Unskilled in English is looked down on by people （composition）

1.单词正确
2.老师准确
3.老师多变
4.语法正确
5.语法准确多变
1.三段论
2.多用逻辑关系词
3.多用代词代替

选词不如选词组选词组不如选句子，选词尽量往长选

简单句：
被动：
parents should be respected by us.
parents需要替换
The elderly
Senior citizens
superiors

should需要替换
ought to
be supposed to
be obliged to

we us people需要替换
The public
Human beings
private individuals

children需要替换
kids 
offspring
descendants

我们需要替换
teenagers and youngsters
youngsters on campus
all children and adults
men and women in all walks

celebrities should not be pursued by teenagers and youngsters.
not需要替换
never
hardly
by no means
under no circumstances
fail to
被动放在第一段最后一句或者最后一段第一句，中心局。

environmental contamination is thought very serious by an increasing amount of experts and professors
think替换
hold
argue
contend
assume
presume
insist
maintain
assert
claim
be of the opinion that
have been convinced that
cling to the perspective that
very替换
pretty
quite
rather
distinctly
outstandingly
remarkably
exceedingly
especially
extraordinarily
enormously
serious替换
grave 
severe 
fearful
be of great severity
more and more people think that替换
more and more:increasingly 
in growing number

There exist/appear/seem/remain
be可以用所有的感官动词。用在第一段最后一句话或者第三段第一句话。
There appear many reasons explaining my idea.
there exist 替换 
第二段第一句话用there exist，或者是最后一句喊口号。
many替换
A sea of
A train of
A host of
A multitude of
immense amounts of
numerous
abundant
plentiful
reason替换
causes
factors
elements
explain替换
account for
lead to
give rise to
contribute to
be responsible for
idea替换
point
viewpoint
outlook
perspective

比较结构：
as as+which句型 不是很重要就是很严重
as as 用在第一段最后一句话或者第三段第一句话。
Liu is as beautiful as a red red rose,which manages to take away the breath of a train of children and adults.
Self-confidence is  as important as air and water/sunshine/breath/,which play a key role in the growth of all creatures.
Pollution is as fearful as earthquakes/AIDS/lung cancer/,which has threatened the health of patients or even taken their lives away.
be替换
look taste sound feel smell
prove
keep remain
become get
seem appear
beautiful替换
attractive
charming
elegant
graceful
gorgeous
important替换
vital
crucial
critical
fundamental
significant
essential
indispensable
play a key role in sth.
be of great importance

the 形同次副词比较级句子，the系统词比较级句子。用在第二段分析原因的时候使用。
the more the more 第二段分析原因的时候使用，但是要加非限定性定语从句。
the higher one ascends,the farther he will overlook.
the more frequently culture is exchanged,the more rapidly economy will advance.
the more optimistic all children and adults keep,the more easily they will achieve glories.
替换more and more people think that
比较结构as as 考的不是严重就是重要

并列句：
and but
and替换
likewise
similarly
equally
at the same time
in the meanwhile
but替换
conversely
by contrast
on the contrary
contrarily
unexpectedly
unfortunately
nevertheless

一幅图一个主题两个动作
一幅图两个主题守门员把自己想象的非常渺小，但是足球运动员把守门员想象的很高大。
描述图画的分类： 要么是一幅图，要么是三幅图。
在这幅图画中：
本句型推荐作文第一段，描述一幅图或者两幅图两个主题两个动作。but句型
描述图画用现在进行时，描述图表用一般过去时。一幅图两个动作but
In the picture,the goal-keeper is imagining himself as small as an ant.Conversely,the player is visualizing his rival exceedingly giant.

In the former picture,the flower in the greenhouse is growing healthily.Conversely,in the latter one,it is dying in the strom.

picture替换
cartoon
drawing
painting
caricature
photograph

not only but also 本句型推荐作文第二段。分析原因的时候使用。（第二段已经两个分析原因完成）
看到后面，这个还需要写成倒装。
只要是好的都是Chinese conventional virture.
Supporting the elderly keeps a Chinese conventional virture.
Supporting the elderly proves the responsibility of their descendants. 
Supporting the elderly not only keeps a Chinese conventional virture.Supporting the elderly but also proves the responsibility of their descendants. 

