英文仿写练习012：Daily records posts inspire who

（写满100篇会怎样？）

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（原文）Mark Zuckerberg wants to build WeChat for the West

It will revolve around turning the social network’s messaging services into something akin to a Chinese mega-app.

IN HIS SPARE time Mark Zuckerberg likes to run. In 2016 Facebook’s boss pledged to cover 365 miles (587km) that year and, ever the overachiever, completed the challenge by July. He does not practise martial arts, but his almost discomfiting poise could lead you to mistake him for a master of something like aikido. That would be appropriate, for in his professional life Mr Zuckerberg is trying to turn his opponents’ energy against them.

When in early March he announced that Facebook would follow a “privacy-focused vision for social networking”, complete with encrypted messages that even the firm cannot peer into, observers interpreted this as a defensive move. Some discerned a belated response to outrage over privacy abuses on the world’s largest social network. Others saw the plan to knit together its instant-messaging services, chiefly Messenger and WhatsApp, as a way to make the company harder to break up, as some American politicians demand. Others still spied a ruse to escape liability for violent user content, now that Facebook would no longer be able to read any of it.

—— economist.com, May 2nd 2019

句型提取

It will revolve around ……
事情将围绕于…… 

something akin to……/ be akin to……
类似于

pledge to cover something
立flag要达成某事。后面达成可说：completed the challenge

……, ever the overachiever, ……
一直以来的优等生（超额完成者）

discomfiting poise
令人不安的沉着

That would be appropriate, for……（从句）
那样说也对，因为……

encrypted messages that even the firm cannot peer into
连公司都无法窥视的加密信息

observers interpreted this as a defensive move
观察家们把这解读为一种防御举措

Some discerned a belated response to outrage over privacy abuses on the world’s largest social network.
有人隐约觉得，对于愤怒指责这个世界上最大社交网络滥用隐私的声音，他给了一个迟到的回应。

Others still spied a ruse to escape liability for something
另一些人仍然发觉这是逃脱XX责任的诡计

（仿写）Daily records posts inspire who

More and more people like to share their daily records of some apps into WeChat moments. It revolves around all kinds of boot camps, such as English learning, financial knowledge learning, writing class, and so on. 

These apps, akin to boot camp, lead their users to step on a journey of study and courage them to pledge to complete the challenge of everyday tasks. Sometimes, the overachiever will be prized with incentive cashback.

Observers interpret this as a desire of showing off. Some discern a positive force to be stimulated by the thumbs-up and feedback of praise. These posts of daily records are called dajixue, which means a shot in the arm. This would be appropriate, for the users need more confidence and energy to go on.

But in the end, we could spy a ruse of propaganda of the developer. More attention the posts get in WeChat moments, more users and commercial value the app gets.

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