#口语粉碎机# L1 Day21【打卡序列02】
一、【给出如下句子的汉语释义】
（英译汉这个环节能收获什么？）
1. The tower being repaired was put up in the Tang Dynasty.
翻译：这座正在修建的塔是唐朝建立的。
答案：正在修缮的那座塔建于唐代。
解析：现在分词做定语，being repaired
put up—建造
2. What he said was very touching. (这句话里有哪些之前学过的点？)
翻译：他所说的令人很感触。
分析：主语从句
答案：他的话很感人。
3. The glow of the setting sun is splendid; it is a pity that dusk is fast approaching. (这句话里有哪些之前学过的点？以下亦同)
翻译：夕阳无限好，只是近黄昏
分析：句型：It is … that， 分词做形容词
答案：夕阳无限好，只是近黄昏。
解析：glow setting dusk
① the glow of： 名词所有格，意为“…的光辉”
② setting sun ： 现在分词做前置定语，表示“落日（强调进行）”
③ splendid: 形容词做表语。
第一个分句其实就是一个 【主系表】。但就把“夕阳无限好”给说出来了
④ it is a pity that: 【口语语法讲义】---第 17 页：
4.3 常见的主语从句类型“It is+名词短语+that 从句”
⑤ the dusk is approaching 现在进行时表将来，意为“即将来临
4. The man getting up as soon as the cock crows is a hard-working man.
翻译：这个努力工作的人，公鸡一叫就起床。
答案：鸡鸣即起的人是一个勤奋的人。
勤奋的：hard-working
5. A man going to die is always kind-hearted.
翻译：人之将死其心也善。
答案：人之将死其心也善。
解析：人之将死其言也善：
A man's words are good when death is near.
Men speak kindly in the presence of death.
One makes pretty speeches when he is on his deathbed.
When a man is near death, he speaks from his heart.
6. Is this the book written by Will？
翻译：这是威尔写的书吗？
答案：这是 Will 写的那本书吗？
7. Ma Yun was then a teacher respected by all his students.
翻译：马云曾是一名教师，被他所有学生尊敬。
答案：马云当时是一个广受学生尊重的老师。
解析：then 当时
广受学生尊敬比被动结构更好
8. Given another chance, I’ll do it much better.
翻译：要是在给我一次机会，我会做的更好。
答案：再给我一次机会，我会干的更好。
解析：=If I am given
9. Turning to the right, you will find a path leading to his house.
翻译：右转，你会找到一条小路通向他的家。
答案：往右拐，然后你就能看到一条通往他家的小路。
10. He stood by the door, looking out.
翻译：他靠门站着看着外面。
答案：他站在门口，向外望去。
二、【给出如下句子的英语释义】
11. 如果再给我一些时间，我就能把它做完。
翻译：Given more time, I can finish it.
答案：Given more time, I would be able to complete it.
Given more time, I can finish it/ get it done.
12. 她看着信，失声痛哭起来。（burst out crying）
翻译：Looking at the letter, she burst out crying.
答案：Reading the letter, she burst out crying. 解析：看着-读着
13.听到这个笑话，我们大笑起来。
翻译：Hearing the joke, we burst out laughing.
答案：Hearing the joke, we burst out laughing.
14.不知道下一步怎么做，所以我想问问你的意见。（思考，此句不难）
翻译：Not knowing how to do next step, I want to ask for your advice.
答案：Not knowing what to do next, I want to ask for your advice.
如果你用了 how, 也对
“怎么”在汉语中是个模糊的词，具体含义视语境分为如下两种：
❶ 单纯的询问方式方法，用 how
❷ 询问具体的内容，用 what
15.回到家，我发现门是锁着的。
翻译：Arriving at home, I found the door locked.
答案：I went home, finding the door locked.
解析：回到家，陈述事实。我到家的同时发现门锁着。不是我发现门锁着的同时我到家。主谓抓错了。
16.跟你谈过之后，我感觉好多了。
翻译：Talking with you, I felt better.
答案：After talking with you, I felt much better. 解析：=After I talked with you ，翻译漏了之后
17.身后跟着两个学生，老师进了教室。
翻译：Followed by two students, the teacher went into the classroom.
答案：Followed by two students, the teacher went into the classroom.
18.被问到他是谁的时候，他什么都没说。
翻译：Being asked who he is, he didn't say anything.
答案：Asked who he was, he said nothing.
其实这句话的原版应该是：
When he was asked who he was, he said nothing.
而用非谓语动词，把 when he was ，干掉，变成了精简版。
所以到这你会发现， 其实非谓语动词就是帮助把句子做到简约，不拖沓。
而老外的口语里，文章里之所以大量使用非谓语，就是因为简洁。反观汉语，
也是一个道理。
我过度翻译了，原文并没有强调当时，不应该用进行时
19.问题解决之后，会议结束。
翻译：After the question solved, the meeting finished.
答案：The problem settled, the meeting came to an end.
这句话的常见脑回路版本是
After the problem was settled, the meeting came to an end.
“结束”，用 finish 也可以。
end 更侧重 “截止；结束
过去分词本身有被动，完成之意，可以不加after
settle & solve
＊settle
to reach a decision or an agreement about something, or to end a disagreement确定；决定；解决，结束（争端等）
＊solve
to find an answer to a problem思索，思考
20.咖啡杯掉地上了，碎了。
翻译：Coffee cup fell on the floor, broken.
答案：The coffee cup fell down to the ground, broken. 解析：掉在地上fall down to the ground
心得：今天整体翻译都有进步，能够在思考清楚后在落笔。分词结构使语言表达更简洁，更地道。每次作业都有新的收获。享受这样的每一天。
坚持21天，就能养成好习惯，今天第21天，期待下一个21天。时间过的好快！