Raising pets not only cultivates kindness of kids but also brings a sea of delight for senior citizens.

从句：
本句型推荐作文第一段第一句的前面。用来描述图片和图表。
主语从句：可以写在任何一句的前面，用来拉长句子。
that you never fail to fascinate me is obvious.我爱你是显而易见的。
It that
我认为的替换 
It proves common knowledge that
It keeps my perspective that
It proves self-evident that
It has been found that
It seems beyond dispute that
It is universally acknowledged that
It is generally agreed that
It has been widely accepted that
What has been widely accepted is that

同位语：
所有的名词后面都可以增加一个同位语。
一个男人，一个疯狂的足球粉丝，写了个贝克汉姆，一个著名的运动员，的名字，一些人的称呼，在他的脸上，身体的一部分。
最多加两次同位语。可以不加。
本句型推荐第二段分析原因的时候使用（第三个分析原因的出现，第二段完成！）
它的模板是the evidence that +一个表示原因的简单句+ manifests that+文章的中心句。（像因为。。。所以。。。）
【The evidence that 】 she has a pair of big eyes 【manifests that】 she keeps a beauty.
【The evidence that】 immense amounts of girls have worn beautiful colorful skirts 【manifests that】 summer is around the corner.
The evidence that bright stars and pure moonlights fail to be detected manifests that environmental contamination is becoming increasingly grave.
The evidence that framers ( can make ) enable their offspring to share high-quality education manifests that an increasing amount of them (will work in the city) tend to work in cities.

定语非限定：
能充当定语：形容词、介词加名词、非谓语、介词短语、定语。
只要在作文中有名次都可以加一个定语成分。描述作文第一句都要加定于使其生动。所有的句子就可以描述完图画内容。

An american girl young as well as beautiful is wearing Chinese conventional costume which keeps popular in the north of China.

A boy young （and） as well as vigorous is rushing to the destination which becomes a new start.

描述图画万能定语：
好的：
as well as cut lovely little graceful elegant
confident energetic
enthusiastic passionate
optimistic active
aggressive ambitious
who looks distinctly
impressive to readers
坏的：
fat cruel ugly
negative
dispassioned
terrible
disgusting
disgraceful
who looks rather less impressive to readers

定语从句的满分表达：
万能非限制性定语可以放在任何陈述句的后面，但是要区分好坏。第二段分析原因的时候。
第二段一般分为三个原因。写作比较短的原因后面好。the more the more 比较短，所以加在这个后面。
He proves a lady-killer,which appears beyond dispute.
which 可以引导修饰前面整个句子的定语从句，和前面的句子用逗号隔开。
万能非限制性定语：
,which appears beyond dispute.
好坏均可句子：
这已经引起公众的普遍关注。
The more blindly celebrities are pursued by teenagers and youngsters,the more easily their study will be influenced,which provokes the public's widespread concern.

状语：副词、时间、地点、原因、方式、结果、目的、伴随、条件、转折、比较
只要句子中见到如下就为状语：
in ... manner/way
so ... that ...
in order to
although while
with
if
在任何地方都可以加状语。时间、地点、起因。但是第一段描述图画必须加状语。满分表达要求在句子中。（并列but和主语从句和定语从句和状语从句）
万能状语：in the center of the vivid picture.
Two disabled confident as well as ambitious,in the center of the vivid caricature,are assisting each other to run.
第二段描述原因的万能状语：可以加在比较短的原因旁边！最多两个！因为上面which已经有一个了！
描述原因的万能状语
as every one can see it
with the rapid advance of science and technology 
in our contemporary society
in the general routine of everyday living
！！！必须有这句：Although many people fail to pay attention to the problem.
many：A train of
people：all children and adults
fail to：by no means
pay attention to：focus on
problem：defect
我的必须有这句话：Although a train of all children and adults by no means focus on the defect.

pay attention to替换
pour attention into
place great emphasis on
attach great importance to
shed light on
focus on

problem替换
issue
subject
defect
matter
phenomenon

第二段的描述原因的万能状语
状语的满分表达：1，让步状语从句although 可以写在任何一个陈述句的旁边，进行弱转折。推荐第二段分析原因的时候使用。

surfing on the phone exerts great influence on the study of youngsters on campus although it enables the life to become more convenient.

cars made in china are become increasingly cheap although their quality fails to be high.

