甘比英文拓展写作-an eventful moment-鯨鯨菰

动态描述

The silence of the African Savannah is broken by the hoof beat of an antelope. The poor creature is running for its life.

A moment ago a cheetah was coming towards the creature when it was feeding. Arrived the next second, a chase between the hunter and the prey began.

修改:coming→approaching

Cheetahs are the fastest animals on land - it takes only 3 seconds for them to catch up with a car going on a Texas highway. The antelope is no slow animal. Gradually and resolutely, the distance between the two is getting smaller. The hunter is waiting for the excellent time and the prey is also pursuing an escape way.

这段的前两句话来自安妮老师,捂脸~

And its now! Cheetah is mounting its massive paws towards its prey on the back and is ready to spell doom with its fangs. Despite the close call, the sheep just won't cave. It makes a crash-stop and turns instead. Unprepared for this sudden movement, the beast found its fangs buried in mere empty air.

这段的后三句话来自Jo,因为把那个瞬间写的太好了所以忍不住用了~

Will the hunter complete its conquest? Things are to be continued...

修改:原来的结尾太草率了~但是暂时自己还不会改~

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