《不能承受的生命之轻》P16-1

After that, they all desired to sleep happily together. I also wanted to say, their aid of making love was not chase fast-sense, for both were sleepy later. Especially her, he couldn't sleep. If one person must be lonely in a single room, she would not close her eyes all night.In his arms, whatever excited, she could fall asleep slowly. He made up stories with her, told stories in a soft voice, or said that something don't important. The voice was boring, again and again, but interesting, gave her comfort.In Teleisha'sbrain, these words became a dim ghost, brought her dream.

Fall asleep, she also took his hand like the first night: grasping his finesse, finger or ankle. When he wanted to leave but didn't cause to wake up, he would do some tricks. He drew out his fingers from her hand, it always awoke from dim, because when she fell asleep, she also carefully stayed by his side.To be quiet, he took a thing to her hand, then she grasped it, like it was a part of his body.

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总结：这个片段写了托马斯和特蕾莎在一起的细节，说明了他们之间的暧昧和感情。

对于介词的使用需要注意，单词的拼写，基本的语法关系要注意。

生命本就是在水中漂流的旅行，有顺有逆，对于生命的本色，我们不断探索，不断描绘，用自己的重力来承载水的深浅，因此，我们应该做好自己的一方领土，画好自己的生命地图。

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