simon英语范文 discussion（教育类）

这个范文是很标准的四段式13句写作，有很强的学习价值。主要学习四个方面：词汇、句型、文章布局、观点。我在b站上发了一次，怕有的人只用csdn，在这里再发一次。建议的学习方法为，先看范文，再看看能不能根据我粗糙的中文大纲写出和simon差不多的论文。

Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful
career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.
第一段（2句）：介绍+观点

离开学校以后，青少年面临着找工作或者继续学习的艰难选择。（状语从句和指代）（介绍）
When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or
continue their education.

虽然离开学校后直接直接找工作有一些好处，我认为还是去学校更好。（让步状语从句）（观点）
While there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school, I would argue
that it is better to go to college or university.

第二段（5句）：主旨句+两个观点及其解释

离开学校后马上工作的选择之所以吸引人有几个原因（The option to）(主旨句)
The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several reasons.

许多年轻人想要尽早挣钱$\Rightarrow$这样，他们能更独立，并且能负担自己的房子或者开始一个家庭(观点一+解释)
Many young people want to start earning money as soon as possible.In this way, they can
become independent, and they will be able to afford their own house or start a family.

关于他们的事业，决定找工作的而不是继续学习的年轻人也许能成长更快(In terms of/ rather than) $\Rightarrow$ 他们有机会获得真实的经历并且学习到和他们选择的职业相关的实用技巧$\Rightarrow$ 这也许会导致升职和一个成功的事业(观点二+解释+进一步解释)
In terms of their career, young people who decide to find work, rather than continue their
studies, may progress more quickly.They will have the chance to gain real experience and learn
practical skills related to their chosen profession. This may lead to promotions and a successful
career.\

第三段（5句）：主旨句+两个理由和解释

然而，我认为学生继续他们的学业更有利（it is adj to do sth）（主旨句）
On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies.

首先，许多职业都需要资格证书$\Rightarrow$比如，没有相应的证书是不可能成为医生、老师或者律师的$\Rightarrow$
于是，大学毕业生能获得更多的工作机会，并且他们大概率会比拥有更少资质的人获得更多的薪水。（观点一+举例+解释）
Firstly, academic qualifications are required in many professions. For example, it is
impossible to become a doctor, teacher or lawyer without having the relevant degree.
As a result, university graduates have access to more and better job opportunities, and they
tend to earn higher salaries than whose with fewer qualifications.

第二，求职市场的竞争十分激烈，有时候甚至几百个人应聘一个公司的的一个岗位$\Rightarrow$没有大学资质的年轻人将不能竞争。（观点二现象+解释）
Secondely, the job market is becoming increasingly competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds
of applicants for one position in a company. Young people who do not have qualifications from a
university or college will not be able to compete.

第四段：总结

基于以上原因，对我来说学生如果继续他们的学业将会在事业上更为成功。
For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that students are more likely to be successful
in their careers if they continue their studies beyond school level.