekers who are exhausted by the frenetic pace of life may want to retreat to a quieter and slower corner of the world.
“感觉身体被苦逼的生活掏空”-- be exhausted by the frenetic pace of life
“回归小确幸的生活”--retreat to a quieter and slower corner of the world
7️⃣Then they can have time to enjoy nature, food and communication with people around them.
享受自然、美食和陪伴。
8️⃣So choose your lifestyle wisely and you can certain find happiness in your choice.
这句有总结观点的作用~