19英语一真题作文及参考答案详解
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考研英语①19真题
真题是必须要背诵的，拆开来理解背诵，不仅会深感乐趣，还能探索规律
一、题目及要求
Directions：
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below。In your essay， you should：
Describe the picture briefly；
Interpret the implied meaning，and
Give your comments
Write your answer on the ANSWER SHEET。
二、分析及构思
本作文需要包括三个组成部分：
（1）描述图画；
（2）分析图画的用意或内在含义；
（3）就此话题表达个人的观点或提出建议。
三、参考答案
The Importance of Persistence
第一段：
总体描述：As we can see from the cartoon, two young men are climbing the mountain.
细致描述：The one with a depressed look feels exhausted and wants to give up, while the other with a beaming smile gives him a bottle of water and encouraages him to have a rest and then keep trying.
（while在此有对比作用，一句话就完美的描述了漫画内容，精简而不俗，彰显高逼格）
【beaming:愉快的，喜气洋洋的】
表面结论： From their words and expressions,we can see totally different kinds of attitudes towards difficulties.
第二段：
引申结论：Obviously, the cartoon directly reflects a prevailing social phenomenon in the journey of our life.（显然，这幅漫画直接反映了在我们的人生历程中很普遍的一个现象）
【prevailing:普遍的，流行的】
再述观点：Face with setbacks and failure, people who are far-sighted can hold on to their dreams and accomplish the goals, while those lacking perseverance and courage may give up easily in spite of the encouragement from others.
【far-sighted:有远见的，慎重的，远视的】
观点升华：
In the real life, there is no one who can achieve remarkable success in whatever he does without persisitence.
举例说明：
For instance, as a fomous basketball player,Yao Ming can slam-dunk smartly because he does his utmost in pursuing his dreams and never gives his ideal up.
【slam-dunk:投篮】
第二个例子：（凑字数＋增强说服力）
Another example is Thomas Edison, a distinguished scientist, who attributes his success to endless pursuing goals.
（另一个例子就是托马斯·爱迪生，一个通过对目标无止境追求而成功的伟大科学家）
例子的结尾：
There are many other great figures of this sort in the history both at home and abroad.
【用figures而不是用people】
（历史上，古今中外都有许多这样伟大的人物）
第三段：
综上得结论
By the analysis and disscussion above, it can be seen that persistence is a prerequisite for success.
（通过以上得分析和讨论，我们可以看到成功的先决条件是坚持）
【prerequisite：先决条件，前提】
只有。。。才。。。
Only by making constant efforts and never stopping making progress can we expect a bright and promising future!
（只有通过不断的努力和绝不停止进步我们才能期待一个光明、希望的未来）
考研是自己选择的最愿意去走的道路，不管前面会遇到什么，考研的决心一旦作出就要义无反顾、勇往直前。