第一段
开头引出机器人在工业和生活中被重视,从而引出话题。
The development of science and technology makes the intelligent robots an important part in our life.
科技发展使智能机器人在我们生活中扮演了重要角色。
Some people believe that robots have the power to take the place of human beings in industry as well as people's daily lives.
一些人认为机器人有种在工业和生活中替代人类的能力。
Then what will happen to our work and life when we widely use robots?
当我们广泛使用机器人时,我们的工作和生活将会发生什么呢?
第二段
提出观点,举例加以论证
In my opinion,(1)work especially some complicated and dangerous work in industry will be operated by robots in the near future,
依我看,在工厂中尤其是一些复杂而危险的工作,在不久的将来将会被机器人操作。
which will improve the work efficiency and protect the safety of people .
它将会提升工作效率并保护工人健康。
(2)Housework such as cooking, washing and cleaning will be completed by robots ,
像做饭、洗衣服、打扫房间这样的家务活,将由机器人完成。
which will librate us from daily trifles and give us more time to do things we like .
它将让我们从日常琐事中解放出来并给我们更多时间做我们喜欢的事。
从反面论证
However, there still exist challenges if robots become the mainstream of the society.
然而,如果机器人成为社会的主流是仍然存在风险的。
(1)First, the less-skilled people will be unemployed as a result of the wide application of robots in industry.
首先,一些低技能的工人将会因机器人在工厂中的广泛使用而失业。
(2)Second we will get fatter and fatter because of robot doing housework instead of us.
其次机器人代替我们做家务将使我们越来越胖。
第三段
再次点题,做总结
To sum up,it can be easily conclouded that the use of robots is a double-aged sword.
总之,很容易看出机器人的使用是把双刃剑。
Thus ,when we enjoy the benefits that robots bring to us,
因此,当我们在享用机器人给我们带来的益处时,
we should also make measures to avoid the disadvantages.
我们也应该采取措施来避免不利之处。
4、
注意which、when等的用法,从句使用是加分点
注意转折词、借词短语,顺序短语的使用
如:in my opinion、however、first、second、to sum up 、thus的用法
5、熟悉套路的基础上最好能背下来。
其实梳理结构的过程,就是背诵的过程了,当结构理得相当不错的时候,这个套路是绝对够写文章的。