英文简历，求指正。 欢迎拍砖
以下是我英语简历中直接复制出来的 自我介绍和工作经验部分。里面有很多错误，希望大家帮忙指点下。最近忙到找工作，又在补专业至少又要弄英语实在无能为力了。 感谢一位给于指点朋友，即便是拍砖也欢迎：
SELF ASSESSMENT
Have positive work attitude and be willing and able to work diligently without supervision,independent and be able to work under a dynamic environment.Have coordination skills,teamwork spirit.Studious namture and dedication are my greatest strengths.
PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
Nanjing Xinrui Technology Co., Ltd 2007/09 – 2010/04
2007/11-2008/04 ：Taiwan-Taxi Booking Management System
Responsibility: Programmer
We designed a software to deal with the taxi-booking. Passenger send orders on my website or short message service.Our software will analyse the orders, and make sure to call a car. Of course each passenger can cancel his order anytime. The illegal user will be moved into blacklist.
The develop environment is M.S. visual stdio 2005,and the language is C#.WebService,socket,jquery and stored procedure had been used in the project.
The Customer Information Collection
Responsibility: Software Engineer asp.net(C#)
My job designed a program to make a collectionof information when customer use our software,and draw some statistical tables for customer service department.
In the project, there were many stored procedures and PL/SQL commands. It is very important that invoking the stored procedures or PL/SQL in this project.
2009/05-2010/03 ：Knowledge Home Of
Responsibility: Software Engineer asp.net(C#)
This project allow users share files or folders in their company or cooperation units.The mulitiplayer-edit(doc,pdf,txt limited) has been supported. The administrator can manage all files with out known about who is your staff or whatever he or she is out of work.The user can manage his files because of the full text search has been used in this project. We use soft dog to protect the files.
Beyondsoft Technology
2010/06-2010/09 ：The Electronic Authentication System
Responsibility: Software Engineer asp.net(C#)
Manage the rights of all users with USB-KEY.User send applications to our service(WCF),and the service deal properly with all kinds of applications.A USB-KEY will be written as identity authentication when one application was passed.
The develop environment is M.S. visual stdio 2008,and the language is C#. ADO.NET Entity Framework (EF),AciveX,Linq,WCF,WPF,jquery stored procedure(Oracle) and photoshop has been used in the project.