读后续写（高一学生的续写）

卢家思版, 219

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The youngest son was shot and wasn't very handsome and blond, but his feature was different from his two brothers----He was very kind and honest. The farmer didn't give up trying. He also took a basket of pears to the youngest son, even though he thought his son would fail. On the road to the princess, the youngest son met the beggar, The beggar said the same thing to him, the youngest son gave all the pears to the beggar without thinking. The beggar was so surprised and said,”you don't need them.”The son said with smile,”you need them more.”the beggar was moved and told him something mysterious.

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When the youngest son opened his basket before the princess,everyone was in shock what perfect pears they were. the princess was interested in them. After she ate the pairs, something mysterious happened, the princess began to breath again. She felt something strange filled in her body. She was healthy again, everyone cheered her up. The son was so happy because he could marry the princess, but things took a sharp turning. The princess regretted to marry with him who was short and wasn't handsome. So the king gave him a lot of money and drove him away . What a pity about it !

苑志昂版, 200

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The youngest son was short and wasn’t very handsome or blond,but he was kind. On the way to the princess,the youngest son also met a dwarf. The dwarf said to the son,”I’m very hungry.Could you help me?” ”Of course,I have a basket of pears. You can have them.”the boy said. The dwarf had those pears greatly fast. In less than one minute,the huge basket just had a small pear. Finally, the dwarf said,”You helped me. I will also help you in the future.”Then a small pear became a special pear,but the son knew nothing about it.

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When the youngest son opened his basket before the princess,the princess shouted,”This is a pear as that one in my dream.”The basket only had a pear, but the pear shined with bright golden light. When the princess had this pear, magical things happened. The princess felt nothing uncomfortable, and the illness disappeared. The king was also satisfied because of the farmer’s youngest son’s kind heart. Finally, the farmer’s youngest son married the princess. Their life became happier and happier.

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The youngest son was short and wasn't very handsome or blond，but he was very kind and considerate.He wanted to help the princess，although he didn't want to marry her.On the road to the princess he also met Elijah disguised as a beggar with ugly scars all over his face.He felt sorry for the ugly beggar，and offered half of the pears to the man，saying，“I pray these pears are good for you.”Elijah took them and replied，“Amen！So shall it be good for you.”

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When the youngest son opened his basket before the princess，she asked why it was only half filled with pears.He told her about offering half the basket of pears to the beggar whose face was covered with scars.The princess began to cry.The youngest son apologized for making her cry，but to his surprise she suddenly hugged him.They spent the whole day talking and the princess felt better and better.By the next day she was feeling great.A month later she told the youngest son she wanted to marry him，and that was what she did.