1.He was thirty-six, his youth had passed like a screaming eagle,leaving him old and disillusioned.
他三十六岁了，青春像一路鸣叫的鹰，早已一闪而过，留给他的是衰老和幻灭。
disillusioned /ˌdɪsɪˈluːʒnd/~by/with...对...不在抱有幻想
句子中是明喻，翻译时也是明喻，''一闪而过'' 是评论，放在后面翻译。
2.When Chou En-lai's door opened ,they saw a slender man of more than average height with gleaming eyes and a face so striking that it bordered on the beautiful.
周恩来的房门打开时，他们看见一个身材消瘦，比普通人略高一点的人，两眼炯炯有神，面貌很引人注意，称得上清秀。
slender 修饰男人，翻译成消瘦，偏正短语gleaming eyes 译成主谓结构：eyes are gleaming. border on the beautiful 清秀，一般指男人。border on...v.接壤，相邻
3.Yet it was a manly face, serious and intelligent, and Chu judged him to be in his middle twenties.
而那是一张男子汉的面孔，严肃而聪颖，朱德看他大概二十五六岁。
yet转折含义微弱，译为 ：而，one's middle twenties：二十岁的中间部分--二十五六岁。
4.Chou was a quiet and thoughtful man,even a little shy as he welcomed his visitors,urged them to be seated and to tell how he could help him.
周恩来举止优雅，待人体贴，招呼他们坐下，在询问他们有何见教的，甚至还有些腼腆。
第一个从句中有同指现象，还有两个形容词的翻译，as 在这里表示时间状语，后面he和him要指代具体，译为:有何见教
5.Ignoring the chair offered him,Chu Teh
stood squarely before this youth more than ten years his junior and in a level voice told him who he was,what he had done in the past,how he had fled from Yunnan,talked with Sun Yat-sen,been repulsed by Chen Tu-hsiu in Shanghai,and had come to Europe to find a new way of life for himself and a new revolutionary road for China.
朱德顾不得拉过来的椅子，端端正正的站在这个比他年轻十多岁的青年人面前，用平稳的语调，说明自己的身份和经历：他怎样逃出云南，怎样会见孙中山，怎样在上海遭到陈独秀的拒绝，怎样为了寻找自己的新生活方式和中国革命的新道路而来到欧洲。
句首：现在分词和过去分词注意译法，后句中who he was 和what he had in the past 处理为：身份和经历；been repulsed 被动语态译为：遭到，repulsed
时态处理恰到好处，体现一般过去时和过去完成时。/rɪˈpʌls/拒绝，击退v.
squarely/ˈskweəli/adv.直角地；诚实地；正好；干脆地；正当地
stand suqarely端端正正地站着
stand squarely 端端正正地站着
不是复制粘帖，一个个码字，体现心流状态和自己的理解。