2，状语so...that...
只要文中有形容词或副词都可以用so that
I feel so delighted that I can not help shouting and jumping.
推荐写在：第一段的最后一句话。引出文章中心。或者是第三段的第一句话。
文章总结的时候使用。(被动、as...as、so...that总结句型)
万能状语：sth. proves so crucial/fearful that it should have been brought into the limelight.
看到后面，这个还需要写成倒装。

3，状语做插入语
I,loving you，will marry you.
The boy young as well as vigorous,smiling in the center of the vivid cariature, is rushing to the destination which becomes a new start.
本句型推荐使用第一段描述一幅图一个主题两个动作使用。
sb.，doing sth1.（次）+定语状语,is doing sth2(主)+定状
The hot pot not only delicious but also healthy,smoking in the center of the vivid caricature,is full of cultures from different places of the world.

特殊结构：
1.插入语：
in my judgment
as a matter of fact
to put it in anther way
2.双重否定强调
3.强调句型：
It is ... that... 强调除谓语
never feel to 强调谓语
is变时态
以上三个句型推荐使用第一段最后一句，第二段第一句，第三段第一句的时候。
第一段最后一句：
confidence,to my knowledge,is claimed striking crucial.
第二段第一句话：
It is a sea of elements that there exist to be responsible for my perspective.
第三段第一句话：
All in all,confidence never fails to plays a key role in our glories.

4.比喻：
sth. proves to 人 as solid foundation is to high skyscrapers.
推荐写在第一段的最后一句话，引出文章中心的时候使用。
或者是文章第二段引用名人名言。
或者是第三段第一句话。

4.排比
两个为排比
形容词排比：
small and peaceful
副词排比：
effectively,rapidly,actively
5.虚拟语气
只需要把if句子变成过去式，就为虚拟语气
考文章的第一段不一样，但是第二段一定一样的原因分析。所以本句型推荐使用第二段三个理由中的最后一个！而且是反面论证使用。或者是第三段第一句。
If you traveled to the next resort,I would close all my windows.

错误：因为every，所以必须改为单数！
If every teenager and youngster abandoned themselves to surfing on the internet,...they would be confronted with a dim and gloomy future.

If every teenager and youngster abandoned himselves to surfing on the internet,...he would be confronted with a dim and gloomy future.

If every youngster on campus failed to visit museums,he would by no means understand the history about our nation.
万能：If ...,he would be confronted with a dim and gloomy future.

it seems crucial that 两个采取措施，一个是父母，一个是自己

it seems crucial that senior citizens should inspire/educate their kids to take part in meaningful activites.

should inspire/educate their kids to have confidence.

推荐句型第三段的解决问题的时候使用。一般是两个措施，这个是一个措施。
但是提出解决方案一定要具体有操作性。

第二个措施：双重否定

Cannot have failed to =must

youngsters on campus/responsible citizens/children/volunteers cannot have failed to do sth.

两个措施，一个是父母，一个是自己。

6.倒装
not only but also 只需要把not only 提到前面，并变成疑问倒装，后面不变。
Not only does respecting parents keep a Chinese conventional virtue but also...不动。
so that 只需要把so 提前so+形容词副词，并把句子变成疑问句。
So kind is my ma that...不动。
万能状语：sth. proves so crucial/fearful that it should have been brought into the limelight.
So crucial/fearful does sth. prove that it should have been brought into the limelight.

