第二段的写法1

第一句的写法:提出论点句

中心对象(主题)→判断:重要/有害   P58、P63 背诵

例1 The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with being independent, when it comes to  the individual growth and success.(for the personal achivement.)

例2 A clear message is revealed in this picture that the merit of independence seems to underlie almost all human successes, be they national or individual.(无论是A还是B)

We must finish this journey, be it rough or smooth.(2013T1最后一段倒数2句)

例3 The invaluable(非常有价值的)quality of being independent, as the author of this picture seems to suggest, is part and parcel to the personal growth and its absense will definitely lead to one's poor performance and lower achievement, be they in live or in career.

例4 The cartoon demonstrated that our lives have been profoundly influenced by the wide use of smart devices and the mobile Internet has been an indispensable part of our daily life.

例5 用于社会性质的话题

The picture shows that the mutual trust was, is and remains to be an integral part in the sound growth of our society.

有害:品质/道德缺失;环境污染;过度使用/依赖;缺乏沟通

例1 The picture  warns us that the absence of social morality and the lack of environmental protection awareness pose the serious threat to the development of society and the will-being of citizens.  07

例2 The picture shows that the lack of confidence is in large measure detrimental to one's growth and success, especially in this competitive modern era.

例3 The overuse of smart devices and the overload of information, as the picture illustrates, are not only harmful but also damaging for the individual growth and success.

背诵+造句!

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