「今日所更话题，与freedom有关喔～～这种时候，呆在家里学习最好了」
Title:
Some people think that children nowadays have too much freedom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
审题
「译文」
有些人认为现在的孩子有太多的自由。同意还是不同意？
「来源」
20200118雅思真题Task 2
「分析」
“同意不同意类”大作文
1.写作时应选择立场，关于一边倒还是两边都论述，众说纷纭。其实，从小编的教学经验来看，无论是哪种写法，最核心的是要保证有理有据，论述充分。如果你无法充分论证你的正向观点，那么添加一个让步段反证一下也是很可取的。毕竟字数要求以及论证充分是核心。
2.无论是支撑段还是让步段的论述，都算主体段（body）部分，其内部也应该有一条清晰的脉络：主题句+支撑句+拓展句，而支撑句和拓展句的展开方式有很多，其中以举例、因果、假设、对比、类比运用最广。
以下是小编提供的sample，亲们可以认真研究下主体段的编排和不同的论证方式喔～～
——本文立场为“同意”，给出的是支撑段。
主体段1：父母忙于赚钱，无暇照顾
主题句：To begin with, the fact that parents are fully occupied with their work makes it possible for their kids to enjoy more freedom.
因果论证：In present society, the competition is becoming increasingly fierce and the expenses spent on a kid's education are on the rise, which means parents have to work harder to earn more money. Therefore, it is common to see that most parents cannot spare enough time to accompany their kids, who gradually become more independent in making choices.
「社会竞争大，教育费用高➡️父母努力工作➡️没时间陪孩子➡️孩子更加独立」
「词汇」
1.to begin with 首先
2.increasingly 越来越……，修饰形容词
3.be on the rise 增长
4.earn money 赚钱
5.spare 拨出时间，留出时间，腾出时间
6.accompany sb. 陪伴某人
主体段2：获取信息途径多，孩子有能力做决定
主题句：Additionally, kids nowadays are more capable of making decisions thanks to the various information sources.
对比论证+举例论证：In the past, when faced with a challenge or problem concerning their study or career, the kids have no choice but to turn to their parents and teachers for help. However, thanks to the booming science and technology, kids today are provided with more alternatives, for instance, they can surf the Internet or consult other professionals via a wide range of social platforms such as Facebook.
「过去：学习或工作上有问题，只能找爸妈或老师」
「现在：科技的发展带来了更多的选择，上网或在社交平台上咨询专业人士都可以」
「词汇」
1.additionally 而且，此外
2.be capable of doing sth. 有能力做某事
3.(be) faced with 面临，面对
4.concerning 关于
5.have no choice but to do sth. 除……之外别无选择
6.turn to sb. for help 向某人求助
7.thanks to 由于，幸亏
8.booming 飞速发展的
9.a wide range of 各种各样的