完成所有的句子！！！

1.写作概述2.写作满分表达3.段落（写作连中文都写不了，只有第二段才会出现。就是写第二段。）
段落：1.定义和解释：文章的中心词+套词+which means that +简单句子的排比+when。
推荐第一个原因分析。

Pursuing superstars is a social popular trend which means that we buy their CDs,we listen to their songs and we go to their concerts when we are still young.
we we we 排比
Pursuing superstars 文章中心词
a social popular trend 一个严重的现象
which means that解释
when 中心词越来越。

一个严重的现象
1.A Chinese conventional virtue
2.A fatal worldwide issue
3.A social pervasive trend
4.A hot-debated subject

Supporting superiors is a Chinese conventional virtue which means that we buy gifts for them,we cook dinner for them and we wash clothes for them when they gradually become old.

2.引入名人名言，必须是作家，必须是小国家Malta + stating that+推荐句型：1.the more the more 2.as as 3.so that 4.虚拟语气

There,once,existed a writer who has gained great reputation in Japan stating that_____________
后面推荐句型：1.the more the more 2.as as 3.so that 4.虚拟语气

3.举个例子，1.举小例子：复数名词都可以举例子 2.大例子（for example）

I enjoy reading books such as the book of little prince,red and black and I have a dream.

可以举例子：
although so aboundant cases can support my simple view,the following one is most favorable.
For example,I,the other day,had a high fever.However,no familiers or friends took care of me.
At that moment,a teacher entered to give me some medicine.At last,I recovered.

for example,I,the other day,had a
However,
At that moment,
At last,

举例子需要注意的是：1.逻辑关系词的使用。2.举例通常用过去式。

3.使用自己确定的单词和语法。
4.数据列举：

In light of a proximate study/statistics/data/survey/investigation by the department of social science in Zhengzhou university,the majority of undergraduates have been convinced that__________中心句。

以上四种在中文都写不来的时候使用。

如果能用中文想到原因分析，推荐用以下句型来写。
1.the more the more
2.not only but also
3.the evidence that
4.although
5.if虚拟

从4+5，从9个里面选三个！即可完成第二段！P12
如果某个原因写的比较短，就用非限定或万能状语。
1.not only but also
2.although
3.数据列举

首先，其次，和最后
首先 First of all 
first and foremost
the main element for the problem is that 
what appears as the first reason is that
其次 besides
in addition
additionally
what is more
moreover
furthermore
最后 last but not least
at last
consequently
as a consequence
in the end

P13
第四：文章，排模板
4个模板：图画作文的模板
第一段：描述图画+寓意表达（3-4句）
1-2：用主语从句描述图画
一个主题两个动作：火锅
两个主题两个动作：加and或but
两幅图：加一个引出寓意的过渡语，寓意表达。
画图作文
第一段
第一二句话：用主语从句引出描述图画
what is obvious is that
一幅图一个主体两个动作
in the easy and simple cartoon,sb（定）,doing sth 次要动作（定、状）,is doing sth（主要动作）（定、状）
一幅图两个主题，两个动作
in the easy and simple cartoon,sb1（定）is doing sth1（定、状）.and/but sb2（定） is doing sth2（定、状）
两幅图
in the former picture，sb1（定）is doing sth1（定、状）；and/but in the latter one,sb2（定）is doing sth2（定、状）
第三句话：引出寓意的过渡语
Personally,what the picture conveys is far beyond a new fashion trend and carries cultural implication.
The message conveyed in the picture seems to be that
第四句话：寓意表达
We should do sth
We should never do sth
sth is very important
sth is very serious
再用插入语，双重否定，或者强调句。

第一段：
What has been widely accepted is that in the former cartoon,a boy sitting in a chair is saying"I have a sea of books".Conversely,in the latter one another one who is reading is claiming"I will read two book in a month".The message conveyed in the picture seems to be that it is books that be read more by teenagers and youngsters.

books should be read more by teenagers and youngsters.

第二段：原因阐述段
第二段总共四句话。第一句：引出原因分析的综述句。推荐句型（1.there be 2.还可以找找）（再用插入语，双重否定，或者强调句。）二三四句话具体的原因分析。首先，其次，最后。
The majority of people would agree that the issue has its deep roots as follows.

Personally,it is my belief that some reasons could account for such phenomenon.

第三段：总结段
总共四句话。第一句：总结句：推荐（被动，as...as，so...that，比喻，if）（再用插入语，双重否定，或者强调句。）二三句话：具体措施。首先，其次。for one thing,for another.on one hand,on the other.

公共书信：
第一段：自我介绍+写作目的
文中已经给出
To be frank,am writing the letter in order to ask you to help a canditid.
第二段：应用文，必须简单句。
The salary,《to begin with》,keeps 《so》 low 《that》 I fail to support my families.《In addition,it looks beyond dispute that》 I am outstandingly busy in my job.《At last》,the company proves too far from my home and/but/because/when/although/so I get up too early every morning.
第三段：落款。yours truly,题目要求人名。不要写日期！

私人书信：1称呼Dear 题目要求。
2正文 还是三段，第一段：问候语+再写作目的。
Are you busy recently?
I'm sorry I took so long to reply.
第二段：应用文，必须简单句。
第三段：最后祝福语+期待回信。
Thank you very much for your trust.
I wish you everything goes well.we await the favor of your early reply.

告示类：
1.必须要标题：Notice
2.正文：写作目的+具体论述
Dear every one,可以不写。
We are to+具体论述什么样的志愿者。
具体论述:就是应用文，必须简单句。并且1.2.3
3.欢迎加入+联系方式
Welcome to join us.
we are waiting for your coming.
if you intended to join us,please call us or email us at @yahoo.com. 
4.落款是单位名字

口语：有词汇量和基础。找鬼子练习或者演讲或者动画片，推功夫熊猫，僵尸新娘，狮子王。
应用文：
万能理由，英语很重要
I will take you to the English corner because the language is playing a key role in our communication.If you could study it well,you would improve yourself a lot.

说我自己的性格，也是万能理由。
In addition,I will take you to the playground for I am outgoing and sociable and my favorite is to play football,so I wish you will love it.

图表作文：
the growth of people is responsible for the decline of animals.
单词：
增加：increase rise grow;名词:on the rise,increase
提升：enhance improve enrich
加强：reinforce strength hone sharpen
减少：decrease fall drop reduce,go down,fall off
大幅度的：sharp dramatic marked remarkable
慢慢的：slow slight gradual
more and more:increasingly 
in growing number
第二段：原因分析。如同图画作文。
第三段：总结提出建议。如同图画作文。

口语：有词汇量和基础。找鬼子练习或者演讲或者动画片，推功夫熊猫，僵尸新娘，狮子王。
应用文：建议、申请、感谢、道歉、邀请、求助、咨询、告知。
万能理由，英语很重要
I will take you to the English Corner because the language is playing a key role in our communication.If you could study it well,you would improve yourself a lot.

I love English literature.I often attend the English Corner held on Friday night and I like to discuss around various topics in English with others.

I am eager to be one member of the English Club and improve my English further.

说我自己的性格，也是万能理由。
In addition,I will take you to the playground for I am outgoing and sociable and my favorite is to play football,so I wish you will love it.

申请
I am writing to you to apply for the membership of the English Club.
感激
I appreciate the opportunity of having worked here with you and my other colleagues.

建议
will you please prolong the time allowed for reading?In the daytime,a sea of the younsters are having class,so they can't come to the museum.
Can I suggest that...

背景
I learn that
I know that
I remember that
感激
make sincere thanks and gratitude to sb.

worthy and wealthy
pleasant and precious
safe and sound
colorful and wonderful
感激
those days,I just can't help thinking you.It was so kind of you to do sth.Besides,you did sth.which really moved me.
I never met a bitter person who was thankful. Or a thankful person who was bitter.

order---apology
抱歉
I am writing to express my heartfelt apology to you.

解释：
How I wish I had(not) done sht.!However,I have to...I have no choose ...but to change the plan because(due to)...
Hopefully,you would accept my apology and understand my situation.
I believe that if you were me,you would make the same decision.

邀请
I am writing to invite you to join the...
如下细节：
Here are several relevant details about this activity.
The activity will be in where on the when.

主题：
The theme of the activity is...
Not only will we do 1,but we will also do 2 and 3.
联系方式：
If you need any further info,please send an email to... or call me at ...

求助：
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